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| "Violation of Honor" Reviews/Comments [ 497 ] | | Pages (34): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] | Title: youkailover1
Reviewed By: youkailover1 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2008 21:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. Its nice to see Kagome as a strong character able to obtain respect for her powers and its nice to see Sesshomaru with a conscience. I like the way you explained that such a violation like rape doesn't ever really go away, you have to find ways to handle it and move past the pain of it. Really good, very impressed with the depth of characters and plot that you've developed; can't wait for the ending and epilogue. Great!!
| Title: Love
Reviewed By: ktshabatie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2008 13:46 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again, an amazing chapter! I only noticed one typo this time: "Must've done something awful for his lordship to say that. I have been in his service since he was a lad, and not once has he ever given on order like that." I believe the "ON" in "on order like that" should just be an "an." ^_^
| Title: My Response to KawaiiGirl's review
Reviewed By: Rinseternalsoul [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2008 16:18 PDT
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Clearly, Kagome was not being racist. That's just silly and to remove the word because it 'might' be construed of such is ridiculous. In chpt 1, Asuza is described as: : "Her thick mane of auburn hair fell around her face, sending spiraling waves of color over her shoulders and down to brush lightly just above the enticing curve of her hip." The dictionary describes the word Nappy as:curly, frizzy, unmanageable hair. Kagome simply used a derogatory word about her enemy's hair. Since the enemy is not a woman of color, there is nothing racist about it. As that idiot Don Imus proved, it can be used as a racist remark, but instead of automatically striking it from the english language, shouldn't we mentally ask the question, 'Is it racism, or is it a negative word used to describe curly, frizzy, unmanageable hair?' (hair like MINE! lol!) Don't take offense when there is none intended. Unfortunately, KawaiiGirl said that the use of that word ruined the entire 12,700 word chapter. What a shame. According to her I wrote 12,699 words that she liked, but ruined it all with 1. My advice to you, KawaiiGirl, is not to seek out offense where there is none. If you are a human rights advocate, then you should have much more serious issues to contend with than Kagome calling Asuza's hair nappy.
| Reviewed By: Doberbitch [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2008 21:21 PDT
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OMG what an awesome chapter! I, we, loved it! Rinseternalsoul we were sooooo talking about this chapter! Let me just say that back in the day, I have no doubts the prisoners of war were raped, and what the Sess's guards did rings truth to the what would had happened. Amazing that you tapped on that! I have no doubt that it would have been Iku's likely fate. Sadly, this is coming to an end. What a great, gusty story! ******Doberbitch
| Reviewed By: PitaBread [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2008 21:08 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Rin, my love, this chapter was WELL worth the wait. It pretty much had everything I love about SessKag fanfiction in it. There was smut, retribution, smut, drama, smut, the jealous glares of a certain taiyoukai, smut, painfully funny Miroku thoughts, smut, painfully funny Sesshoumaru thoughts (I can practically hear him growling, thinking about his father laughing at him!
| Reviewed By: west On: July 24, 2008 15:08 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mwahahahaha! He got it good. Cant wait to see the next chapter. All the awaited questions to be answered. Keep up the great work and update soon.. ^_^
| Title: Awesome, Sexy, Scary - CHICKENBOY!
