| "Violation of Honor" Reviews/Comments [ 497 ] |
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Reviewed By: child_of_the_moon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2008 12:05 PDT
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Oh, my. Can't wait for the next chapter. This story has really evolved since you first started writing it. I'm very glad that you have kept it going. I was afraid for a while there that you would discontinue it, but thankfully you didn't. I hope you can update soon, and I'll be sure to read it as soon as you do update it!
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Title: Avid Reader
Reviewed By: KawaiiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2008 02:32 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm mad that Shin's upset with his appearance. With the way you described him, he sounds handsome. This is completely at odds with his obtrusive behavior and biased outlook on life. You should have made him a ugly outside as he is inside. ...It'd serve him right... *huffs* Hazzah! Sesshomaru has come to get Rin and now they're on their way to rescue Kagome! ^^ Um, did he ever take that nap? He's definitely going to be feeling it if he hasn't. >< Well, hopefully, Sessho'll get to rest before they get to Mt. Hiei (even though it'd slow they progress... I'm sure Miroku will be fine until they get there). So~ Iku's still disgustingly manipulative. And... Oh! How many days has it been?! O_o Kirara must have made it back to the village by now. And with Sango's new accelerated healing abilities, Inuyasha would let her go on, no (though the question remains if you'd have him let her go off alone right now and exactly how intelligent of a move that would be)? *le sigh* So Sango and Kirara'll will be by the secret entrance just in time to encounter Oda and his army. >.> Great. I love how Kagome doesn't realize (maybe it's the sleep) that she's the reason Crazy Oda attacked Mt. Hiei, and the driving force of the horrific battle. She's why only nine(?) of those monks were left alive and were able to flee to the countryside. ...Wait. That IS how that story went right? I don't remember all the details. >< Either way, this fight's going to be shitty. Sesshomaru better hurry his ass up. DX Well~ Another great chapter. And long too! Yay~! ^o^ No biggie taking a little longer to update; it's only been a month. Take as long as you need. you know, just as long as "as long as you need" isn't over a year. *cough* Looking forward to the next chapter~. I'm hoping it doesn't, but figuring that there will be some horrid cliffhanger at the end of the next chapter. Just in case - >.> I hate you. Okay! Update soon~ *wavies* JA MATA!! = D ~Animefrea242 aka Kawaii Girl
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2008 19:01 PDT
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This is soooooooooooo cool...I get a history lesson and I get to read a very enjoyable story all at once....your ausome....how did you come up with this you make everything fit....eeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.....and I'll bet your next chapter will be even cooler......man its going to be close nitch for Sesshoumaru to make it in time if he is able....I mean the first place he would look would not be Mt. Hiei but the villige in edo....ya know...ohhhhh I'll be waiting so get the next chapter out soon.................................Nyuka
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2008 18:46 PDT
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This is soooooooooooo cool...I get a history lesson and I get to read a very enjoyable story all at once....your ausome....how did you come up with this you make everything fit....eeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.....and I'll bet your next chapter will be even cooler......man its going to be close nitch for Sesshoumaru to make it in time if he is able....I mean the first place he would look would not be Mt. Hiei but the villige in edo....ya know...ohhhhh I'll be waiting so get the next chapter out soon.................................Nyuka
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Reviewed By: ice vixen x On: May 20, 2008 00:36 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy crap. another great chapter. i hope shin comes to terms with his new self,but i see he could cause futre truble for rin. I also can't wait to see the battle. pdate soon and keep up the great work... ^_~
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2008 16:41 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
a lil peice of advice- ~sessh-run? ~tba- that or hide. but iku will probably catch u. ~kags-gee. i feel soooo much better now. ~sessh-... she's a very negitive person u know. ~tba- i was born negitive.but appaently. negitive repeles negitive isnt true. ~sessh- my point still stands. ~kags-*runs around screaming* HELP!!! IM GONNA B IN A WAR!!! ILL NEVER SURVIVE! ~tba-grabbs a history book*hm... *turns page* ~sessh- wat r u doing?? ~tba-checking if the monks survive. oh. and to see if some body nemed kagome dies. ~kags-EPPPP!!!!!! SESSHOMARU!!! HELP ME!!! ~sessh- wat do u want me to do? i bet im atleast 30 miles away from u. ~tba- i bet more. ~sessh- hm... oh well. tell me wat type of flowers u like. so ill bring them to ur funeral. ~kags- oh. daisys and- WAIT A SEC! UR NOT HELPING ME! ~sessh-smirk* never said i was ~kags-ughhhhh!!!!!!!!!! ~tba-update soon! bye! ~TBA~
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Reviewed By: Maddie50 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2008 11:13 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kagome and Miroku appear to be out of the frying pan and into the fire. Nobunaga needs to stop thinking with his dick. Iku needs to be dead. "Sesshoumaru!" get your butt in gear and save Kagome and Miroku.
