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| "Violation of Honor" Reviews/Comments [ 497 ] | | Pages (34): [ « ‹ 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 › » ] | Reviewed By: Laryssa On: March 03, 2008 23:33 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an amazing story. It is so original that I could not help to keep my eyes glued to the screen for multiple hours at a time(on shcool nights non-the-less). You are brilliant. The way their bond was formed was not only realistic but creative. Definatly not something you see every day. I have loved every second of this story becasue it is so easy to relate to the characters. The emotions you display in this fanfiction are extremely realistic and your discriptions sometimes make me feel like I am there with them. Keep up your good work. I(as well as many others), will be patiently waiting.
| Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2008 15:25 PST
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...I...Hmmmmmmmm...its just...Oooooooh why did you do it why did you let Chisumi die like that it wasn't fare nor was it right any way, you made Sesshoumaru a lier, why would you do that...I know if anything will set Sesshy's mind on the battle at hand that was it, thought it is trully saddening...but Sesshoumaru can't bring her back...right? I mean like after the battle and stuff and he gets he sward back he can bring her back she would be able to continue living in the hopes of happiness...Ooooooooh let it be so oh let it be so... If nothing else I pray that Chisumi will rest in peace... don't let her hurt any more she didn't desurve such a fate it wasn't right in any way...it is just to upsetting.................Well I am happy that Kagome is nearly sure about who her silent Youki was that is something, but then again she has to brake it to Inuyasha that is trully terrible, and the there is what happened to Saya I can't believe her unkle did that he desurved to die if ya ask me, but I was hopeing Inuyasha would do the honor oh well nothings purfict, X3....But what about Madam Seto that isn't good I don't think it good that she got a stroke and the fact that she professived Kagomes death just upset me so, trully trubbling............Oh this just stinks you had to leave the cliffy well I will be waiting for that update X3.........Nyuka
| Reviewed By: snowbirdyoukai [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2008 09:39 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've sent you 2 e-mails from the ASS site wondering where you had disappeared to. Now I know. Media minor is still a new site for me and I discovered this story just recently by merely brousing. I read it straight through. I must say I've not read a Sess/Kag story quire like this one before. Twice I almost left the story. First, at his continued mistreatment and second, at her continued blindness. Something made me keep returning to the story and I'm glad. So here I am, stuck waiting for each update now.CHKM
| Reviewed By: ktshabatie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2008 22:18 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really hope that Sesshoumaru can use his sword to save her life! That's so sad. :[ I can't wait for the next chapter!
| Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2008 12:39 PST
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That better not have been Inuyasha contending for the right to kill Asuza. I'll wring his neck for stopping Sesshoumaru. It would be just like those two though. They always do that. Also, Asuza called Sesshoumaru hers. Well, humph. Sesshoumaru belongs to Kagome! Hah! LOL Er, yeah. I was reading it again. ^_^ Snow
| Reviewed By: Kono-chan On: February 27, 2008 12:21 PST
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Gracious. This was fantastic! What a horrible cliff-hanger ending though! Brilliant writing. I really love how you write the characters. They're very vibrant. I just wanted to say that I really like Saya/Inu Yasha. That was a good call. And I really can't wait to see what happens next. Sesshoumaru/Kagome are brilliant together. Anyway, I look forward to the next chapter and I hope it see it soon! ^_^
| Reviewed By: FluffyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2008 20:36 PST
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*sighs and hangs head* man, i feel so bad for saya, such a sweet girl. i wonder who the 'imminent death' will be. inu? saya? miroku or sango? what about uchuu or hyuuga? or maybe...*smiles hopefully* Jaken? lol. *scowls* it better not be sesshomaru or kagome!! *chunks rotten veggies at rinseternalsoul* oh, and i'm betting its iku who gets the honor of sess's first opponent. hm... i feel bad for chisumi too. hopefully sess SLOWLY kills iku and asuza. ah well, off to bed, smothering my own dog with love. hehe... FL
| Title: Didn't miss the IT factor
Reviewed By: Doberbitch [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2008 18:56 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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"It took days for it to die." The it meaning Chisumi. Poor girl! I LOVE THAT YOU DARED TO DO THAT!! You are awesome! Asuza is truly a wonderful evil character. We all loved the chapter! Every element from start to finish. The mentioning of Vlad was just the right touch. I must say that we all going to be sad when this story is over. Violation of Honor is just too wonderful. Rin, we are going to send you a picture of our growing group of Violation fans here at the university. Thank you and Risa for bringing this to us. Doberbitch
| Reviewed By: TAJE [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2008 17:19 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! OMG! OMG! You're gonna kill me! OOOOOOHHHHHH! I hear you! 12,000 words! Wow! I can't wait for this next chapter. I cried when Chisumi was killed. I really hoped... oh well. You are doing an outstanding job on this story. It makes me feel all kind of emotions. I now fear for Oichi and Saya! Oh please, have mercy!!!!! You're gonna give me more gray hairs. But really you are wonderful at telling your story! Peace!
