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| "Violation of Honor" Reviews/Comments [ 497 ] | | Pages (34): [ « ‹ 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 › » ] | Title: Ch. 5
Reviewed By: docbevculver [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2006 20:38 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooh, nice chapter. Loved the descriptions, as usual, and I can't wait to see how the next unfolds and I know that in the end, we'll TRULY enjoy it. *wink* Bravo, as always... keep up the good work and can't wait to see another update soon. :D
| Reviewed By: ChobitsXDarkFreya [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2006 16:00 PST
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Please update! Oh man, I keep on checking your story for the next chapter but the latest one is still Uchuu the Snow Monkey! Wha! T__T
| Title: Oh geez...
Reviewed By: ChobitsXDarkFreya [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2006 00:22 PST
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Oh man! This is one intense story, it makes me feel sick just reading it (in a good way). I usually don't go for these kind of story's but...I just have to keep reading! Oh and that snow monkey guy sounds really cute! Too bad you'll probably kill him or something -__- And poor Sesshomaru too, his situation is really making me depressed, which is in turn making me more depressed that he is having an effect on my mood. xP You are an EXCELLENT writer. Sesshomaru has stayed in character the entire time! I feel like the writer of the Inuyasha series couldn't have done better. You're doing really good, and your chapters are long (very nice.) I wasn't going to review for you but I noticed you just wrote this chapter today. Am I right? I'm shocked, this is one of the first fanfics I found in a while where the author didn't just write a few chapters and then stop like years ago. So! That means there's still hope for me to find out where the heck this whole thing is going. I have no idea. And I really really hate Iku! I mean, he is sick. Sick I tell you! But! That means that you're a really good author all the same. Oh geez...this review of mine is really long! But it says I have 2800 characters left. Should I just keep writing? Well, I dunno if you like reviews or not but I love reviews for my fanfics! Especially funny ones! (I hope this is a funny review =P) You also write lemon scenes very well! Oh! I know that the miko who you said might 'Melt Sesshomaru's heart' after he's been taken captive is Kagome and I am all for Sess/Kag fanfics (mostly) but in this fanfic I dunno! I actually think that I want the girl who brings water to Sesshomaru to get him! She seems very Rin-like but I'm guessing she's a little older,but wouldn't that be sweet if Sesshomaru escaped with the water girl? That would be akward though...in many ways...but still. I feel really bad for that girl too, and I wish Sesshomaru had some clothes >.< It's really weird when she has to see him naked! I feel bad for her times two! Man, out of everyone she has the crappiest luck. Well, it might be a tie between her luck and Sesshomaru's. I mean Sesshomaru came lookin' for trouble! This little princess girl was taken against her will! It is so not the same situation, ahem. Okay I have 1600 characters left. Oh yeah! And I forgot to say that I want you to update soon! You've probably already written a little of the next chapter but in case you haven't then just keep chuggin' along! Hey! At least you have people that like your fanfic right? I mean none of your hard work is going to waste hm? I actually thought about your story last night before I fell asleep. (I just found your story yesterday) I was wondering to myself what I would do if that evil witch got her hands on me! Lol, I know I know, it's a little pathetic, but believe it or not that was all I could think about. So! Let me enlighten you! Oki! So that evil bitchy witch somehow captures me! Now, I could be a human but then I wouldn't stand a chance against her...so a demon would be better! Oki! I'm a sexy rabbit demon! Muahaha! And I am really angry at her! So then I give her a ha! And a pa! And a HYAA! And I break off her manicured claws (which she seems to be mildly obsessed with) and she gets really pissed off! And she uses her little talisman on me! But before she does Iku walks in and says he really likes rabbits! So then the evil bitchy witchy says he can deal with me because she hates me! And Iku loves bunnies so much that he doesn't hurt me and instead takes moderately good care of me! And then when he's sleeping I give him a pa! A ha and a HYA! And he dies! And then I go down to the dungeon, and kill that evil dungeon keeper (very slowly and painfully) and I save Sesshomaru! And the water girl! And even though I'd like to have Sesshomaru for myself I let her have him!(Until she dies) and then he's mine! So, that's all. ^^ I've written too much. I'll review when you update! Got to go now! Bye!
