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Reviewed By: Lamb [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2006 23:42 EDT
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hey, so sorry I didn't get a chance to review your last chapter, I just didn't have the oppurtunity, and so this review will be a combo for both chapters :) lol, ok first: naughty naughty sesshomaru, taking advantage of a poor, naked, unconscious woman like that...lol, while I enjoyed your last chapter, I'm not entirely sure how I felt about how it got initiated, nor Takana's reactions. I'm just really not sure if I think that they were accurate, or if I think that perhaps they should be tweaked a little bit....hmm...anyway, I still enjoyed reading hte chapter, and don't neccisarily take what I said to heart. As for the newest chapter, very well done! I think it was just exactly (or close enough) to how it would have actually gone, were this real and not just a creation of your mind. excited and a little trepiditious (is that a word??) for the next few chapters, and, of course, the big day 360.... can't wait for next chapter :) -Lamb
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Reviewed By: White Luna(offline) On: June 15, 2006 22:16 EDT
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*smiles softly* Thanks for your review. It was nice. Anyway, I love how you protray her though... she's not some badass, but she's strong. She's got strength in her spirit, and with a sort of soft feminity. She's like a mother. I've taken such a wonderful liking to her... she almost reminds me of myself, or who I wish I could be.
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Reviewed By: angelsfalltearfully [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2006 14:36 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Awesome chapter, the morning after could have been quite akward but I am glad that it wasn't. I love seeing how prideful he is on things, and how he simply decided to claim her without even telling her that, that was just priceless. I can't wait to find out what you have in store for us next.
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Reviewed By: too lazy to sign in On: June 15, 2006 14:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait 'til he tells her who he is. I don't think she'd believe him without seeing it for herself, but I still think he should tell her before he transforms back into a youkai. - Cochrann
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Reviewed By: SnowFlakeAlchemist [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2006 11:52 EDT
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AWWWWWWW!!!!! That was a great chappie!!!! HE FINALLY RELIZES THAT ALL HUMANS AREN"T BAD!!!! YEA! He finally shows emoition With memories! Update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: too lazy to sign in On: June 13, 2006 00:22 EDT
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wow...you are a great hentei writer! update soon -Cochrann
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Reviewed By: AngelsRebellion_lo On: June 12, 2006 22:34 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow. Can you say yummy? ^.^
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Reviewed By: angelsfalltearfully [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2006 22:20 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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That was amazing you know how much I love my smutty goodness, and yet he was still so sweet and had this sincerenes about him, and I like that a lot. The fact that he knows he could have overpowered her and still took it slow and was gentle with her was great. Ive taken to this story, and get so excited getting the notification in my inbox. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: White Luna(offline) On: June 12, 2006 22:11 EDT
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I was surprised. She did very well! But then again, she cares for him very much. I hope the two do well...
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2006 19:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WWWWWWWWWWWWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was AWESOME! Don't worry I read this one to myself. I'm trying to get posted, I'm still working on my story line I want to have it done before it posts. Again AWESOME chapter!~B reading U!
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Reviewed By: entropy9 ( not signed in) On: June 12, 2006 19:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHEEEEEEEEEEEEE! lemony fresh! I'm so excited to read this just as a fic and not beta'ing it...it was very hot, without being smutty, although, if anyone could pull off smutty and still be taken seriously as a writer, well i know it's you! so let's see...sexshoumaru is admiting to himself how he feels about takana. and it's so sweet that he cares for her enough to take things slow. i love how he is a new character everytime you work with him, not repetitive or predictable at all...i'm drooling in anticipation of when this relationship moves forward. almost there with the ratings by the way (i'm really enjoying this fic now)
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Reviewed By: Lamb (not signed in) On: June 11, 2006 14:42 EDT
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tsk tsk...naughty brower....a lovely set up for a lemon that would be, eh? lol, awww, isn't that adoable? Sesshomaru has a heart... oOoOoO can't wait for the next chapter, which I'm sure will be juicy, lemon or no, when she wakes up to find herself naked and wrapped in the equally naked arms of sesshomaru....hmm...that is, unless of course, you have her being dreadfully ill and not waking up for several days.....hmm..I'm not sure I like that idea as much, it's not as much fun....;)
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Reviewed By: White Luna(offline) On: June 11, 2006 01:13 EDT
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She's...gonna have a scare when she wakes up, ain't she?
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Reviewed By: AngelsRebellion_lo On: June 10, 2006 21:21 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my my my
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Reviewed By: SnowFlakeAlchemist [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2006 20:51 EDT
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Wow this is a really good story! I love the fact that Sess is so confused1 Update soon!!!!
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