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Reviewed By: snowbirdyoukai/MM Member On: May 19, 2008 10:33 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I applaud Miroku's fidelity. The monks overconfidence is going to be their downfall. I just hope that Sesshoumaru gets to Kagome before Iku or Nobunaga take her captive. His love and commitment to her is so deeply enduring. It made me feel very emotional while reading that part. He has to somehow figure out a way to pass through the barrier or for Miroku to get himself and her on the outside of the barrier. Miroku has to get to safety too since the soldiers have orders to kill everyone except her. Poor Shin. Somehow he needs to get his confusion and emotions under control and learn to accept that he is now part youkai. His mind is a little unstable right now so I hope he does not confess his feelings for Rin to her right now. Since she supposedly is in love with Shippo, Shin's mental instability at the moment could take it the wrong way. He might think she believes him to be a freak and is saying no because of that. Too bad there's not a full youkai female lurking around somewhere that you could have take an interest in him. Right now another female is what he needs to pull his interest away from Rin and I think it would work better if it were a youkai or even a hanyo.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2008 04:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonderful... (going hyper, imaginary squeals (because dad would have a fit if I woke up my mum)this is fantastic... ) incorporating real life history into InuYasha fan fiction... fantastic!!!
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Reviewed By: FluffyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2008 03:10 PDT
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i figured she'd remember. i certainly hope sess'll make it in time. perhaps the final battle between iku and sess will be in the next couple of chapters? and what was that about sango's wound not being so deep? hmm... i certainly hope shin doesn't obsess over rin... FL
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Reviewed By: PitaBread [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2008 22:20 PDT
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Shin sounds absolutely adorable! I DO hope you find him a good woman... he deserves it. And Sesshoumaru - so astute! I'm glad he's finally going after Kagome. Oh, I DO hope nothing happens to Miroku. Of course, we know that Kagome will not come to much - if any - harm, but of course Sesshoumaru is going to have to save her. Hopefully, everyone will be all right, and all the couples will be reunited. By the way - I think as fans, we deserve more Inuyasha/Saya fluff! LOL Or maybe it's Inuyasha that deserves it, hehe. Anyhow, I was glad to see the update. Always makes my day. Until next time!
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Title: Hey!
Reviewed By: Kagome357 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2008 19:54 PDT
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Don't apologize for the chapter. Some of us understand that you and your beta have a real life and some things take precedent over writing and we patiently waited. With that being said, you threw so much exciting elements into this story I had to read it three times and my brain went into sensory overload. You're doing a fabulous job with this story. Shin sounds interesting. I wonder if someone will ink him on paper for you. Sounds like my kind of half breed. Shin will be formidable when he gets the training that he needs and maybe he'll come to terms with being hanyou. I'm glad Sesshomaru is going for Kagome and doesn't care what his people think. They belong together and I'm glad to see that's finally going to happen. Miroku's maturity is unexpected but nice. It seems like you're paring the group off real nice. I'm tempted to read about the Mt. Hiei story but I'm going to hold off until after your next chapter. Thank you for uploading your chapter and I await patiently your next one. Congrats on the noms and wins! They're well deserved.
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2008 19:39 PDT
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Yay! A new chapter! Please tell me that we won't see what happens at Mt. Hiei. *cries* Poor Miroku has no clue. I hope they manage to save a bunch of people if they are there when Oda gets inside. I have faith in Miroku and Kagome to get themselves out alive. I'm wondering what you have planned for Miroku and his newfound power. I'm impressed with his new relationship with Sango. The man is finally showing some control. Shin is totally awesome! I loved the description of his body and his display of power while protecting Rin. He really does sound like one heck of a sexy half-breed. Maybe he will find someone, though I couldn't imagine who. He could become a great asset to Sesshoumaru. Oooh, love the way that Inuyasha took care of that soldier. Oh yeah. Hm, maybe Sango has advanced healing abilities because of the red powder? Interesting. It's so sad that Sesshoumaru is still suffering. At the same time, he is recovering. That is a relief to see. Damn that Iku. Not only has he led Nobunaga to the mount, but he also holds Sesshoumaru's secret. I'm so worried about that getting out. It would do him a lot of damage, not that he couldn't immediately prove his strength and ability. It would still be humiliating though. Anyway, I'm always tickled to see a new chapter. Congratulations on the well-deserved award winnings. ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: snowbirdyoukai/mm member On: May 16, 2008 16:37 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I did a nice long review not long after your last update. All I'm asking for now is another update. It's been about a month. Your fans are getting antsy out here. I'm anxious for events to stop separating Sesshoumaru and Kagome. I want them to face any danger or problems together, not apart. They give each other strength. Please hear this Snowbird's plea.
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Reviewed By: inuyasha-coolness [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2008 18:12 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok ist been like 2 weeks and i feel like a crack fiend. WHERES MY UPDATE!?!? gosh im such a begger but this story is sooo good! i luv it!
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