|
| "Violation of Honor" Reviews/Comments [ 497 ] | | Pages (34): [ « ‹ 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 › » ] | Reviewed By: hemlockglade On: March 11, 2008 15:21 PDT
Comment/Review:
"You are wrong, Inuyasha. She is everything to me." - love that line! Completely in character within the context of the story, and no doubt delivered with the tone of utter disdain. Also, very satisfying to see Asuza get hers, plus loved the Aztec orgins of the jewel. But the dust worries me, and Iku is still out there, so I am hopefully that the story is not done yet! You are an excellent writer, with multiple plot lines twisting and converging, and compelling original characters - I can't wait to read more!
| Reviewed By: inuyasha-coolness [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2008 15:17 PDT
Comment/Review:
i havent even read it yet. im just writing this to say YEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!! XD. AN UPDATE!
| Reviewed By: FluffyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2008 10:22 PDT
Comment/Review:
well, that's one way to torture/kill her. another would be, according to some of my friends, put her in the car with me and let me drive. apparently, i take very sharp turns and play my music a little loud. lol. very good chapter. i am eagerly awaiting the next update. FL
| Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879NSI On: March 11, 2008 10:20 PDT
Comment/Review:
wow great battle well described. Was it just those with holy powers that fell asleep. I can't wait to find out what the results of it all are. Hehe and I like Asuza's punishment
| Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2008 03:30 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, this part made me wonder: "...control the minds of anyone not of a godly status!" So Yumiko is of godly status? A half-god? Now that was interesting. :) Can't help but wonder what her parents were then. Oh, and finally Sesshoumaru admits Kagome's importance. Shame that Kagome's unconscious, though. Her and Miroku passing out? Well, that must mean that there's something in the red dust only affecting those with holy powers... Is that because of the god's blood that made the jewel red? So many questions, and I will have to wait for your next update to find the answers... Pity. You'd better update soon, or I'll start pulling my hair! ;)
| Title: You evil thing, you! XD
Reviewed By: PitaBread [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2008 03:08 PDT
Comment/Review:
Oh, what an interesting twist! At first, I thought the Amulet was Egyptian. But making it Aztec was brilliant! And yes, I believe her torture will satisfy my needs. ^_^ However, there is still that bastard, Iku, and the idiot, Nobunaga. SO indeed, we have things to deal with. Oh, I'm so excited! They finally recognized each other! And... Sesshoumaru claimed her! To Inuyasha!!! I wasn't expecting that. Especially while she was asleep. And why is that? What is it that made the two spiritually powerful people lose conciousness? My, my. SO many questions that can only be answered with... ANOTHER UPDATE! lol So I will wait for the next chapter. BTW, in the previous chapter, I thought Iku had come back to fight Sesshoumaru, and RIGHT AFTER I sent it, I thought... *le gasp* What about Hyuuga?! But I didn't want to spam you, so I left it. And whaddya know... it WAS Hyuuga, lol. Oh well. SessKag forever!
| Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2008 23:53 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Xochipilli broadly grinned. "Yes, the blood was a stroke of genius. It gave the jewel a most pleasing red color." -great line!!!! InuYasha is so stupid, it cute!!!!!!!!!! awwww!!!!!
| Reviewed By: ninya [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2008 22:29 PDT
Comment/Review:
thank yu 4 this update. i rlly like this story. i cant see wats next.
| Reviewed By: sesshys_jaded_samuri [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2008 22:12 PDT
Comment/Review:
AIYAAA! Dear gods woman... that chapter was fantastic... you had my heart pounding through the entire chapter. Oh the wonderful irony of letting the Aztec gods have at her in the afterlife.... pure brilliance. Such a beautiful ending for such an ugly enemy. I am sure that the next chapter is going to be a good one too, with the return of Iku and hopefullly some yummy gettin back together sex for our favorite couple.... And I can't wait to see what Inu's reaction is oging to be when he gets a look at Saya. luv ya hon. Sry that I hardly ever have enough time to review.
| Reviewed By: Wandering Xanthe [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2008 21:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ding dong, the witch is dead! As much as I love the Sesshoumaru/Kagome love, I was definitely reading to see Asuza get hers as well.
| Reviewed By: Dragon Dagger [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2008 20:23 PDT
Comment/Review:
YES!!! Ding dong the bitch is dead!! Hmmmm blood of a god in that necklace adn several folks inhaled it. including two holy people... I'm looking forward to seeing what that does to them *grins*
| Title: Avid Reader
Reviewed By: KawaiiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2008 19:22 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's been a while since I've reviewed for this story, huh? I'm sorry. *gives you a cookie* Anywayz, onward! --- I really hate the inability to segment your thoughts --- OMG! T^T This story is killing me! You update so quickly and it's making me more impatient! >< I want to get this battle over with already! But at the same time, I want to draw it out because I know once the battles over, there isn't much left. PLUS drawn out fight = more action and more pain for the Azuza. ^^ Speaking of pain. Poor Chisumi!! T^T I was really cheering for her. I mean, she didn't have anywhere to go, but that's SO not the point. And you really could have made it a quick death. So mean. *sniffle* But what I'm worried about now is the big fight. Sesshomaru's in the back with Kagome and Azuza, but I'm sure they'll move, right? Well, hopefully you won't have that... thing say anything too revealing about Sesshomaru & Co. and their extended incarceration. Poor babies. I'm hoping that's not Iku flying in and blocking Sesshomaru's attack. He couldn't have gotten there that quickly, could he? Gaa~h! Well... please don't kill anyone good too early in the fight (I'm not even going to bother asking who it is, or for you to save them. I know at least one person has to die). And I'm looking forward to the next update? Yeah... Oh yeah, great chapter (like this one'd be any different from all the others)! ^^;;;;
| Reviewed By: Silver Talon On: March 09, 2008 17:30 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man do you have some talent. I found your story and just couldn't stop reading it, it was that addicting. Yes, I have to admit that some scenes were pretty graphic, but hey, you did warn everyone, and to be honest, I wouldn't change a thing so far. I am a big fan of Law and Order SVU, don't know if anyone here watches it, but that is exactly what your story reminds me of. I think you have totally captured the idea of how life during that time was like, but at the same time you are showing that there is a light at the end of the dark tunnel. I can see how it could be a overwhelming for some people, it was a little bit for me at first, but I think that the dark tone, the passionate struggle, drama, and the dire need that you make your characters portray is just so well woven together. And last but not least, your plot is simply great; I have read other S/K fanfics, and they just don't compare, it is that good. The only objection that I have about your story is the cliffy that you left all your devoted readers on lol. I am really looking forward to seeing this fight; good luck for good writing.
| Reviewed By: inuyasha-coolness [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2008 13:18 PST
Comment/Review:
plz update i luv this story. and im sorry that i havent reviewed in a looong time but ive been reading this story from a psp for a while and psp duznt let you leave reviews. well i am on a computer now and i can tell u how much i luv this story. SO UPDATE PLEASE!!!
| Reviewed By: hemlockglade On: March 07, 2008 11:26 PST
Comment/Review:
Evil cliffy! Ah, but now I'm caught wondering - will Kagome get in a scrape and Sesshoumaru swoop in to save her? Or will Sesshoumaru freeze up when confronted with the demons of his past (no pun intended), and Kagome have to save him? Or a little of both, and then they passionately demonstrate their gratitude… (hey, a fangirl can hope!). And will Inuyasha blow a gasket when he figures out what's going on (hmm… probably). You do write the most unapologetically evil villains, and I can't want to see what happens next!
| | Pages (34): [ « ‹ 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 › » ] |
|
|