| Reviewed By: Inusbabe [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2006 13:22 PST
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Sessho trying to protect the girl, wow. I love the dark chapters very much, it seems like Sessho is going to be a changed demon after he gains his freedom...
| Title: Ch. 4
Reviewed By: docbevculver [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2006 18:57 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, very dark chapter, but I can see how it's needed to carry the story on. Very well done and I can't wait to see how the next unfolds. My interest is still piqued and you are doing an awesome job. The new character sounds rather interesting, like to see how he's going to work out with the plot. :D Bravo! As always!
| Reviewed By: Chaos-and-Serenity [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2006 11:36 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent chapter as usual! Poor Sesshoumaru... He doesn't know what's about to come knocking at his back door. You're right in that your portrayal of slave treatment is right on the mark. It may be hard for some people to envision the rape part, which is horribly common, but that's only because the antagonist is female. I'd imagine a female tyrant would be no different than a male one. "Absolute power corrupts absolutely." (Animal patrol is heart wrenching to watch.) I'm loving the darkness of this fic, but I'm highly anticipating Kagome's re-introduction - I need some light to balance it out! I highly respect your creative approach to this story and I just can't wait for more!
| Title: Wow, just WOW!
Reviewed By: Chaos-and-Serenity [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2006 08:14 PST
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I only give praise where it is due, and it is more than due in this case. God, you write good angst. It's not too melodramatic or hollow, but absolutely perfect. I feel for him and I'm itching to behead her as well! I was especially shocked when he slit his own throat. Unexpected, but a delightful (in the artistic kind of way) and very natural turn of events. I think the proud Sesshoumaru would rather kill himself than endure such demeaning rape. To the Japanese, suicide is honorable at times. I can't wait to read about that bitch's downfall. With her being so powerful (mind control will do that) I can't help but wonder what your imagination will bring to us in that regard. Kagome, we need you and soon! I'm sure I'll end up crying when she starts 'healing' him. I love this story - love it, love it, love it! I simply can't wait for more. And lucky me, this site automatically informs me when my favorite stories are updated. Woot, woot! More, please?
| Reviewed By: docbevculver [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2006 15:40 PST
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Oh my... I have to agree with you. Thank God we are in the modern women and don't have to deal with these types of things. Once again, awesome job on the details, desriptions, and dialogue. You are truly wonderful and weaving tales and I can't wait to see how the next chapter unfolds. Bravo, as always!
| Reviewed By: Miss Mischief [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2006 14:29 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow unbelieveable, it makes a change from the normal sess and kags stories i read which lately have been so cliche and the same. this is just brill.
| Reviewed By: Inusbabe [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2006 12:34 PST
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Oh my, I am hooked how is he going to get out of this?
| Title: Brilliant!
Reviewed By: Chaos-and-Serenity [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2006 20:57 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is utterly brilliant and damn unique! I think it's shaping up to be your best yet. I'm a sucker for dark fics and this just may become my favorite. Your usage of the english language is simply breathtaking and his mental angst is so well portrayed that I feel speechless as to properly comment on it. This story is just perfect. Absolutely perfect. I simply can't wait to read more.
| Title: Oh My...
Reviewed By: Chaos-and-Serenity [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2006 20:32 PST
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In the words of Sesshoumaru: "What are you doing to me?" This has the start of a fantastic story! Fantastic isn't even strong enough of word to describe my love for this story so far. This is the beginning of a novel to me, a piece of literary genius. Your descriptions were beautiful and perfect. Every word was a delight to read. And that's just chapter one.
| Reviewed By: emeraldoni [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2006 19:54 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Neh, I absolutely love this! Im thinking it rivals Madman even. Please update soon. I am so excited for this story, and I just cant wait for when Kagome comes into play.
| Reviewed By: docbevculver [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2006 19:25 PST
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Ooo, a new story.... YAY! I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter. So far, you have my interest piqued and of course I always enjoy reading your Sess/Kago stories. :D Hope to see an update soon! :D
| Title: wow!!
Reviewed By: sweetkijo [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2006 19:37 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Totally unique. I am speachless. So good. Keep up the great work....cant wait to read more...Ja ne
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