| "Violation of Honor" Reviews/Comments [ 497 ] |
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Title: yeah, we hate you
Reviewed By: Kiterain On: July 16, 2007 19:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And the MOST EVIL cliffie you have EVER given us! What the crap?! And you even tell us how awesome the next chapter is going to be?! >O< ;.; I don't think I can wait much longer without wasting away ;.; Please update ASAP!
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Title: Freedom!!!
Reviewed By: sweetkijo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2007 18:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The chapter was very good. I cant wait until the next chapter, and no its not just because of the goody smut you'll be giving, but also to see what there next plan of attack is. I do hope the monkey tribe will be ok. Thanks for the update, you rawk!!
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Reviewed By: serendith [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2007 15:59 PDT
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When I got the update notice in my email while at work I was hard pressed not to leave early just so I could come home and reat it! Seriously - this story is fantastic! I am thrilled that you are updating so often because I am practically falling out of my seat in anticipation each day.
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Title: Action goodness!
Reviewed By: demonlordlover On: July 16, 2007 15:49 PDT
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Loved it. I especially enjoyed the gruesome end to the guards and Sesshoumaru's determination to help the girl from the cell, no matter what. I'm hyped up for the onsen scene, as you've so apty advertised...LOL Hmmm...Now, how can Sesshoumaru manage to defeat that amulet? I KNOW after Kagome and he are intimate, the bitch is gonna get a pissed miko in her face if she tries anything 'funny' with Sesshoumaru and what Iku got will be as nothing! At least, that's what I'd do if someone messed with my honey. On a side note...is "Madman" finished? I had thought there was going to be another chapter. I've been good and patient, and will continue to be so, I was just curious.
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Reviewed By: lockedincar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2007 15:31 PDT
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ohh yay! plot progression, they got out and hot streamy goodness in the next chapter. life is awesome
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Reviewed By: ladydeath31178 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2007 15:19 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*squeals happily * I love your story !!!! please please write more I cant wait to see what happens next
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Reviewed By: noi On: July 16, 2007 15:01 PDT
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YAY! I was so happy that they actually escaped - I was worried when you mentioned that you've just crossed over the halfway mark and that they'd still have to struggle for a few more chapters. I hope they stay free, >>;; Anyways - I can't wait for your next installment!
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Reviewed By: Shadesof Night114 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2007 13:48 PDT
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yea!! free at last. great chapter cant wait for the next. keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: TamaRose [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2007 13:36 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story so much.There is so much detail to it.I didn't mind the prison scenes either.It went along well with the story.I think it cute that Shippo is protective of Rin.It is so sweet.
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Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2007 11:57 PDT
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Chapter 16 [A Chance for Freedom]: I loved this chapter! I am so glad that you have been updating more often lately. I've been waiting so long to find out what happens, and its so invigorating to be able to read what comes so much more quickly! I really hope that Uchuu comes back later, but I see the reasoning in dropping him off as a main character. After all, Sesshomarou and Kagome can't really have any sweet moments when they keep getting interrupted, can they? Anyways, I hope that those mentioned sweet moments come soon. The abundance of angst is very, very nice, but I need some fluff, too. And I also hope that Kagome realizes who rescued her soon as well. Its a bit frustrating to keep having to read about her and her "mysterious companion." I applaud your brilliant chapter, and I hope that you update soon!
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Reviewed By: docbevculver [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2007 11:39 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay, they finally escaped. :( Was hoping the water girl would get out as well. But I know she'll be saved in the end. :D Once again, awesome chapter and I loved the juicy bits! Can't wait for the next chapter! ~Ang~
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Title: Excellent
Reviewed By: PitaBread [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2007 18:31 PDT
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*sigh* You've lifted my heart. This was a great chapter. It's pointless to say that I was surprised that they had kissed. But it was definately worth the wait. All the torture, all the pain, all the darkness... all for that tiny moment of bliss. Perfect writing. FABULOUS job, dear! It amazes me that you can write so darkly. I've never been good with that. And it makes those cherished moments all the more sweeter when the characters have been put through so much. I'm sure you planned it that way, lol. I do wonder though, why you have ben so nice to Kagome... Don't get me wrong, the crap that she's gone through has been awful, and the blindness sucks, but compared to Sesshoumaru, Uchuu, and even Chisama, she hasn't been through that much. Not that I'm hoping for it, lol, I just thought it was interesting. As if you have something even bigger planned for her. Emotionally, this is a great story. Wen Sesshoumaru gets his powers back, when Inu-tachi catches up with the castle... there are going to be a LOT of pissed off youkai (and 1 hanyou, lol). The one upcoming scene that concerns me, and that I look forward too the most, is when Kagome finds out that Sesshoumaru is her cellmate. If you didn't have such fabulous writing, I wouldn't look forward to it as much. So keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2007 16:18 PDT
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Chapter Fifteen: *cheering* That was amazing! I love the little Sesshomarou and Kagome fluff in there, and I adored the part Chisumi played. Please update soon!
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Title: avid reader
Reviewed By: KawaiiGirl ^^ On: July 06, 2007 12:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! An update... with Chisumi! ^^ And how glad am I that you skipped most of the torture? VERY. *gives you a cookie* This chapter was a little short, but still great. Twas full of information. Called, 'setting the stage', no? Well, here's hoping they solidify that plan soon. Maybe by the time Kagome's vision comes back (because it'd be useful, you know, seeing the people you're killing/running from).I just hope you'll be nice and not kill Chisumi because we like her (not to mention she didn't have very many lines). So... Looking forward to the next - and perhaps the second to, if not THE, last dungeon - chappy. Ja matta!
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Reviewed By: Inusbabe (nsi) On: July 06, 2007 12:05 PDT
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It was greating seeing a new chapter. I am looking forward to the chapter when Kagome finds out that the silent youkai is Sesshoumaru. I loved the kiss!
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