| "Purity 7: Avouchment" Reviews/Comments [ 891 ] |
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Reviewed By: Inusbabe [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2006 19:42 EST
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what does Griffin think about Isabelle when she is human?
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Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inuy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2006 19:15 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Maybe I'm crazy but this entier chapter played like a movie for me. I could actually feel the tention between Gunnar and Griffin, man, if they were to bump heads I really think Gunnar would get his ass handed to him. And that's hard for me to say, since Gunnar is my fav, being that he not mated as of yet. My heart really aches for Griffin. I don't know what he did, but he deserves just a little slice...piece...a moment of absolute happiness. Brilliantly done, and I'll consider this my second Birthday Present....LOL. Thanks for doing what you do Sue!! Have a Merry xmas and a happy new year, in advance in case your not able to update and I'm not near a computer. Awesome job once again.
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Reviewed By: Lianne On: December 20, 2006 17:28 EST
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Wow...that was a really great chapter. I loved how Izzy stood up to Gunnar. And I'm even more curious about Griffin's past now... ^_^ Anyway...great chapter, and i can't wait to read the next one
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Reviewed By: Perrin33 On: December 20, 2006 17:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this chapter. Hope you can update soon.
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Reviewed By: happilyjaded On: December 20, 2006 14:20 EST
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I really enjoyed this chapter, and have been looking forward to it! It seems that we're on the precipice of something major - I'm excited! Great Job!
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2006 13:05 EST
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Great chapter! Please update soon!
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: Mirahbella On: December 20, 2006 11:12 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really great chapter. Your writing really makes a boring week more fun. Can't wait to see what happens next. It will make thing interesting when news gets back to Griffin that someone from Zelig's office was looking into him.
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Reviewed By: Lianne On: December 19, 2006 22:21 EST
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WOOT - awesome chapter...and I can't wait for the next one to come out...hopefully soon ^_^
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2006 16:54 EST
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Hmm...I'm wondering how Myra is connected to Attean. Is he married to her sister or some other kind of family member or something along those lines?
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Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inu On: December 19, 2006 16:17 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You updated on my birthday, yay! Happy Birthday to me!! Awesome chapter by the way, just freaking awesome!!
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Reviewed By: Kaida18 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2006 16:15 EST
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Once again, a great chapter. I was going through withdrawals for a bit there, Sueric! Anyway, I'm guessing that Kioshi is Griffin, even though I know you'll never tell me. But I am worried about the nightmares he has, and if he is Kioshi, I'm really worried about Sango and Miroku and the demon slayers village. But in Purity 1, Shippou said they were all right, and they lived out their lives. Ugh, useless worrying. Put me out of my misery, Sueric. Is there something over-the-counter or like a Purity-Meth-Clinic I can go to to get over my Purity addiction? And I can't wait for Evan's story. It's gonna be sooooo gooooood. A bit like Heaven, wouldn't you say? *evil grin*
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Reviewed By: NyteAngelOfDarkness7 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2006 15:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey I just realized that Griffin reminds me of 'The Beast' from 'Beauty and the Beast'. Dont knwo if that is what u wanted to go for but it makes me wanna run up and hug him. lol Merry Christmas everyone . -Angel
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2006 15:45 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! I thought it was cute how Bitty decorated everything with a Poohish theme! I can't wait for more, so update soon please!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Sweetprincess 17 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2006 16:42 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great chapter. I can't wait for you to post another one. Anyway, I couldn't find any of your teaser anymore on the sueric's fNFICTION. Did \you upload anymore of the teasers?
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Title: chapter 15
Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2006 18:51 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have got to pity griffin for having to put up with his Jezebel, especially during this season. From my perspective, I can definitely see where Griffin is coming in with not really wanting to put up a lot of decorations. Especially the day after turkey day! Gah, that's frightening! We wait until we get our first present before we put up the tree and such… on the other hand, my grandma doesn't put her tree away EVER!! Keep up the good work, dark
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