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Reviewed By: mynera [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2009 04:16 PDT
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And hell breaks loose. =]
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Reviewed By: Tarzan from fanfic.net On: June 14, 2009 03:10 PDT
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oh man is she with inuyasha or kouga?! two updates in like a week awesome, can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2009 00:41 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful chapter, I'm not going to flame you at all...unless it turns out to be Kouga at the end there, which I seriously doubt. It was obviously your desire to leave us all guessing, though, and for that I say Kudos. But I'm trying to break this thing down logically. She wouldn't react like that to Kouga, or at least I would certainly hope not, plus there was that whole Yuka asking her out clubbing thing when Kouga was talking with Yuka, so if he's planning on getting Kagome that way, why suddenly show up at the shrine out of nowhere? Plus that little anonymous blurb about "somebody" going bat-crazy to realize he was so close because somebody had moved, when they were just going to somebody's place to paint a family portrait? That was definitely Inuyasha's thoughts, and he just left the house to get some air, going roof-jumping, so he obviously picked up Kagome's scent and his feet brought him right to her. Pulling her so forcefully against himself like that makes sense because the idiot probably really did think it was going to kill him, until he realized his youkai blood was howling for joy, so maybe he has finally realized the obvious. Duh, Inuyasha! Oh, the first time I heard my blood speak to me was when I got in that fight with Ginta over the shit that happened to Kagome, then I went full-youkai and ran to her place to make sure she was really okay, but she couldn't possibly be my mate! LOL. It's a tad farfetched just how stupid Inuyasha really is being, I mean, who else did he think his blood was whispering "mine" about while lying in bed next to Kagome? But they are both damaged goods, so irrational behavior is to be expected, including Kagome's little freak-out right at the end there. All in all, I really love this chapter, and this whole damn story, for that matter.
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Reviewed By: delivishdr3am [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2009 00:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just adore this story. Its so amazing to read!!! It gets my heart beating so fast, i feel like im in the story myself! LOL. Keep up the good work! Hope you update soon. P.S I think she was kissing Kouga at the end. Why would she wonder if Inuyasha would kidnap her.... thats y I think its Kouga.... great cliff hanger... you always leave us wanting more...
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Reviewed By: inugirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2009 23:36 PDT
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that better not be kouga at the end of this chapter! i think i will just have to cry if it is >.
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Reviewed By: Patricia_loras [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2009 22:55 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, great story, great chap. I can't wait to read the next one!!!!!!!!! Thk u for posting so frequently!
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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2009 20:59 PDT
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that better be Inu and he better make him listen to her
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Reviewed By: wthlovex [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2009 20:36 PDT
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Awesome story! All I hope is that it IS INUYASHA she is kissing at the end of the chapter...otherwise I might cry.
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Reviewed By: AvidRabid [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2009 20:27 PDT
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Now I know its Inu Yasha shes kissing... But I can't help being a little worried that it might be Kouga... Anywho, great chapter, and I can't wait for Inu Yasha to realise Kagome is his mate... He can be so useless sometimes... Update soon!
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 (not signed in) On: June 13, 2009 19:24 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I had no idea what you meant when you said we would hate you for this chapter. Then I got to the end and wanted to throw an apple at your ass. lol. You are such a big meanie doing that to us! But I will praise you for another great chapter...and so soon after your last update too! I was not expecting it, so it made it all the more sweeter. Good luck with the rest of your classes and I'm very happy your updating again. :)
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Reviewed By: little_wierd [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2009 18:04 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I dunno about this one... I mean the chapters AWsome as usual XD butt between Koga and inuyasha which one is it.. Itd be AWsome if it was inu Yasha cus well he finlly realised but if it was koga how could inuyasha forgive her its Cheating.. which is wrong no Matter WHat even if they just broke up still cheating adn a buzz kill.. keep writing!
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Reviewed By: Tisha19 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2009 17:00 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy this story, even the cliffhangers that leave me at the edge of my seat especially this latest one. I loved for it to be Inuyasha but I know its probably Kouga :( My goodness, Inuyasha is so dense!!!
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Reviewed By: crazykiss [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2009 16:15 PDT
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Please let it be Inuyasha at the end of the chapter Please let it be Inuyasha at the end of the chapter Please let it be Inuyasha at the end of the chapter Please let it be Inuyasha at the end of the chapter Please let it be Inuyasha at the end of the chapter Please let it be Inuyasha at the end of the chapter Please let it be Inuyasha at the end of the chapter Please let it be Inuyasha at the end of the chapter Please let it be Inuyasha at the end of the chapter Please let it be Inuyasha at the end of the chapter
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Reviewed By: crazykiss [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2009 15:56 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have a sick obsession for cliffhangers don't you! LOL but I am by no means here to flame or bash this chapter because you honestly can't go wrong! You are too talented and thanks so much for posting early! Hopefully it'll become a habit *wink wink*
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2009 15:33 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. But I'm honestly about to rip my hair out here. Surely Inuyasha is not this slow?! He can't possilbly be this much of an idiot...but apparently he IS. Oh, well...that's just pitiful, lol. I just hope that Inuyasha is the one Kagome is kissing at the end of this chapter....because I'm not quite sure that it's him. She may be kissing Kouga by reflex...but I certainly hope not. I can't wait to find out!
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