| "Cursed" Reviews/Comments [ 228 ] |
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Reviewed By: SnowFlakeAlchemist(offline) On: November 16, 2006 10:51 EST
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So the baby is human... That should be interesting for Sess to deal with. Poor youkai, he isn't going to know what hit him. None of the inu tricks work when raising a human. Hehehe. Oh well, at least he wants to keep the baby and won't make her give it up. It shows that he is maturing enough to realize that she wikk get what she wants in the long run. Smat youkai.
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Reviewed By: Lamb [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2006 18:25 EST
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just a quick review (I hope) of the most recent chapter- I didn't think that it was 'stilted' and I quite enjoyed it. anyway that's it for now(sorry, gotta run) but I hope your hip keeps feeling good, and I wish you luck with the puppy and as always, can't wait for more updates! :D
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2006 17:04 EST
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Great chapter! I'll keep my fingers crossed for the couple and the new addition(s?).~ B reading U(soon)!
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Reviewed By: Sola25 On: November 15, 2006 14:25 EST
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Good couple of chapters...but I am becoming restless with TAkana's restlessness (or I would be, at least, being right smack in the middle of youkai court, lmao) Girl needs to get out, meet more people, lol....on with the plot?
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Reviewed By: mrskcgoodman [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2006 09:30 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A fully human child is a new idea but I wonder what will happen when time goes by and they both age? Will Sess be alone again? Does the child have some type of reverse effects of it's father being a demon, for example, on the full moon will he be a full youkai?
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Title: Amazing
Reviewed By: emeraldoni [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2006 01:34 EST
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Your hip was hurt? Oh, I hope its better now. Running isnt fun (for some) but its still good for you and I hope you are able to get back to it. Great chapter. I cant wait to see Sesshoumaru and Takana's conversation about the baby. Baby... That is so cool. And it's full human? I guess that makes sense... Well, I cant wait until the next chapter! ~emeraldoni
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Reviewed By: White Luna [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2006 19:10 EST
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Lol, true that, true that. I love your stories very much. I never miss your neew chapter! Anyway, I loved this most recent one, it was very happy. It put me in a good mood. :3. Ty
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2006 17:06 EST
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Great chapter, but I've come to expect nothing less from you!!!! Thanks for the complement! I always think my kids think I'm crazy! The only ones on my side are the twins; they think everything I do is funny! (They all seem to laugh at me all the time ^__~) Thanks for the new chapter and I look forward to reading more of Takana and Sesshomaru! ~B reading U! P.S. Little Taka is trying to crawl! She can pull herself a couple of inches arcoss her blanket and Tum-Tum is has taken to throwing things -__-'!
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Reviewed By: DYquem [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2006 01:02 EST
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I liked this chapter. It was very cute, and a pleasant little interlude between the stiffness and tension of the recent chapters. I know happy endings arent so much your style, but I truly hope you let Takana forgive him for this and fall in love with the Taiyouki the way she did when he was human.
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Reviewed By: DragongirlCV [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2006 19:20 EST
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great chapter! hope your feeling better now!
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Reviewed By: SnowFlakeAlchemist(offline) On: November 13, 2006 11:33 EST
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You've done it again with another wonderful chappie! It's good to see that Tanaka is finally realizing why he did what he did to her and is beginning to realize that he loves her regardless. Yeah!!!! Sorry to hear about the pup though... Well I sure you'll figure it out. Ususally if you have another dog in the house it'll potty train the new one. Hope your hip feels better, because I am really enjoying the fact that you're updating on a fairly regular basis.
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Reviewed By: White Luna [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2006 22:45 EST
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Do I sound like I'm complaining? Hell, you've read my stories >>;. You know I understand XD. I enjoy it. By the way, get better soon.
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2006 19:14 EST
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Great chapter as always, and height means nothing. It's all about the talent, skill, and an awesomely wicked imagination ^__~!! I look forward to the next chapter~ B reading U
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Reviewed By: Vickey On: November 11, 2006 17:06 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How this chapter flowed. Sweet and melodious; just delicious. My how I have missed this piece. Thanks for the update.
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Reviewed By: Cochrann [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2006 21:57 EST
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I'm glad Takana is trying to start aneu with sesshoumaru, I think he deserves it...that was a really nice scene between the two of them by the way =)
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