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| "Violation of Honor" Reviews/Comments [ 497 ] | | Pages (34): [ « ‹ 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 › » ] | Title: Violation of honor
Reviewed By: angel-fighter [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2007 12:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello Rin! long no see. I can tell by what I read that this is a wonderful fanfic and I can tell you that the plot is really interesting. I am glad that you have a beta, though I don't think that you need were in need of it. I mean, heck, your grammar and spelling was very very good (close to perfect one could say). I think that the the fanfictions you write are worth to win the in those categories they are nominated for and I don't think that there was a given reason for you to be kicked out. I think a good story with the ejoyment factor ten is worth everything even though the occassional little mistakes. I really like the story though that I do not like violance and suffering of those who are defenseless, but it has to happen sometimes. I really appreciate your portrayal of Kagome and Sesshoumaru and I do like the snow monkey as well. He is really a good character. For Rin and Shippou, yuppee, they are in as well. For Kagome, I never liked it when she was pictured like a little squeeky girl who would cry by every occassion. I see her as a brave girl and really like the way you let her act in the story. She is stronger than many would anticipate. Also, it's good that you mentioned the problem of rape among males. It's also a subject not discussed that often. It happens time and time again I would say, thought he rape of women is mentioned on every occassion, this one stays hidden in the shadows as if it does not exist at all. I feel pity for the victims and so I feel pity for Sesshoumaru, Kagome and Uchuu. I really hate when someone suffers, no matter if child, adult or an animal. I always wish that I could do something to take the pain away. Unfortunately, you cannot always help even though you wish it with all of your heart. I still think that it's a good story despite the darkness in it. I know that everything will come out good and that's the important thing. For Asuza- what a nasty bitch. I hope she will get her revard for all she has done. You know, in my country there is a saying: God's mills grind slowly but sure. That means that you will pay for your crimes and that justice will catch you one day. She is so ill tempered the woman, but I know you have a surprise in your sleeve. I am curious what is going to happen in the coming cahpters. If you wonder, I am printing the story so I can read it while traviling in train. I have been silent because I was sooo busy that I did not have time for anytthing. I was not reading, I was not working on my own story. I practically did not live the past few months. I appologize, because I promised tha I would read Madman and review, but I never came to it.I am catching up with all the things. I also promised to have the website about Vienna ready. Don't have to tell you that I did not make it, huh? Sorry that I did not keep my promise. I hope I will catch up with everything....I still enjoy your stories. Take care and until later. Angelfighter
| Reviewed By: Chaos and Serenity On: April 24, 2007 07:20 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was so thrilling! I'm literally on the edge of my seat anticipating the next installment! Shippou, the hero, saves the day - maybe - and Sesshoumaru, the valiant, makes his stand - uhhh...maybe...? Keep me guessing, hun, 'cause I love it! I'm undeniably hooked, as I've said before, but I can't say it enough. Stories like this one are few and far between and so I say thank you for writing this awesome, super-fantastic story just for my reading pleasure! That didn't sound self-absorbed... Seriously, thank you for taking the time and putting forth the effort to weave such a spellbinding tale of loss and hope. We really do have it better than we think. Thanks for reminding me of that.
| Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2007 15:34 PDT
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Latest Chapter: Amazing! I love how you show things both from Sesshomarou and Kagome's poitns of view. I hope you update soon! Your preview has really got me looking forward to the next installment.
| Reviewed By: docbevculver [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2007 10:13 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again, another fine chapter. I can't wait to see another update soon to continue this piece, that has my interest so totally piqued. Bravo, as always, on a job well done. Yeah, I know that's not a very good review. It so hard to put into words how your story/chapters appeal to me other then to say "I enjoy and love them immensely! ~Ang~
| Reviewed By: Kai3anime [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2007 09:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is incredible. Your writing style is awesome. I can't wait for a new chapter.
| Title: Oops...
