| "Violation of Honor" Reviews/Comments [ 497 ] |
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Title: Please ;__;
Reviewed By: ChobitsXDarkFreya [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2007 19:46 PST
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Please update! ;__; I've been checking back every day and I'm kinda losing hope/patience. So, maybe next time you do update you can tell the readers when they can expect the next chapter because I'm really anxious! So please update soon! ;___;
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Reviewed By: ChobitsXDarkFreya [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2007 22:33 PST
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Great chapter! I'm glad Sess and Kag have finally ended up in the same place. Oh gosh, at first I forgot Kagome had temporary blindness, so when I read the part where Sesshomaru first sees her in the cell I felt soooo embarrassed for him. Poor Sesshy! And then I remembered she was blind and I was like 'Thank you God!' I mean, I don't want Kagome to see Sesshomaru all naked and torn up and disgusting. Ugh. Anyways! Please update as soon as possible!!!
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Reviewed By: docbevculver [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2007 10:45 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again another excellent chapter and congrats on the beta reader and to luck out on an English teacher to boot... awesome! Can't wait to read the next installment and I hope to see another update soon. As always, bravo! You still have my interest piqued. ^_^
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Reviewed By: fetishyoukai [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2007 08:10 PST
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ack, my review was cut off! Anyways, I had said I enjoy your twist on the typical sex slave scenario. I don't like the ultimate pairing in this fic, but I am enjoying the story ^__^
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Reviewed By: fetishyoukai [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2007 08:09 PST
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I have to admit, I'm liking this fic so far. Poor Sesshomaru, my heart aches for him. Especially being man-raped
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Reviewed By: Kirie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2007 18:38 PST
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Another amazing chapter! I was starting to worry that you had forgoten about this paticular fan fic (as so many writers so regretfully do), but finally, chapter 8! Beautifull written as always, please continue, as you left us on a bit of a cliffhanger...
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Reviewed By: Caitriona695 On: February 01, 2007 09:49 PST
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This chapter was great. You are doing a great job of showing the psychological despair that Sess is going through. The rage and fear are coming through loud and clear. When Kagome first showed up I forgot for a minute that she was in this piece! eep! You have done well with her character. Even blinded, she still tries to help and heal. One questions though - WIll Kagome be drugged? WIll the drugs used on the demons have any effect on her at all? Thanks for taking the time to write for us all.
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Title: *Fic LOVE*
Reviewed By: Chaos-and-Serenity [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2007 08:22 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was stoked to see an update! It made my day. And Risa is a sweetheart! Uchuu is a great character. A nicer, more open version of Inuyasha, like Kagome pointed out. I see the importance of her being blinded now and I must say that it was a clever choice on your part. She's going to feel for him without even knowing who he is. When she does regain her sight and leanrs his identity, the scene will be quite powerful and moving. I can't wait! Sesshoumaru will finally understand true kindness. This story is definitely in my top three of all time. The enjoyment factor can't even be measured by a 1-10 scale. I enjoy it that much. Keep it up, hun - I'll be waiting.
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Title: Avid yet horrified reader
Reviewed By: KawaiiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2007 18:07 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOD! He... And Kagome's... *cries* I am so thouroughly disgusting with these characters right now. Between the two soldiers and Iku... I can kind of understand Asuka's need for revenge, but this is a little extreme. I'm thinking there are some serious issues here. Beyond abandonment and humiliation you already explained because that's just... I just hope you reveal some more of her reasons when Kagome and Sesshomaru meet up (not enough for us to feel sorry for her when she's finally flailed alive, but enough to understand why). I want you to know that I love your stories and you're a great writer, but the only thing that's pushing me continue reading this (besides the captivating story line) is the fact that Sesshomaru'll eventually get revenge. And that will makes all these horrible things worth it. Because if you are being this creative with Sesshomaru's 'punishments', I can only imagine what you're going to come up with for Asuza, Iku and Nobunaga. And all I can say is that it better be good and imaginative (I'm talking painfully long and extremely bloody) because to not let them get revenge in the most violent possible way would be beyond unfair. Oh and Im all for the 'I'd rather die than be with you method' in the chapter four. Just wondering if Uchuu'll be saved or if he'll be yet another casualy in this/these war(s). Oh, and go SHIPPOU! RUN! And where are Inu-taichi? ^^;;; Kind of forget how long they're supposed to be gone. >< Please update. Just, please, can we get to chapter nine? Soon.
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Title: happy new year!
Reviewed By: ChobitsXDarkFreya [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2007 02:22 PST
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I just watched New York's New Year Bash, and then I remembered your fanfic and decided to check it. I'm really glad you wrote about Sesshomaru! I somewhat....skipped parts of Kagome's chapter. -cough- I know! Not nice, but I was really anxious to read about Sessho. And this chapter happened to be the one where Sessho and Iku got freakahy so that was a bonus!Oh man that witch is such a slutty whore bag! Oh geez, she pisses me off when she treats Sessho badly! I just...really want someone to...just skin her alive and torture her at the end. A quick death is too good for her! Anyways, update soon!
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Reviewed By: Caitriona695 On: December 31, 2006 19:29 PST
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You've done a good job describing the horror and sadness of war in ones homeland. I feel very bad for the rebels who are trying to get rid of Nobunga. But I feel the sorriest for Kagome. She was born in a far different time, and now she is having to deal with ?temporary? blindness from a head wound. Poor thing!
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Reviewed By: kitanith [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2006 10:10 PST
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...kagome and sesshoumaru meet in the next chapter....O.O... PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! THIS STORY IS FREAKIN AWESOME!
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Reviewed By: Inusbabe [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2006 20:57 PST
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pleasure huh? Sesshoumaru has finally been knocked off his high horse. Does will this whole thing humble him? Will the healing soon begin?
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Reviewed By: Kirie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2006 19:47 PST
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Another amazing chapter, and in so short a time! God, this one was really fantastic... I can't see Sesshoumaru-sama being able to take much more of this though, and you wouldn't break him entirely would you? I hope not. Hopefully Kagome won't be blind for very much longer because a rather dark part of me would like her to SEE the Lord as he is now. I know it's horrible, but I feel as if she needs to for some reason. At any rate, an excellent story, please update again soon!
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Title: HOT DAMN!!
Reviewed By: sesshys_jaded_samuri [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2006 18:33 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kami, that was hot! Dear God, I was just about panting at the end... and what's this? 2 chapters... in 2 days... I like THAT. I do hope that Kagome doesn't stay blind, though that will make things a bit interesting. These last 2 chapters have had my heart pounding. You're doing a fantastic job with this one. Now if you will only post the last chapter of 'Madman'. (hint, hint)
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