| "Purity 7: Avouchment" Reviews/Comments [ 891 ] |
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Reviewed By: Starr Stealer [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2007 14:54 EST
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Well... That was very interesting... As usual, I can't wait to see what happens next!
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Reviewed By: Chase65 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2007 14:28 EST
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Poor Griffin! All ready to give in then denied! Kichiro is a total baka! A scent changing tablet and you don't think your mate, or family, will have a problem will it?? Has his doggie brain gone on vacation? I hope Bitty does not suffer any other ill effects of the serum. Think of all the, er, moments should could be missing with her bear if she keeps falling asleep! LOL!! Thanks for a great chapter!
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Title: Thank you
Reviewed By: smallflower [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2007 21:42 EST
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After a thoroughly crappy day (I got let go at work) I see your chapter update in my inbox... which just made my day much brighter. Thank you and I hope you update again soon!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2007 18:07 EST
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Poor Griffin and his final thought, she already has gotten to him. Am I right to assume that the serum Isabelle took made or snore or was she doing that on purpose? Lol.
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Reviewed By: Deceptress [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2007 16:59 EST
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'Et tu' is french for 'And you?' Not that I am saying your translation is wrong. It isnt. It's just that it also means 'and you' in french, which is what I initially translated it as when I read it. Being canadian will do that to you.
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2007 16:06 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter!! I'm glad that we got to see some more of Kichiro and Belle!! I wonder if Bitty testing that stuff on herself will have any side effects?! (did that make sense? lol) Update soon please and keep up the excellent work!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2007 14:05 EST
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Thank you so much for updating! LOL I was lost without your stories. Isabelle is sooo bad bothering griffin like that her hand ever so slightly rubbing an area LOL. I love Isabelle's nickname Baby belle is so cute. Great Chap as always. By the way is your family member that was in the accident okay or at least doing better?
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Title: FINALLY
Reviewed By: Sunekai [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2007 12:21 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally, after so long, anywho....i feel so bad for griffin.....i was gonna do it! then isabelle had to fall asleep...mebbie its the injection she put thats making her wierd.....hmm....anywho...i loved this chappie! cants wait for the next....its so cute! XD
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2007 11:15 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Griffin. He just doesn't get a break, does he? And poor Kich. I can so see Bella-chan skitting around the room, wrinkling her nose at him. So cute! I can't wait to see where you take it from here. I'm gonna go read the new one now. Thanks for putting it up!
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2007 09:46 EST
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Poor Griffin :P Poor Kichiro, for that matter. For a second, I was wondering why Samantha was home again. Then I remembered that this is 7, not 8. When you started writing Purity, did you ever actually plan for it to go this far, or did it just end up growing this way? Well, either way, I'm glad it did. Keep up the writing- it feels like forever between chapters these days!
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Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inuy [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2007 09:26 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was so cute and funny. It was...It was really nice and laid back and funny, I know I already mentioned that, but it really brought a smile to my face. Thanks for your continued brillance!!
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Title: **cyber glomps Sue** Just reread a couple older chapters and smiled from ear to ear!
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2007 12:59 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I lourved Griffin's interactions with the kids and the Griffin/Ben/Cain chapters where so heart-wrenching. I love GIN! Sue, you are BAD! You HEAR me? The girl's got skills, ladies and germs! I'm so glad I joined your forum! Guys, if you haven't joined...JOIN! BELIEVE me, you'll be glad you did! ESPECIALLY if you're an impatient reader like me! Plus there're some really cool people in the forum and chats w/Sue are friggin' FUNNY!
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2007 13:46 EDT
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awww...that was 2 cute! update soon cuz i cant wait any longer! : )
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Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2007 19:23 EDT
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I didn't see and couldn't find what kind of dog Froofie/Charlie is - other than big, slobbery, and has a lumpy head - LOL - so what kind of dog is he?
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Title: yay!
Reviewed By: Sunekai [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2007 17:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
im loving the way ur making this story turn....climax soon!...>
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