| "Purity 7: Avouchment" Reviews/Comments [ 891 ] |
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Title: adamilej
Reviewed By: dewrose [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2008 12:22 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am beginning to like this story. I like your portrayal of Griffin and Gunnar. I have a question for you. I always wanted to ask you what you mean by **NO UNSOLICITED CRITIQUES ACCEPTED**?? Does that mean you don't like or want any critical comments about your story from your readers? Perhaps you could explain it fully in a footnote. Anyway, great chapter and thanks for writing the story. J
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Reviewed By: Chase65 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2008 23:53 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! Griffin admitted the 'M' word!! Even knowing what her immediate family is like! I love it!!
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Title: I LOURVE Samantha and Griffin! KAWAII!!!!!!! OOOOOOOH, I DETEST Alastair!!!
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2008 18:15 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG with the boobies! Izzy is crazy (then again, I guess that includes Belle since she's the one who told her). Between the introspections of my favorite bear and the bald comments he utters--daughter of darkness and Jezebel are PRICELESS and HELLAFUNNY no matter how often I read the Izzy names, Sue--and the line "She's a good girl, and you're trying to pervert her."... **laughs till I rupture something** Now, onto Alastair...I KNEW he was coming up soon! Is it odd that I almost feel sorry for the informant, Murphy? That Alastair is, to me, Naraku in theory. Well, minus the miasma, tentacles and wierd boney armor. He seems like one of those evil masterminds that just sit back schemining while he has others do his dirty work. If he has no use for them, the disposes of them. I REALLY hope he gets his in P7 but my random theorizing has me seeing him in P8. Oh well, we shall see. Great chappie as usual. My final Thought: Did Griffin say...MATE?
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Reviewed By: free_freeme_free [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2008 21:42 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Courage! What a great title for this chapter. Finally Griffin has the courage to admitt that bell is his mate. Now, on to that romatic kiss. Hey, I know they have already made love, but now that he admitts that bell is his mate, it will so much more romantic.
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Reviewed By: free_freeme_free [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2008 21:41 EST
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Courage! What a great title for this chapter. Finally Griffin has the courage to admitt that bell is his mate. Now, on to that romatic kiss. Hey, I know they have already made love, but now that he admitts that bell is his mate, it will so much more romantic.
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2008 20:16 EST
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It's about time that Griffin admitted that! Let the gate to the road of relationships be opened! Well… there are still things in the way, but at least he admits it now! Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2008 23:40 EST
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yay! he finally admitts that he's her mate! now i hope he'll actually SAY it to her! update really really soon!
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2008 19:30 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome job!! I happy that he finally admitted that she was his mate!! Update soon pleaase and keep up the excellent work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2008 18:41 EST
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Aw, he finally admitted it!! Yay!!! Now, I wonder if he's going to kick Alastair's butt when he comes to try to make him with the research. Or, whoever Alastair sends in his place as his messenger.
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Reviewed By: GalacticFire [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2008 18:04 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Griffin, my heart breaks in all sorts of ways for him. I've taken to re-reading the other Purity stories and I just fall in love with them all over again. Thanks for being such a beautiful writer Sueric!!
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Reviewed By: Starr Stealer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2008 12:36 EST
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So he finally sees the truth that everyone else had known!!! I loved this chapter and I really can't wait to see what drama unfolds next!
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Reviewed By: Tarzan14 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2008 01:50 EST
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he finally admitted it aloud!! sweet!
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Title: 63
Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2008 17:43 EST
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I wonder how long it'll take for Izzy's family to frustrate him enough to lock himself into the basement for a day? Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2008 03:01 EST
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im ready for griffin to open up to isabella!!! update soon! : )
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2008 14:19 EST
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Yay! Gunnar's getting better! *sniggers* ah, that cloakroom story sounds wothy of it's own oneshot... Now, dissapearing youkai? Something to do with Alastair Gregory, i'd wager. Twists upon twists... Poor Griffin. Hvaing his house overrun by these nutjobs :P
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