Reviewed By: Chas and Serenity On: April 12, 2007 09:22 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't think I reviewed this chapter... I read it at work and had to exit real quick when the boss sauntered in! LOL! I'm still in love with this story and you for writing it. I'd get down on one knee if you weren't married. Maybe I can scare him off? :) The bond strengthens indeed and I must compliment your lovely pace. The plot is so tightly woven and its unfolding so nicely that I find myself wishing I could just keeping clicking the 'next' button so that I could read more and more. I'm so hooked it ain't funny! You got nothing but love from me, so please continue and soon!
| Reviewed By: Lady Niona [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2007 16:33 PDT
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please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!
| Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2007 15:04 PDT
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Chapter Ten: I can't wait for the next chapter! I must admit, at the beginning, I skipped every single torture scene. And all the lemons... I'm just pathetic like that, but then, after that, I hungrily devoured every single word. Your story is amazing!
| Reviewed By: Caitriona [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2007 11:00 PDT
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Good chapter. You are definately starting to allow Sess to interact with Kagome even if he is unwilling or unable to speak. I like that you also brought up the changes that Rin has brought about within his personality. I feel sorry for the monkey prince. Will he die or will Kagome be able to help him out as she has helped Sess? I really really look forward to reading more of this story. You are making S/K believeable and understandable. Caitriona
| Reviewed By: docbevculver [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2007 06:53 PDT
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Poor Uchuu. :( Once again another 'pull at your heartstrings' chapter but wonderful done as always. Can't wait to see what you have in-store for the next one. Should be interesting and I hope to see it updated soon! :D Bravo, as always, on a job well done! ~Ang~
| Reviewed By: Chaos - and - Serenity On: March 22, 2007 06:57 PDT
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Too lazy to sign in. Sorry this is so late, but my life has been a living Hell. Well, my level of Hell doesn't compare to the level of Hell that Sesshoumaru and Kagome are inhabiting! It makes me feel so much better... Wait - am I rejoicing in the horrid pain of fictional characters? Yes I am. See? Your utterly captivating story has corrupted me! Or, maybe not... I love, love, love, love, love this story! I have this feeling that Kagome (as a miko) won't be affected by the Bitch's magic, but I'll just have to wait, won't I? I'm doubly excited by the prospect of her figuring out her cellmate's identity, but please take your time. It's always more satisfying when you have to wait a little while. ;) Continue on, my dear! You have a die-hard fan in me - a fan that is anxiously awaiting the next chapter...and the next... Also, congrats on your winnings! They were certainly earned.
| Reviewed By: docbevculver [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2007 10:38 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Congrats on the win and once again another awesome chapter. Can't wait to read the next one and hope to see it updated soon. :D Bravo! As always! :)
| Title: Congradulations!!!
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2007 15:42 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...I loved that line about his name especialy. But the whole chapter was fabulous. I know its horrible to say this but I can't wait to get back to the torture *blush*, you write it so well. Congradulations again.
| Reviewed By: FuzzyToad On: March 18, 2007 11:18 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I very rarely find a perfect 10 author or even story for that matter! I sit in anticipation for each new chapter and I'm NEVER disappointed. Keep up the great work and kudo's on the Iku/Sesh scene, I was truly amazed. Where some stories written have a tendancy to leave you confused, as an outsider looking in; your storytelling allows the reader to completely envision the scene. The characters are so emotive that you can feel their fear, pain, despair. The story is descriptive to the point where I can see and feel the bars of the cell and the opulence of Asuza's chambers. Absolutely perfect. Keep it up!!!
| Reviewed By: Laria [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2007 21:44 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm a really big fan of yours, and I must say this fic is awesome. It's very well thought out, well worded, and most importantly, very engaging. I have to say though...the frequent character rapings and beatings are starting to negatively impact my enjoyment of this fine piece of work. I admit that I am intrigued and very much want to find out what happens, but DAMN! I'm not supposed to feel *~this~* depressed because of what's going on! I ALMOST don't want to keeping reading reading... your leeching out all hope and leaving nothing but despair and I have to say it's rather *depressing*! I really like this fic, but can't you give them just a tinsy little ray of hope? Or at least give the readers some, cause DAMN! I feel like I need to go cry now! Things keep gettin worse and I secretly wonder if they will EVER get better... Now that I have that off my chest, I love your work! I've read some of your fics on A Single Spark, and girl, you have a gift for story telling. Your characterizations are spot on, your gammar is excellent, your choice of words exceptional, the story is engaging and hard to turn away from, the idea behind it, brilliantly represented and unique, all-in-all an excellent read, and I do hope you will update soon.
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