| "Purity 7: Avouchment" Reviews/Comments [ 891 ] |
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2006 21:40 EST
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Aw, poor Griffin!! But Isabelle is right, there are a lot of girls who would love to have a pooh bear like Griffin!!!!! And the one that wants him the most is standing right in front of him lol.
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Reviewed By: charity nicole On: December 22, 2006 15:34 EST
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oh i forgot to say Font Color MERRY CHRISTMAS AND HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!
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Reviewed By: Kaida18 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2006 15:34 EST
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Now that was entertaining. Very, very entertaining. I can't recall how many times I've forced one of my friends to do something by sitting on him, or throwing my golden retriever on his stomach or other valuable parts. Go, Bitty Belle!!!
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Reviewed By: charity nicole On: December 22, 2006 15:32 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg... i laughed out loud when i read this and my sister and brother were looking at me like i was on crack or something.. i luv seeing these two together.. they make such a cute and funny couple... i tried to get my sister to read but she didn't want me to ruin it for her... she's reading purity ... 5 i think... yea.. the one with gavin and Jilli... well we love your stories and we wish you would continue writing... the anticipation between chpt.'s drive me crazy .. but to everyone else i already am... oh well... yea.. so .. keep up the good work .. i really enjoy it...
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2006 13:34 EST
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Great chapter! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inu On: December 22, 2006 10:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
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I'm really enjoying this couple, very much so. They're so cute together that it just makes me want to coo. I actually lauged out loud with this chapter. Nice work and thanks for updating before I leave this afternoon. You great, even thouhg I know you didn't do it for me, but I'm delusional, so I'll choose to believe that anyway. Merry Xmas and Happy New Year!!!
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Reviewed By: Lianne On: December 22, 2006 08:40 EST
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OOOOO.....that was really really good ^_^. I'm really curious to see what happens next :P
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Reviewed By: Rawben.. On: December 22, 2006 03:23 EST
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oh, good timing! i was bout to go to sleep! but yey! a new chapter! "do you have a penis?"!!! LMAO!! poor griffin! he's just a big virginal bear! thank gawd he has izzy. ;)
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Reviewed By: Rawben... On: December 22, 2006 02:40 EST
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aww! poor griffin! he's just too cute. ;) reminds me of that grumpy care bear (http://www.care-bears.com/CareBears/html/about/grumpy.html). and i love that he's so grouchy! hilarious! too bad he's not fit enough to rough someone up. cause i want more growling from him. ::purrrrr:: great chapter(s)!!
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2006 09:26 EST
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Great chapter! It surprised me when Gunnar showed up. I seriously thought that he was gonna start something with Griffin, thank god Isabelle showed up. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: happilyjaded On: December 21, 2006 00:39 EST
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I'm sorry to say, but I have to disagree, Wawali. Characters are the most interesting and well defined when they are human, and that means having both flaws and virtues. It means making mistakes, and having moments they might want to apologize for later. Not that I'm necisarily saying Gunnar will or should apologize. I see a lot of his grandfather in him, especially in this moment, which I thought added to his depth. Well done chapter! It was intense and definately left me wanting more!
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Reviewed By: wawali On: December 20, 2006 22:27 EST
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Gunnar is seriosly becoming dislikeable, is it si weong that I want him to get his ass beat? You know to humble him a bit.
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Reviewed By: Awesome from cutechick18 On: December 20, 2006 22:23 EST
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I really like this chapter. It was left at a big cliffie but that is the point right? To keep us on our toes so much that we crack our toenails! LoL! Anyways I really cant wait to see what happens next in the next chapter between Pooh Bear and Isabelle. :) This is from cutechick18. I would have put it in the nickname slot, but it wouldnt let me so here I am!
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2006 22:08 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. Sometimes I really get annoyed at Gunnar. I know he cares about her, but he's a little to much like Inyasha and Sesshomaru!! LOL I hope Griffin is okay and I hope he doesn't freak out when he realizes that Bitty is human!! She must really love him to risk her secret like she did! Update soon please because I can't wait for more!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2006 20:56 EST
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I'm glad Isabelle found him. Man, Inuyasha sure has passed on that stubborn streak very nicely onto his kids and grandkids lol.
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