| Reviewed By: Nami no Chi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2008 23:50 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have wanted to review for a while now to tell you how much I have enjoyed this fanfiction but was unable to. It is nice when an author keeps the characters real instead of making up a cast of characters and then giving them the names if anime characters so that they can call it fan fiction. The plot keeps me guessing and you seem to have a knack for keeping me longing for more. You give me motivation to finish my homework so I can alow myself see if you have posted yet. I an looking forward to your next instalment.
| Reviewed By: CandyEars [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2008 12:27 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry I haven't reviewed before, but I have been following this story for some time, throughly enjoying it. Cliffy's before big battles just suck! :) Of course, you are following RT's original style to a "T" - she's known for that :) Keep up the good work! I can't wait to read where it all goes! I am upset about Chisumi though :( I'm assuming she's been dead in a bad way too long for Sesshy to resurrect then? Children shouldn't have to suffer! I'm sad.. but a mad Sesshy and Kagome will be awesome!
| Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2008 03:45 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah! Noooo! No stopping here! Hurry up and update or I'll go nuts! Cool that you mentioned Dracula in there too. I bet she learned a lot from him, torture-wise. I wonder if Kagome heard Azuza call Sesshoumaru her pet. If so, then there's all the confirmation she'll ever need. Can't wait to see what happens next! :D
| Title: hmmm...
Reviewed By: PitaBread [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2008 22:43 PST
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Ah, you've left much for us to think about! First, may I just praise you on the scene with Kouga? You had me laughing hysterically, to the point that my husband came in from another room to see what was going on! I was just dying... I'm glad Kagome told Sango. I bet it was killing her. And... she said she loves him! How sweet. So now, we have to worry about what Madam Seto said - I think she said exactly what she meant to, and I think Kagome is going to die. Fortunately, our favorite hero just happens to have a sword that brings people to life. Also, I worry for Saya. Poor thing. What did you do to her, rin? XD No, no. I know, as a writer, these things are sometimes necessary. And poor, poor Chisumi. Really, it's not fair. But I'm sure it will fuel Kagome, Uchuu, and Sesshoumaru's anger and resolve. Of course, it's obvious that Iku is the one that has saved Asuza. It is clear that he will have to die first. Preferably a slow, painful death ( XD we're a morbid bunch, eh? Don't mess with VoH fans! lol). I wonder if Asuza knows that Yumiko is there as well and I can't wait to see what her role is. I hope Sesshoumaru, Kagome, Uchuu, Hyuuga, and Inuyasha are not the only ones that have the glory of battle. No, that didn't come out right. I hope the others are recognized and play an important part - that's what I meant. AHAHAHA! You're not kidding when you say this story is far from over! We have the great battle, then we have Nobunaga to deal with, and the whole 'breaking-it-to-Inuyasha' bit, lol. Whew! Thank you for the birthday wishes! ^_^ And I wish you well - until the next chapter! -PB
| Reviewed By: FayeMegan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2008 21:02 PST
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wow, she's figuring it out! I can't wait to see how the battle plays out!
| Title: Sweet!
Reviewed By: Tiegrsi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2008 19:13 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I guess I should have just shut my trap and waited, lol, because this chapter was the piece that I was missing, I guess! It did smooth things over for me. :) Thank you for your response! I know you don't often have the time to write them. What a horrible little cliffy you left! *Throws rotten tomatoes and assorted half-eaten fruit at you* :<
*Sighs* O.K., I'm over it. I am looking forward to reading the *DUN DUN DUN* Big Battle Scene! Time for Sess to get some revenge and a little closure! (Not to mention a bit of frisky with Kagome, which obviously can't happen until after the battle!) 'Till next time; happy writing!
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