Reviewed By: Kagome357 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2008 03:42 PDT
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I meant to review earlier but I received news of a friend's death and haven't had a chance to see the story until now. I will address one thing that I did read in the reviews before I start my own and that's to the comments made by KawaiiGirl. While I understand where she's coming from about the "nappy" word, as a black woman, honestly I wasn't offended by it because I do have friends who have locs and natural hair and declare themselves "happy to be nappy" and there's nothing wrong with it or Rin's use of it. It did make me do a double take because it stood out in a story where, uh, you don't think of straight haired Japanese to have nappy hair and no, not all races have nappy hair and regardless of the race, nappy hair isn't viewed by a lot as a positive thing so I think that's what Kawaii was getting at, be it for me to interpret her meaning. It didn't ruin the story for me though so eh? I'm hoping this won't turn into a big assed debate in the review section because this certainly isn't the place for it. Anyhoo, tight chapter - the sex was totally hot! A man whose willing to "taste himself" is alright in my book. The pain of him relating what he went through was palpable and Kag's helping him out in that regard was nothing short of remarkable. Inuyasha seems to be accepting the relationship and his feelings for Saya are so adorably cute. As far as the last part is concerned, I kinda skimmed a little because I'm not comfortable with rape but CHICKENBOY DESERVED IT!! HE DESERVED IT AND THEN SOME!! I hope Sess and Uchuu beat the everlovingshit out of him in the dungeon...well, after a battalion of guards have their way! It serves him right - you do that to someone, it comes back on you tenfold. I'm feeling sad now because I sense the story's about to end. I mean there's no way to stretch the happily ever after out to another 15 chapters so awww...Anyway, great story. It's always worth the wait to read this gem. Congrats on the awards and I'll see ya soon!
| Title: All right!
Reviewed By: rage2velvet [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2008 14:56 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great update! Loved the part about Iku getting his just desserts! Perfect! I hope he comes to enjoy it which would be horrible for him. Glad Kagome was able to help Sesshoumaru heal. And the twins are adorable! Looks like Sango will have some new slayers to train, huh?
| Title: Darogatory Comments
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2008 16:02 PDT
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Hey, KawaiiGirl, grow some skin, nappy hair, aka: tightly curled hair happens in every walk of life, and in every race on the planet. You're the one who is trying to make it something else.
| Title: Revenge
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2008 15:58 PDT
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Revenge is a dish best served cold, and this one had plenty of time for cooling. Bwahahahahahahaha
| Title: Avid Reader
Reviewed By: KawaiiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2008 03:32 PDT
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This chapter was pretty good. I'm glad Iku has finally gotten what he deserves. Maybe now things can become "normal". I do want to see how everyone will respond to Kagome. Luckily, Uchuu and his will be there. I have a feeling they'll need all the support they can get right now. Just hoping the scene doesn't become too domesticated (those are horrible). One more thing. I feel compelled to share some of my... disappointment with this chapter. I'm not sure if the comment was intentional or not (though considering it's not applicable to that particular character, I'd have to question your brand of insults), but Kagome's little rant early on in the chapter was, very well placed, I feel, worded incorrectly. I'm very human rights oriented and a bit of an activist, so "Kagome clenched her fists. 'I wish she were here now, because I'd pull every single hair from her nappy head.'" didn't seem like the "right" thing to say in this instance Either way, it's a derogatory statement, offensive and honestly ruined the chapter for me.
| Reviewed By: FluffyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2008 21:03 PDT
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finally!! iku is getting what he deserves!!! i'm glad kagome and sesshomaru are mated and are going to get married. :D i can hardly wait for more! and don't worry about it being late, my chaps always are. lol. FL
| Reviewed By: lockedincar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2008 20:09 PDT
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amazing. I need to go back and read it again from the beginning soon. i love chappies with lemony goodness. and revenge. and cuteness. everything a person could want!
| Reviewed By: Dragon Dagger [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2008 22:21 PDT
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Lather rinse repeat! Another badassed chapter from my favorite writer, and just in time for my birthday. Maybe the next chapter will come out in time for my birthday too? nah. 11 days isn't enough time for you two write something completely incredible for the next chapter as you have been for these last few chapters. I hope that Kagome wants in on the "fun" with Iku. I can just see her purifying his dick and balls off one pain-filled centimeter at a time, stripping his balls with her powers before purifying them one at a time, then going for the dick.... Oh my. I think my mind got away from me there. Hope I gave you ideas LOL. DD
| Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2008 21:43 PDT
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i am so glad kagome helped sesshomaru get over his trauma and sesshomaru letting out his fears, he was very brave. as for his former rapist, the bastard deserves everything that the guards can dish out. as for the orphan, i knew sango wouldn't turn them away, especially since they are going through some changes due to the red dust from the amulet that was destoryed. update soon. i would like to know more.
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