| "Purity 7: Avouchment" Reviews/Comments [ 891 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kaida18 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2006 01:00 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Seriously, Sueric, updates are like Heaven. I totally yelped in excitement when I saw you'd posted a new chapter. If you hadn't gotten me addicted... again... I might be able to stop checking for a couple of months or until you finished the story so I wouldn't be so anxiety-ridden while waiting. I'm aggravating my boyfriend with the obsessive clicky-click checking. I love your stories. I wish I could finish one of mine. *sigh*
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Reviewed By: evloner On: December 12, 2006 23:22 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Shopping the day after thanksgiving! Now that's my type of gal. I love shopping the day after thanksgiving, the sales, the people, the sales, the long lines, seriously I just love it. I'm glad there are others like me. Great story update soon.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2006 20:20 EST
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What is Isabelle thinking? Shopping on a Black Friday? YIKES! Mom did that once and she said NEVER AGAIN! lol. Hmm....I wonder if Griffin's friend will get some dirt on that Eaton guy lol.
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2006 16:50 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I can't wait to see what she talks him in to buying!! ^_^ Update soon please because I can't wait for more!!! Oh, and by the way, Merry Christmas!!!! (It's still a little early, but I'll forget if I don't say it now!) LOL
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Reviewed By: Rawben [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2006 12:59 EST
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aww! adorable! i'm glad she's forcing him to enjoy himself. ;) it seem's he's forgot how...
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2006 10:08 EST
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Great chapter! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inuy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2006 09:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I didn't mean to make you cry, but I meant every word of what I said and I still do. I really enjoy this fic. Griffin has really grown on me as have all your other characters ( I can't wait to meet Collin) ) (Winks). I hope whatever Griffin did won't be that awful that it can't be forgiven, but I've noticed that the men of purity crucify themselves mercilessly, for the smallest things. Ex: Toga Kissing that girl in the Garage... Inuy not wishing to have children... Ryo...well ryo deserved to be crucified...lol... Back to what I was saying, I REALLY hope Griffin didn't do what my head keeps telling me he did. I don't know...I just feel so much empathy for him, that even if it's not with bitty belle, I still want to see him happy. I...I think he deserves it, don't you? Great writing Sue, and thanks for fitting us into your busy life!!
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Title: finally! i'm caught up!
Reviewed By: Rawben [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2006 15:58 EST
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aww!! poor griffin! ...hehe... so many bear jokes... papa bear. ;) and omg! does he have a fight scene? cause that'd be hot. he's huge! how swoon-worthy would that be? so can he transform into a bear? a big huge bear? w/ an adorable lil puffy tail?? :D i
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Title: Chapter 14
Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2006 17:57 EST
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It is sweet that Isabelle is going to do that for Griffin. Even though she doesn't see it, she's such a caring individual like the rest of the family matriarchs. Each is unique in the way that she worms and wiggles her way into her mate's (or future mate) every loving moment. Keep up the good work, Dark
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Reviewed By: evloner On: December 09, 2006 01:48 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You got me wondering what happened in Griffiths past. I went back and re-read the first chapter and I'm guessing the young happy little boy with flowers placed in his hair by his little sister was griffit. Am I right? Now in this chapter Griffiths seems to have gone wild and possibly killed someone closed to him or witnessed someone closed to him die. Update as soon as you can. I can wait to you shed some light on griffith's past.
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Reviewed By: mrskcgoodman [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2006 17:49 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK I have to know wha tis going on with his past? Did he kill someone in her family? Or maybe he killed his mate or lover or child?? I have to know the suspence is KILLIN me!!!! *breathes heavily* ok now that I am calm I cant wait to find out about his past and what's up Dr. Avia. I dont trust him...I have a feeling that he is going to Jilli. OK That was all.
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Reviewed By: ladida [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2006 17:19 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay a new chapter! I am very intrigued by this story, the mystery of griffins past is just itching at me. i can't wait to find out. i love how every one calls isabelle bitty! its so cute! i like the little details like that, that you add into the story, it really makes it more real. Gavvie is soooo cute! he got flustered! lol jillie and gavvie really make a great couple though. hmmmm... i wonder when gunnar is gonna find himself a girl. okay, just thought i'd stop by and tell you that the story is awesomse! you're a great writer. =)thanks for the updates!
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2006 13:08 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. Now, I am really starting to wonder what happened to Griffin in the past. That was sweet of Bitty to decide to have Thanksgiving with Griffin! Now, lets see what happens with it. ^_^ Update soon please because I can't wait for more!!!
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2006 11:45 EST
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Great chapter! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inuy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2006 10:13 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's been a while since I've left a heartfelt and not a gropie based review. So here goes... I find myself trying to compare myself to you as I write my fics, but you, Sueric really have something special it's something that I can only hope and pray to eventually achieve or maybe...maybe it's something that you were born with. I don't know really, I just know that you are spectacular at what you do. The way you're able to pull these characters out of mid air and give them such a life that even after the chapter is done...or the stories are finished you leave us readers still daydreaming..thinking about them as if they were real people. The way you're able to suck me in and make it so that I can't see past your words when I'm reading them... And on sleepless nights as I toss and turn in bed I find myself wondering over into the world of Purity and replaying the scences in my head as if it was a movie that I've seen... I know this is silly, but when I'm driving home from work or sitting in gridlock I find myself wondering what if...what if there was some alternate universe, where all theses characters actually lived? Well that would be just freaking brilliant, wouldn't it? When I die and I meet our maker, when he askes me what things I appreciated most while here on earth, I assure you one of those things will be the amazing writings of a faceless gifted woman that goes by the name of Sueric. I don't know Sue, now that I thinking about it, maybe aiming to be like you is like trying to stop the sun from rising or shooing the clouds away on a rainy day, or maybe just maybe as long as I have someone like you to compare myself to that means I'll keep improving and bettering myself. Whatever it is, I'm glad I found you. I don't want you to look at this reveiw as if I'm sucking up, or as a payment for a new chapter, because it's not. I just wanted you to know that sometimes something as small and insignificant as fanfiction can really have a big effect of someone's ordinary little life. Keep doing what you do and I'll keep reading. Simonkal of Inuy
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