| "Violation of Honor" Reviews/Comments [ 497 ] |
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Reviewed By: Dragon Dagger [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2008 10:25 PDT
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ooo you are evil. that was a wild spot to leav the chapter off at. *grins* However you have managed to write yet another incredible chapter filled with enough descriptive passages that I could see what was happening to the characters. However. I can see that Shin's interest in Rin is going to cause problems. Especially when Shippou cares for her as well. Hope it doesn't come down to a fight. not sure Rin would like that. She's a bit like a young Kagome in your story for her to appreciate those two fighting over her like a couple of bull elephant seals.
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Title: Nice
Reviewed By: rage2velvet [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2008 09:42 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My only complaint? That I have to wait for the next part. If I don't, I won't get to see Iku get his comeuppance--I can't wait to see what happens when his is caught by Sesshoumaru. And of course the HEA with Kagome. Another tight chapter. Can't wait to see what Shin looks like as human.
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Reviewed By: Maddie50 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2008 09:12 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sesshoumaru is a wonder to "watch" eliminating his enemies with perfection. Hopefully, that is the last of the on site bad guys and his estate can return to rebuilding. Iku gives me the willies. Ha! That is figuratively speaking. He is so creepy. The guy really gets off on rape. Kagome seems safe for the moment, but he obviously has some scheme in mind to lure her out of the barrier. Sango hopefully has a flesh wound and an increased ability to heal at a faster rate. Miroku's abilities are very interesting. Jean
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Reviewed By: inuyasha-coolness [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2008 02:27 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sigh. they always end too soon. i enjoyed this chapter too much and now that its ended i am depressed. i wonder how long i'll have to wait this time. oh well, its worth it.
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Reviewed By: PitaBread [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2008 23:44 PDT
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So much going on! I'm so glad you showed us a little of what each group/character is going through. Right now, I'm most concerned about the Kagome/Iku arc. I wonder what Iku has up his sleeve... I;m sure Sango will be fine - more than likely, Miroku will heal her simself with his newfound powers. Speaking of which, what's going on with him?! Is Kagome going to feel this way as well? Only you hold the key; until the next chapter... Happy writing!
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Reviewed By: inuyasha-coolness [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2008 23:05 PDT
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OH MY GOD! I REALLY SCREAMED WHEN I SAW THIS UPDATE!!! i have been checking EVERY DAY! and i havent even read it yet... why am i still here...? IM OFF TO READ!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2008 23:04 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonders... is Shin naked??????????????? Rin, this is the male body! Iku's plan is going to be REALLY bad isn't it... the priests look nice...
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Reviewed By: WiccanMethuselah [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2008 21:39 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The masterwork continues! This most recent chapter is every bit as glorious and delicious as each preceding one - thank you so VERY much for a wonderful bit of reading enjoyment!! I can hardly wait to see what you have in store for all our intrepid characters next! :D ~~Wiccan~~
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Reviewed By: deathbydishwater On: April 14, 2008 11:43 PDT
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Hey i'm not i big fan of sess/kag but you have made a beleiver outta me! I love your fic to bits!! Keep up the superb work :)
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Reviewed By: inuyasha-coolness [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2008 07:43 PDT
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wow. guess what. i just found out about the "Unsettled" chapter. beacause of stupid reasons. but i just read it and GOSH. I FEEL LIKE GROWLING OR SOMETHING! the friggin citadel of all things to be called away for. and mirokus powers were hilarious for that one part where he was all "i can feel you" i laughed so hard. i love this story man.
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Reviewed By: Doberbitch [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2008 08:19 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Truly a wonderful chapter! Inuyasha's comment to Miroku was hilarious! I laughed also with Sesshoumaru's comment to Uchuu about holding his hand! Speaking of which, it was very befitting and suspenseful when they returned to the castle. Very happy that Uchuu got his tail back. My professor wanted me to convey to you how he marvels at the fact that you constantly keep a lot of the characters within the theme of the story. Yes, he still reads it and is enjoying it. Thank you for all your hard work, time and thought you put in to your story. Sorry I haven't posted in a while, but I have been reading. I also can't forget to thank Risa as well. Until next time. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Doberbitch
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: rage2velvet [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2008 21:20 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Superb. Awesome. Kick ass. I've been gone awhile and finally caught up to read the latest chapters. Wonderful. Worth the wait. Most important first. Condolences for your recent loss. Congrats! This story so deserves to win. I can happily await for the next update b/c it will be more than worth it. I love all your OCs and you have the best villains. Irredeemable to the last. Heh, heh. I knew 'ol Iku was lurking somewhere, the scum. And lastly, I ADORED the use of the Aztec gods/goddess. I am a reader/lover of myths/legends/lore involving various pantheons. The explanation about the coca leaves! Nice touch! Brilliant detail to connect the story. Marvelous.Thanks for all your hardwork.
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Reviewed By: CapriaStar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2008 11:49 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so in love with this story. You are an inspiring writer and insightful as well. I can't wait to see what is around the next bend in the story and how everyone deals with their new obstacles. I'm actually enjoying the wait the writing and story are so good.
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Title: Letting go hurts
Reviewed By: TAJE [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2008 04:18 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh goodness. I do feel for Sesshomaru. I'm glad he destroyed that cursed castle. I'm intrigued by this power that Miroku has and happy Saya's got her sight. Will Rin also possess such power? Or even Sango? Nice element you've added. And that scumbag Iku, Well I know you won't disappoint when it comes to him. I'll just have to wait and find out. Enjoying this much! Peace!
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Reviewed By: PitaBread [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2008 18:05 PDT
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Ah, I was wondering.... I had an idea that Sesshoumaru and Kagome would not be allowed to be together just yet. You know... I kinda liked Saya better when she was blind. I mean, I'm happy for her and all, but it gave Inuyasha someone to take special attention to, someone to care for. Oh well. It's a good thing Iku didn't know who Rin was! If he had captured her... man, he'd have a furious taiyoukai AND a devilish kitsune baying at his heels... This was a lovely chapter. I adored the scene where Kagome touched Sesshoumaru's face. And I can't believe Inuyasha is still being stubborn! He's like, the new Kouga! LOL But I think Kagome will put him in his place. ;o) Well, I'm sad to see this almost finished, but I also can't wait to see SessKag in action again (you owe us at least one more lemon! lol). Until next chapter, happy writing!
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