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| "Violation of Honor" Reviews/Comments [ 497 ] | | Pages (34): [ « ‹ 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 › » ] | Title: Dang
Reviewed By: Kagome357 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2007 07:47 PST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
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I'm not into rape and tend to shy away from them because some writers seem to have a fantasy about the topic. However, you did this story in a way that didn't exploit it and left Sesshomaru maintaining his dignity and decency. For someone who is an emotionless demon, you've portrayed him with a vulnerability and humanity that you normally don't see him depicted as such. I'm still in the process of reading it but I wanted to give you a shout out. Outstanding...the awards were well deserved.
| Reviewed By: Musicorey On: November 07, 2007 08:45 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
In two words, action packed!! There's never a dull moment. I thought it was well written, and very creative. Keep up the great work. I loved it! I think you should try to present this to some publishers...
| Title: My cup runneth over
Reviewed By: Timmycricket On: November 07, 2007 07:27 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Let me focus on the Enjoyment Factor: I am completely under the spell of this entire story. And no amulet required! On the Originality/Creativity: The entire story!The panther tribe helping out because of a favor was owed was sheer brilliant! The sphere with the whips, all members of the panther and a human quilt, the monkey clan and Yumiko equals to 100% creativity. The other two categories? I have no right to rate it anything below a 10.Makes me feel like I'm being anal. I hope you are winning major awards for this.
| Title: chapter 21
Reviewed By: Doberbitch [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2007 15:50 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is the talk at the bar, work and on campus. You have a growing private cult here at the university. It is becoming a slogan and trendy to say," Violation of Honor" when we are disrespected. We are on pins and needles trying to figure out what is going to come next. Rinseternalsoul, people at are calling you a Legend in the InuYasha fan-fiction world. This story is very moving, never a dull moment and well written. I laughed so hard with Jaken's reflection and from the moment Sesshomaru arrived in his sphere mode, truly amazing by the way, until the very end, it was extraordinary! To think that this is onlyone chapter out of twenty-one! The love scene between Sess and Kagome will make Shakespeare proud, it was so moving and genuine. I had to join this site and tell you how wonderful you are. You are a true artist, and I sincerely, sincerely hope you go professional. You have an unbelievable imagination that can only be envied. The very idea that you do this for fun and at the rate this story is posted is...awesome! I love the way your fans love you and the style and manner in which you reciprocate it. I will not forget your beta, Risa. I can tell you have a great deal of respect and a wonderful friendship with her and it shows. One of our professor, recently said he loves your story and that you are missing your calling.The reason why he read it and reads it, is because we talk about it! Truly you kick ass and now, I must go and spread and convince some relunctant InuYasha and Kikyou fans to read this Sesshomaru and Kagome pairing fics, particularly yours. You are the Hentai Queen and a Legend. Let us know when you go professional. With a great deal of love and respect, Doberbitch.
| Reviewed By: ktshabatiee On: November 04, 2007 13:35 PST
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I loved it! I really hope that Uchuu and the fellow monkeys are able to at least take out Iku. That jerk deserves to die! Maybe while she's distracted, the little hanyou can do something like steal Asuka's pendent. Ahh I can't wait for the next installment!
| Reviewed By: Dragon Dagger [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2007 01:13 PDT
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Ass whoop in a can! King sized! LOL. This was extremely well written. The transfer points were smoothly written and the passages for each group were long enough that it didn't confuse me to switch locations in the story. Well done! I'm looking forward to the next chapter. DD
| Reviewed By: clusterlizard1 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2007 00:35 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL! i remember episode 5 having Fluffy-sama saying 'what a bother' about InuYasha not dying do easily. very good chapter. all blood and gore... mmm.. now i really wanna know what happens with Asuza and the rest of her little bunch now that Hyuuga is free of the amulet. and i wanna know Kumiko survives and becomes another big character. i wouldn't mind it. 'kay, i think i've don enuff reviewing for now. ~clusterlizard1
| Reviewed By: Maddie50 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2007 22:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a fantastic battle. Sesshoumaru's entrance was inspired, but you took it and ran with it. The descriptions were so vivid and precise that I could picture the battle in my mind as if I was there. It was very exciting. Killing all the bad guys in the bloodiest way possible and stomping on their corpses always pleases me. Sesshoumaru still has some post traumatic stress syndrome. Thankfully only one episode during the battle. This is going to sound really shallow, but I liked Sesshoumaru in the black outfit. Too bad it got torn from the sword slash to his shoulder. Anyway, wonderful action packed slaying. Uchuu's territory had a tougher battle. I love the female hanyou character, she's gutsy. I figured the amulet would not work on females. I am so disappointed that Iku is still alive and so is the bitch. I assume that you will be taking care of that at some point in the story. Hopefully they will die in some horrible way. Thanks for the great chapter. Jean
| Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2007 21:19 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must be a really lucky girl! You updated the same day that I finished reading the other chapters! The battles were glorious. I certainly hope that Yumiko makes it out alive. I think it is cool that she was immune to the amulet. Yumiko's ability and immunity may be the only way to remove the amulet. I hope Kagome doesn't have too horrible of a time while Sesshoumaru is away. Oh, that massive decapitation that the panther girl did... wow, that was... what a sweet little girl! **grins**
| Reviewed By: ladydeath31178 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2007 21:07 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so happy you have updated and I do feel for your tragedies , but I thank you for updating , up until tonight I have been bed ridden in the hospital due to pregnancy complications and my husband was kind enough to print what you have written thus far and it has kept me from going insane with boredom , I snuck out of bed to leave you a review and to tell you keep up the good work and look forward to more chapters to keep me from my boredom
| Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2007 20:51 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Go Yumiko. Uchuu is a really great original character and I love your story line. Still wondering what Kagome is going to do when she finds out that her youkai is Sesshomaru.
| Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2007 14:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When I first found your story I chickened out when I began reading it. I am so glad that I finally went though with reading it. I really look forward to the next chapter. I hope you are able to put it out soon. I know that I will be so thrilled to see the update notification that I hope no one is around so I do not embarrass myself! Thank you so much for the effort you have put into this so far and that you share it with anyone who would want to read it.
| Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2007 22:56 PDT
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I'm likes so weried about Sesshoumaru.....Thought there is know way I can feel exactly how he feels, while reading your piece (well any piece for that matter) I attempted to mentally become the character, for example with Kagome when I picture thing with a fog around the picture in my mind, and with Sesshoumaru I have a feeling of once never feeling a defeat and then being nocked down from a high pedistule of self confidence......I feel as if I can feel his pain, and I can feel the emotion that he hides.....he is suffering from a life changeing pain which makes it hard for forget of get over........ the feeling that I get from him that I'm sure you haven't mentions is a feeling that he is going to fail again, like falling of a horse and tring to get back on it, the fear is there.........Its a sinking feeling that nothing you do will work out the way you want ever again and a feeling that you have let everyone down and NOTHING will make it right again.........................................Now I could be wrong about my intupretation but thats how it made me feel and I thought I would share it with ya..........................oh and please update soon..........................Nyuka
| Title: Worth the Wait!
Reviewed By: PitaBread [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2007 22:45 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, now... I just want you to know that I laughed maniacally when I saw an update for this story in my mailbox. Honestly, I hadn't thought that you had abandoned the story, because obviously you had put so much time and effort into planning it. And I was rewarded for my faith with this! I loved this chapter - from the little details, like describing a minor character like the hanyou girl whose job it was to distract the soldier; to the grand details, like the military style in which Karen told of the Western Lands' fate. I can only hope that the battle is going to be as good - but knowing you, that is to be expected :) I think what I really can't wait for (immediately, that is - because you know what everyone is really looking forward to, lol) is Kagome's reunion with her tachi. It's been so heartwrenching for her to know that she was abandoned and then those who she was left with were unabale or unwilling to tell her about 'her youkai'. Poor thing. She has suffered enough, as far as hearts go. So I'm sure that it will really help her to see Sango, Inuyasha, Miroku, and Shippou again. I wonder, offhand, if you'll have her go back to her time to heal her. And I'm disturbed by the impending 'talk' she'll have to have with Inuyasha. Because he'll be SO understanding that she fell in love - and in bed - with someone else, lol. By the way, won't Inuyasha smell Sesshoumaru on her? Even if she takes a bath, her Kimono should also smell like him... I wonder how you'll do that. Oh! Perhaps Seto will mask his smell on her with her herbs, since she promised to make Sesshy's identity a secret??? Ooh, I'm intrigued... Sorry for the long review.... I should be writing my next chapter right now, but I just had to read this first, lol. Good luck with the next chapter!
| Reviewed By: Maddie50 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2007 01:06 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I joined MM so I can review here. The last 2 chapters were great as always. The evil woman gives me the willies, even though she doesn't have one. = : ) Iku is a pouting whiner at the moment. Sesshoumaru seems mentally so fragile, although he is determined to get his castle back. Kagome is so heartbroken, but she still has fire. I'm sorry to hear that real life has been difficult lately. Thanks for the email with the dancing mostly naked men you sent me recently. I'll be thinking about you. Jean aka Maddie50 or whatever my name is supposed to be at this website.
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