| "Purity 7: Avouchment" Reviews/Comments [ 891 ] |
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Reviewed By: mrskcgoodman [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2007 09:27 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it took him long enough.
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Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inuy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2007 09:24 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this wa absolutely beautiful and in my opinion Griffin was more than justfied, poor baby. I'm so glad the she's healing him. wonderful chapter and I'll pray for you brother. Take care of your family, I'll be waiting even if it takes months!!
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2007 08:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another wonderful chapter. I'm sorry to hear about what happened to your brother. I hope he gets well soon.
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2007 22:42 EDT
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I'm glad that you finally remembered the cat and even put in a little scene about it (speaking of… that cat needs named!). Izzie's getting closer about the 'who' of Griffin and despite how much he rejects the fact that he's her mate, they are becoming more 'mate-like' as the chapters go on. Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: Starr Stealer [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2007 15:05 EDT
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Yay! Another chapter! I can't wait for the next one!
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Title: Me sho happyyyyy! Kirby Dance! Cha Cha Slide! **walks like an Egyptian** ROFL!
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2007 11:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
New chappie! Thankies, Sue! I just knew poor Izzy was gonna go all 'Mother Hen' on Froofie...err...Charlie. But, it's to be expected, I guess. I would've been the same way. I'm so glad that Griffin's getting into the flow of sleeping with Izzy and he's melting, slowly, into the 'norm' of being mates--though I believe it's more instinctual and subconscious than anything. His youkai voice never failes to tickle me and I could almost see his eyes roll as he considered Izzy's family...ROFL! I hope they leave Izzy alone...wishful thinking, mostly; especially considering that not ALL of ther translations were broken down, yet. There's more drama ahead, huh, Sue? Can't WAIT! **grabs popcorn and Pepsi and gets comfy** Oh, by the way, I LOURVE your forum! Everyone's so nice and friendly and funny and helpful and your game section keeps me in stitches! I'm glad I joined it! It's really easy to navigate, once you get the gist of it, and you are one of the few forum administrators that I've EVER actually chatted with and got the impression that it was a joy, rather than some necessary interaction. Thanks for all the encouragment and advice you gave me about my story...I changed my mind and I WILL publish it soon ('Butterflies & The Net')--my first chappie is gonna be dedicated to you (cuz I've read all your A/Ns about folks getting to you and you considering giving up--and I could tell they upset you and it looked like they hurt your feelings, sometimes, too--but you never did give up! I'm glad you didn't because the Purity Series is the best on-going storyline I've been into since the Superman Movies! No joke! Can't wait for your next chapter! Lataz!
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2007 23:58 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is wonderful!!! i cant wait to figure out the whole story begind Griffin : ) plz update really really really soon....like tomorrow : ) j/k great job and update soon!
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Reviewed By: Ayame87 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2007 22:04 EDT
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I had just re-read Purity I and was starting to wonder why Isabelle couldn't talk to Charlie. Amazingly enough you cleared that up in this chapter. But now I have another question. In Purity I, Dammit cam with a name, no one named her. So what is the deal with Charlie/Froofie? Just curious, I love the banter between Isabelle and Griffin on the subject. Anyhow, the chapter was great as always. Thank you for sharing it with us.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2007 18:25 EDT
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Ahaha, I love Isabelle's final thought! Man, I hope those guys don't hack into that program and find out her password.
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Title: so good
Reviewed By: Sunekai [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2007 14:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!....so good....whens the next chapter....i feel sorry for Griffin...what happened in his past that haunts him so...?......i hope he's alright...and Gunner is so overprotective with his cousin...its sweet....Isabelle is such a caring character...i love it all....hurry with t he next chapter!...T-T
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Reviewed By: mrskcgoodman [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2007 11:13 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW I loved this chapter. Its getting close to more background info. I also like seeing Isabelle emotions. After reading so much fanfics with impassive demon lords...its nice to see her show emotions.
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2007 09:14 EDT
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Welocme back! You hadn't written for ages- I was starting to miss hearing about Isabelle and Griffin. I really like Gunnar, too- can't wait for his story... can't wait to hear what he finds out about Griffin's story, too. I was right, wasn't I? Griffin was Kyoshi. And the dead village headman in his nightmare- could that have been Miroku? You never really stated what happened to Sango and Miroku... It's nice to hear a bit about them. P.S., I really loved Metamorphosis, because I'm a major SesshoMaru/Kagura fan, and that was some of the best-written SK fluff I've ever read. It's so hard to fins stories about them, because people always seem to pair SesshoMaru up with Kagome or Rin, and rarely Kagura. Will you ever write another SesshoMaru/Kagura story? I hope so! luvs ya!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2007 07:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHEEEE!!!!! poor Charlie.....
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2007 01:39 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter!! Poor Bitty, I can't begin to imagine what its like being able to tell what your dogs thinking, but not being able to do anything about it! Update soon please and keep up the excellent work!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: mermaidtail989 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2007 19:33 EDT
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This is a really good story I love it! Thank you very much! Can't wait to read more
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