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Title: Obsessed
Reviewed By: Shaelyn-Bobaelyn [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2009 12:58 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was reading chapter 34 and one thing stuck to me. The fact that Totosai said she was barren! I mean, you can use the fact that he's senile, but I don't think that a demon would be able to miscalculate the smell of a pregnant woman, then I think back. *Currently rambling realllly fast* the first time Inuyasha and Kagome had sex, they didn't use a condom, only after that, they did!!!!!! I have a feeling this wont be brought up again, but... my god, that made me excited.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2009 03:14 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*eye twitches* in a way i now know why i left to read this a while.... if that is Koga.... Ooo god all hell will break loose!!!! and i kinda read the part where Kagome called Sesshy twice for some strange reason lol
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Reviewed By: Tueske [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2009 22:04 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! You can't do that! You just can't do that to us! Kagome IS NOT supposed to be with Kouga... It's InuYasha who is her MAN! Damn the human and his weakened flesh. *sniff* And I want Inu and Kagome to be together too. Now Kagome goes and fucks it all up by letting herself get all wrapped up in Kouga... It is the bastard Kouga right... and not InuYasha! AAAARRRGH! The suspense is killin' me! Hurry and update would ya? ^_^
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Reviewed By: EarthSong [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2009 20:01 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Amazing! Im literally at the edge of my seat! Can't wait for the next one! keep'em coming!
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Title: Chap 53
Reviewed By: EliFanel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2009 19:55 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are right I will scream... but not flaming. THIS WAS GREAT!... one of the best… :D Thanks for this fast update and really... we are all waiting for the next update... anxiously........ seriously!... You are mean... LOL ;)
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Reviewed By: lostgirl1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2009 10:08 PDT
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amazing! again, with the cliff hangers! still, another great chapter. keep it up!
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: deipurple [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2009 05:42 PDT
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the last two chapters were awesome. I was a bit behind. She has to be kissing Inu... I could not imagine he lack of faith and love in Inu. If she can give into Kouga like that then her feelings for Inu can not be true and real. I don't cake how pissed and confused she is. And who is throwing the furniture around? But damn it was some good writing.
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Reviewed By: thelambtohislion On: June 15, 2009 22:18 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pshhh. as if that could be anyone other than inuyasha...
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Reviewed By: thelambtohislion On: June 15, 2009 20:18 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kouga knows Caesar? Who knew? its a very nice addition, though.
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Reviewed By: thelambtohislion On: June 15, 2009 15:32 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the gay microsoft freak? lol nice.
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Reviewed By: Niiicko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2009 12:31 PDT
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Ahhhhhh!!! o_o
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Reviewed By: Midoriko-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2009 09:27 PDT
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*blink* That there at the end... That's not _Kouga_ is it, for crying out loud...
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Reviewed By: theknightcallsmyname [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2009 06:39 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This a great story! Please don't leave us hanging like that...please post the next chapter soon!
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Reviewed By: ChibiRin (offline) On: June 15, 2009 05:36 PDT
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Sesshoumaru is so funny in this chapter. "Complete and utter...jackass."
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Reviewed By: youkaineko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2009 01:52 PDT
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Inuyasha or Kouga? Inuyasha or Kouga? That is gonna bug me till you update next. Hopefully that will be sooner rather than later. The one possibility I haven't seen anyone else mention though is that it might be demon Inuyasha. His demon side seems to be very nonverbal, and Inuyasha blackouts the time when he is that way. So why not just nock and then grab her with no explanation. It would be in character for that aspect of him. And while Kagome notices the physical differences, she is unaware of how dangerous that other form can be and has yet to even realize that he thinks differently when like that. The really sad thing is even if it is the demon side of Inuyasha, he might still be a bonehead about who his mate is afterwards because he won't remember kissing her.
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