| "Heart's Landfill" Reviews/Comments [ 1155 ] |
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Reviewed By: future author On: September 03, 2007 19:48 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love your story. It funny too. I can't wait to see what happens next between kag and inu. So update soon and keep up the excellent writing. Good luck!!!!
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2007 10:33 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter from agreat author, nice. It was beautiful how you discribed how it feels to be loved. And thats what most people need, want, craved, and do anything in their power to have. Well hope you update and keep it up. Peace...
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2007 00:31 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwww i felt heart broken at the end T-T all Kagome wants is to feel loved T-T
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Reviewed By: serenity101 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2007 19:57 PDT
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poor kagome she's feeling unloved. great chapter love the story. You gotta update real soon
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2007 16:59 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another good chapter. Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru are hilarious....if a bit HARD on each other to say the least. There is definitely love there....but it's well-hidden, LOL. As for the trip to America, I have no doubt that Sesshoumaru is going to find some way to make sure that Kagome goes on the trip. The fact that he knows that Inuyasha is betting on her saying no ensures that he is going pull out all the stops to get her on that plane, if just to piss Inuyasha off. Oh, brotherly love, LOL. But, more seriously, it's so clear from Kagome's sadness at the end of the chapter and from Inuyasha's cursing denials that they both want and need someone of their own to love. They're just so DAMAGED. But, hopefully it'll get better (if no quieter) in their lives from now on, lol.
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Title: Great as always
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2007 12:14 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you very much for the update. This chapter was awesome. I loved how Inuyasha and Sesshomaru were fighting with their swords (shirtless). (Thanks for the image) I also liked how Rin was combing his hair. That is so sweet. And how Kagome and Sango were playing 20 questions was funny. I can't wait for the business trip. I see really great things happening there. (at least I hope) Keep up the terrific splendid work. I get giddy inside when I see your update.... so please please please update soon. Your story is amazing!!!! ---Amy
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Reviewed By: lostgirl1 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2007 09:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
once again, a masterpiece. i can't wait to see how it turns out!
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Reviewed By: Kawaii-KeKe-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2007 09:33 PDT
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Aww! Poor Kagome! I'm sure Inu will cheer her up on their 'buisness trip' :P Update when pos!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2007 01:09 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SOOOOO MAD!!!!!! Kagome couldnt accpet his sorry :O tisk tisk....... but i cant wait for a little fluff soon lol.... ooo and Sesshy was trying to be smart ass making them stay together a little longer ehhehehe lol
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Reviewed By: DragonKitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2007 16:27 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man! I havent had a chance to catch up on this story in so long! So much has happened, ne? well it's damn good! and good for inu in taking the 1st step in the right direction of not being such an ass! (die koga and Kikiyo!) -Christina-chan
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Reviewed By: Briana_D [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2007 06:49 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! This fic is the best...I tried so hard to avoid reading it cause I thought the summary was hokey BUT I'm so glad that I finally got round to reading it. I would sure have missed this littel gem. Your story is absolutely FAB! Everything from the characterisation to the plot is well thought of. It is so well written that I could almost visualise the whole thing. I think both Inuyasha and Kagome rock in this story though of course, Kagome is way cooler than Inuyasha. If I could I would have given you a rating of 20. This is an awesome fic and all power to you for doing such a good job. Looking forward to your next post....Briana
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Reviewed By: lostgirl1 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2007 19:34 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
bravo! another amazing chapter. you rock
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2007 14:46 PDT
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Nice. That was rather intertaning and funny as always. Hope you update and keep it up, its getting good. Peace...
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Reviewed By: lemon_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2007 12:27 PDT
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The hanyou felt like his mother had just caught him, with his pants down around his ankles and his dick in his hands. this line is soo bukowsky!
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Title: jtcl
Reviewed By: not log in On: August 25, 2007 04:22 PDT
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I like this chapter I can not want in still you put the next chapter in.
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