| "Violation of Honor" Reviews/Comments [ 497 ] |
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Reviewed By: PitaBread [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2008 11:56 PDT
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I can't help but to laugh. There was nothing funny about this chapter, but for some reason, I'm chuckling to myself. Maybe it's because you have achieved the impossible with someone like me: I will explain. I was so anxiously awaiting this chapter - when Sesshoumaru and Kagome would be reunited, and Oda and Iku would get their dues. But, your knack for suspense has gotten the best of me, and now, instead of looking forward to the obvious lemon in the next chapter, I'm waiting to see what will happen to MIROKU!!! That's just ABSURD! I should be dying for the smut, not to see if he lives, which I know he will. I know you won't abandon our favorite demon-slayer. And of course, Kagome has to go find the kids they stashed. Anyhow, this was a really great chapter. I'm sad that it's almost at an end, but they all have to end sometime, right? LOL We can't all go on for 10 years, like Rumiko has. So until next time, Happy Writing! (and happy Lemon-Making!!!)
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2008 03:34 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yea!!!!!!!!!!!!! and another wonderful chapter!!!!
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Title: Chapter 34
Reviewed By: WiccanMethuselah [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2008 00:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another EXCELLENT and spellbinding chapter added on to an EXCELLENT and spellbinding story. Thank you so much for sharing this masterpiece with all of us!! And, CONGRATULATIONS on your placings in the 1st Quarter IYFG awards. Frankly, I felt that this story deserved FAR more, but such is life, eh? I'm looking forward, eagerly, to the next exciting installment, as well as to seeing this most deserving story nominated for yet more awards in the future!! :D ~~Wiccan~~
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2008 00:20 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!!!! **happy dance** uh... ok I feel a bit bad about doing a happy dance after that battle, but I feel that one should celebrate the good things. And Miroku could be brought back anyhow... Hell, if Sessh wanted to, he could bring the whole mountain back a hundred at a time. At least someone to take care of the surviving children... I kinda doubt that's going to happen. I think Kagome should purify Iku's dick off. I hope Shin finds happiness before it's all said and done. Maybe the miko Kagome is/was training... He sounds totally hot in the new humaniod form... except for his attitude, but maybe a feudal age woman would expect that sort of jackassery. I'll be so sad if Miroku says dead... did he even die, or was he seemingly on his way there? hmm...
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Title: I can't get no (ba na na) satisFACTion!
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2008 23:25 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been possesed by a youkai, now I'm all horny, how long before I see some satisfation???
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Reviewed By: snowbirdyoukai [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2008 21:37 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think the red dust in Miroku's system will keep death from taking him. I think they will find him alive. Maybe not completely healed yet. I could be wrong, but if Sango can heal from a life threatening injury then why should not Miroku. I am so glad Sesshoumaru and Kagome are finally together without something or someone separating them. His confession of love for her was so touching and magnificent. For him to set aside his pride and humble himself like that, showed just how deep his love for her is. Also, thank goodness Inuyasha finally made an adult decision regarding Kagome.
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Reviewed By: FluffyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2008 21:12 PDT
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very good chapter. i was on the edge of my seat the whole time. the whole 'lover' bit was hilarious, poor kagome, and your ending a/n had me cracking up. very good story. very good indeed. FL
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Title: OH MY GODS!!!
Reviewed By: Kagome357 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2008 20:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MAKE HIM SUFFER!! MAKE CHICKENBOY SUFFER SOME MORE!! THEN MAKE HIM SUFFER AGAIN!! I HOPE YOU CHAIN HIM TO SESS' DUNGEON FOREVER SO SESS CAN TORTURE HIM WHENEVER HE FEELS LIKE IT! Okay I'm sorry for shouting but I absolutely loved the passionate way you showed Sess' cruelty towards the stinking chicken! Poor Miroku...I hope they get to him in time to save him. the way you had Sess express his love for Kagome was brilliant and breathtaking and the last part of them declaring their love...tear...it was bootiful!! Damn that Oda! I love how Sess made him piss his pants and let him know Kagome was his! Now on to the lemon chapter and (sad face) end of all things that is your wonderful story. I don't often rate but I'm gonna do it today!
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Reviewed By: Dragon Dagger [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2008 19:52 PDT
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You're drawing out Iku's torment for all of us who are pissed off at him for ass raping our dear beloved puppy. *smirk* and don't I want to give you a great big kiss for it LOL! There is one torment I'd wish on him. too bad I can't describe it here, not enough characters for me to go into the graphic detail of such a nasty treatment that would be, ironicaly, suited to our soon to be dearly departed bird. I look forward to your next chapter! and thanks for making Oda piss himself. about time that odius little man got what was comming to him! DD
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Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2008 06:34 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I remember this...I new it was coming as soon as miroku mentioned taking Kagome to the warrior munks to hide...bloodly brillent working this into the story I hope f@#k bird gets his soon, cause his stupid butt is really starting to pev me off...
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Title: What a kick in the Shin!
Reviewed By: TAJE [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2008 09:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First let me congratulate you for this your story! Now let me say that I feel for Shin!:( So much he must suffer. Now that he can blow fire, shucks look out. But then seems everyone going through some form of torment. Poor Miroku, he's is between a rock and a hard place. Truly an enjoyable story even if it's dark. That darn Iku, well I can't wait to see what becomes of him and Nobaga. Peace!
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Reviewed By: inuyasha-coolness [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2008 21:15 PDT
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this chapter took 4ever. i almost thought u had abandoned it. i wouldhave cried.// but on the other foot, this chapter rocked! ithere were so many parts where i was just like,"wow that was hilarious." like the part where u said shin felt so "put in his place" i was like omg. wow. seshomaru dominates everything. even the big mouth shin. lol. and did u know that the episode of inuyasha came on 2day with oda nobunaga's cusin? kagome asked 4 an aoutograph cuz she thought he was the actual oda nobunaga. then the kid was like, "yes i know him and hes a big IDIOT!" referring 2 oda. all i kept thinking of while watching the episode was this story, which rocks my face off!
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: rage2velvet [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2008 08:50 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for this installment. It was worth the wait as always. It was also nice and very long which was good reading. The twist about Shin was entertaining. Thanks again!
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Reviewed By: TheSorrowfulVampress [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2008 19:48 PDT
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This is a great fanfic. I love it. Please continue soon, as there aren't enough dark fics about (Me: slightly sado-masochistic...)
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Title: Ah, the experience of reading
Reviewed By: Doberbitch [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2008 15:46 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I finally got caught on chapters 31-33! I didn't realize how long it's been since I last read it. I am in summer school trying to advance on some classes for my master's degree. Rinseternalsoul and Risa, these chapters were awesome. Thank you!! My friends talked about them and I felt like I had already read them, but Violation of Honor is an experience that word of mouth just doesn't measure up. Shin is a total hunk! Hey, Shin baby! He is going to make L'Oreal, Miss Clariol, and Garnier jealous. Super Congratulations on your awards; they are well deserve!!~~~~~~~~Doberbitch
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