| "Violation of Honor" Reviews/Comments [ 497 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2007 22:56 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If I was Kagome I'd wanna be taking swings at Sesshomaru too... with my bokken. lol. Thank you for the chapter.
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Reviewed By: FayeMegan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2007 22:11 PDT
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horray, I'm glad you updated. I hope you're doing well! Please hang in there and keep the creative juices flowing!!
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Reviewed By: ktshabatie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2007 18:29 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! I can't wait until the battle scenes come up, but I have to really worry about Uchuu and the monkey clan since they're being hit the worst right now. :[ Hopefully there will be an Uchuu and his lover reunion before the final battle as well! That would be so sweet. I hope that on top of the action, we can see some more of Kagome and Saya. Maybe the news got to Edo faster than they thought and Shippo raced on over to go get her! Can't wait for the next update, but family matters are way more important than a silly fanfiction. God bless. -ktshabatie
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Reviewed By: Dragon Dagger [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2007 18:22 PDT
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YAY! Time to loose the hounds of war! I can see Sesshoumaru going easily into bloodlust. this promises to be a very interesting battle. I'm happy that Jaken is still alive. goofy little retainer that he is. LOL the image of him dancing around on the wall of the citadel taunting the enemy is highly amusing and hand me almost rolling out of my chair in laughter. You had some good solid descriptions in this chapter. It was easy to see the way things were set out. I wish you the best of luck in your family issues. I know that they're not easy to handle, but take it one thing at a time and you'll eventually get out from under it. DD
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Reviewed By: child_of_the_moon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2007 15:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. That was amazing. I don't want to stop reading, but dinner's gonna be ready soon. I feel so bad for Sesshoumaru and the little girl, but this is one of the bes fanfics I have read in a long time. Great job.
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Reviewed By: inuyasha lov3r [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2007 15:48 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This story is the best!!! I love how dark it is! I want to know how Kagome will react to finding out that sessy is her lover!!! Although if I was kags i wouldn't mind!!! *wink wink* Anyway PLEASE update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: inuyasha-coolness [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2007 23:19 PDT
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i freakin swear... i have bangs that kind of surround the side of my face (the kind you pull behind your ear sometimes) and when i look forward i can see them sometimes. well while i was reading the new chapter, i was on the scene where kagome found out that she could kind of see sesshomaru's outline in the light. i freakin swear, my heart was beating soooo hard, i could see my bangs pulsating while i was reading. when i realised it i was like,"holy shit... this is intense!" XXXDDD then i started laughing like a deranged maniac.
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Reviewed By: inuyasha lov3r [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2007 17:13 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story is so good! Your style of writing is great!!! The love scenes are super! Its very original I've never read a story like this before! They are my favorite couple!!! Please update soon!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Shadesof Night114 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2007 21:02 PDT
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As always....YOU ARE FREAKING AWSOME!!!!! lOVE THIS LAST CHAPTER ROCKS!!! do kags and sessy really have to part? you would think they be better together. but u know the plot line better than anyone. lol.... Anyways keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: sweetkijo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2007 09:11 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was absolutely a delicious chapter!! Wow, just wow!! He flippin loves her...but I gues it is true in a way, he doesnt trust her. He could have entrusted her with his plans...because If I know Kags, she will stop at nothing to solve the mystery as well as go after the evil that has risen. Ahh, love is grande, ne? Thanks for the update. Take care!
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2007 18:08 PDT
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Congrates on the Victory...well..winning of the contest....XD....I'm glad you desurve it.......This was a crazy Chapter but I realy feel bad for Kagome, Sesshoumaru is being selfish, She could seriously help, and how is she suppose to know its him when he comes back for her.....grrrr.........Why did you have to have that spy at that moment like there wasn't enough of a cliffy with the two people making love in the open near a village....gess.....well all I could say is that you need to up date soon..../O.O\............Nyuka
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Title: Poor Kagome...
Reviewed By: PitaBread [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2007 16:10 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have enjoyed this fic immensely. You have great writing, lemons included. I was thrilled when I saw that a new chapter was posted. And I was not disappointed. The scene with Uchuu and the other monkey's was great, and felt real. The best part for me, though, was the parts with Sesshoumaru and Kagome, and how upset she was with his disobediance of telling her who he is. You could really feel her pain. Very well written. I'm anxious for the next chapter. As sadistic or masochistic as it sounds (because at this point I'm not sure if I like the pain or if I secretly want them to hurt, lol) I want to know how their seperation will go. I know both of them are going to be dying inside, and it's going to make for some beautifully angsty writing. Can't wait! I hope things go well with you until then...
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Title: update
Reviewed By: monk-miko On: September 12, 2007 19:43 PDT
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Just wondering when you were going to write another chapter. This story is just to good to just stop now. I've been waiting for the next chapter for like forever. This is getting to good to just leave it unfinished. Hope that you write another chapter or two like the last time soon. I just can't wait anymore. I just had to write you and see when the next chapter is going to come.LOL:D
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Title: Lovely
Reviewed By: demonlordlover On: September 10, 2007 09:44 PDT
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I'm so sorry I am late reviewing this chapter. The scene was beautiful, of course. You do smut so well, but this...There was a soulfulness to it that made it something entirely more than just another sex scene.
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Title: hows the story end
Reviewed By: sam00 On: September 04, 2007 17:52 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please countinue writing
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