| "Heart's Landfill" Reviews/Comments [ 1155 ] |
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2007 01:05 PDT
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In the words of future jail bird Paris Hilton "That's Hot", wow, now that's what I call a dream. It's funny that what was so easy in the beginning (Kags and Inu's romp)is now harder than hell. So this is what happens when a one night stand goes wrong, hahaha. This was a funny chapter, Update soon.
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2007 20:57 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another good chapter. A little stalkerish, wasn't he? I can't wait until Kagome figures it out. Those two are probably going to just screw each other silly at first, LOL; but I can't wait until they have to look at the deeper attraction after that. It isn't just sex, even though they would definitely like to think that.
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2007 23:00 PDT
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Well Inu had to use a smut bucket to get his rocks off, boo hoo hooo for him ;) Unfortunately I can relate to what Kagome went through with that her blind date, I think we've all met the overconfident, can't shut my mouth, loser. Did Inuyasha realize who Kagome was and will he get with her next chapter? Can't wait for the next read.
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2007 20:59 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG, Inuyasha is a cold bastard! I don't feel too sorry for the woman at the beginning of the chapter (she really was a slut, boning a guy she just met before she even knew his name!) But, still, he was very much a jerk. And yet again, if the only women he is associating with are skanks like that, he doesn't have much reason to change his negative opinion of women. Now Kagome's date was just a complete loser; I had no problem with what she did to him at all. Sango surely could have done better than that! As I said before, their friends have a LONG road ahead of them dealing with these two cynics. And I look forward to seeing it play out.
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2007 19:05 PDT
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oh man that was hot...great writing...totally felt the intensity...i cant wait for an update on this or your other story...so please update soon
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2007 18:53 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww Inuyasha has turn into a bad puppy >.< lol please update soon im loving this ^^
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2007 18:49 PDT
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so he got het hot and bothered in on sitting cool!, well i bet the next chapter will b the bomb just like the others
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Reviewed By: Jessie Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2007 12:18 PDT
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You must update soon! I totally LOVE THIS STORY!!! *sighs* Poor Yasha & Kags, they both have broken hearts and totally hate the opposite sex... they are PERFECT for eachother. They really need to go on a blind date together, and soon! OOoo! I think it would be cool if you got Kagome going on a blind Date with Hojo first... (maybe he can be the guy that was smiling at her at the mall?) *lol* --Anyway, I can't wait 'till Yash and Kags meet eachother and hear what the other has to say ^^
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2007 01:34 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Here's my 2cents, you have definately written a winner here. You've got my attention, I really like this story and I don't think that your characters are too OOC as yet. I'm already anticiapting the moment when Kagome meets Inuyasha, it's going to be explosive. Please,Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2007 19:07 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwwww Inuyasha saw Kagome ^.^ i love love it!! ^.^ and i would do anything to get to a spa right now........ lol anyways update soon ^^
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2007 17:17 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dun dun DUN...oh boy it is going to get good...update soon...cant wait for the love drama to begin...should be funny
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2007 16:32 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, MAN, their friends and family have their work cut out for them. Kagome and Inuyasha are AWFUL......but it's equally awful how much pain they must have gone through to get to that point. They would definitely make a good match, with all their stubborness and cynicism....but it is going to be like pulling teeth to get them there, LOL.
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Title: Oh wow
Reviewed By: Charmander [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2007 16:24 PDT
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I found this story entertaining and easy to follow. I look forward to reading more.
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Reviewed By: elementalobsession On: April 26, 2007 21:53 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
What was that quote? Oh yeah... "Love is insanity, curable by marriage." Lol. Don't remember who said it though.
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2007 15:17 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great start. I really like the back story on Kagome and Inuyasha. They've both been through the wringer with their respective loves (to say the least!). I can't wait to see how all of this plays out.
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