| "Purity 7: Avouchment" Reviews/Comments [ 891 ] |
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2007 11:36 EST
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Great chapter! Please update soon!
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Title: SNOW!
Reviewed By: GalacticFire [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2007 01:38 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awe Sueric! Awesome chapter as always, update soon! Thanks so much for a chapter with snow in it. Where I'm at there was NO snow this year. =( Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inu On: January 01, 2007 22:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn right, that was a mistake!! LOL...Sorry it took me so long to review, I've been in the middle of hells back with only dial up and I absolutely refused to even attempt getting on online. Anyway I really loved this chapter. It gives us much more insight into the Pooh Bear's reason for being the way he is. I love the way that he's playing cat and mouse with her. In your other fics, I can always kind of tell...well not tell that the main couple will be together, but in this one, I just don't know. If what Griffin did was really that bad and it effected her family in some kind of way, I don't see how they can be together, but then again, what the heart wants...it wants... No matter how painful. Awesome job as always, and it was really a pleasure coming home after a 10 hour drive and finding a brand spanking new chapter from you. What a damn good way to start a new year, eh Sue! LOL. Happy New Year!!
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Reviewed By: Perrin33 On: December 30, 2006 18:02 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Chapter. So now Isabelle now knows Griffin's old name.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2006 16:19 EST
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Hmm....I wonder if Maria and Belle will meet in person soon; I like Maria, she seems like a very nice person. Hmm....trying to lie about your nightmares, Griffin? That ain't going to work! Lol.
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Reviewed By: kamaria On: December 29, 2006 23:04 EST
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griffin is lickable. keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: December 29, 2006 22:27 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I cannot wait to read the chapter where Griffin might let Isabelle inside his armor repeling closeness. Sigh . . . your so good at describing the scenes and getting your points across in your chapters. It amazes me that you can put this kind of quality out and not take a long time to do it. Your really are at the top of the talented author list in this ficdom. Thanks for sharing with us who love to read your work. Cynbad146
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Reviewed By: charity - nicole On: December 29, 2006 22:00 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww... merry x-mas to u too.. and man was that snowball scene romantic.... i could actually imagine that .... just not here in california... noo.. it just won't snow here will it? .. oh well still your stories are so realistic and just overly great.. i wish i could write like you some day.. i'm still working on something.. and my sis is helping... actually our main characters name is jezebel... should change that... i will after.. wouldn't want to take anything away from your wonderful stories.. well anyway happy new year and keep up the good work... =]
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2006 21:15 EST
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And it was going so well for that little time also! It just occurred to me… shouldn't Griffin hibernate? He is a bear (youkai) after all… then again, bears hibernate to conserve energy during the winter season because there's not enough food to eat. So that would make the point of Griffin hibernating moot, wouldn't it? Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2006 14:26 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. The card from Maria was a nice twist! I thought the snow fight was really cute. I can't wait for more, so update soon please!!!! ^_^
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Title: so adorable
Reviewed By: princessAly2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2006 11:16 EST
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Hi, your snowball fight and capture was so adorable i can really visulize that happening in the real world, well maybe not in texas but in the winter wonderlands that are the northern states. Chao.. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Perrin33 On: December 27, 2006 14:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2006 21:19 EST
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It's been a while but between work and school i've been very busy. But I think this is one of the best stories you've ever written and honestly, i can't wait to read the next Chapter. please hurry with the update I'm on the edge of my seat.
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2006 20:21 EST
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At least they're finally getting somewhere in their relationship. There were several times when a simple 'sorry' could have possibly helped, but Isabelle isn't exactly one to use those words and actually mean it. That night both of them learned something from the other at least a little. Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2006 03:00 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Griffin, I'm suprised he hasn't died of embarrasment yet!! LOL I thought the ending to this chapter was really sweet....at least he won't lie about his pain anymore! Update soon please because I can't wait for more!! ^_^
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