| "Heart's Landfill" Reviews/Comments [ 1155 ] |
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Reviewed By: Niiicko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2009 07:43 PDT
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I can't wait for the next part! o_o dun dun duuunnn!!!
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Reviewed By: luvininu28 On: June 09, 2009 06:43 PDT
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Wow!! Great chapter!! Where to begin...hmm. I guess I'll start by the rage I felt towards Yuka's manipulation. Unless she had a gun to her head or a knife at her throat, I won't care what happens to her in the end. As for Kagome's mom, I'm going to wager a different guess...she's in love with someone new maybe? Inuyasha's demon being more pronounced is no shock, but I thought you captured the panic and anguish he felt amazingly. I can't wait to see where the story goes from here. It's really a great story!!!! Thanks for the update!!!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2009 02:33 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow... there was alot happening there... what Yuka is doing is fishy... that stupid wolf is probly forcing her doing this... or probly telling her she can have anything she want if she made Kagome come out >.> those two are thinking about marriage?! kids these days are getting worst LOL but Kagome's mum got me puzzled... maybe shes sick, but not in a bad way sick... hmmmm... and someone's is getting cranky coz their mate isnt around XD but i gotta say, that was my fav bit! but when Inuyasha said "There's a voice in my head, Sesshomaru, and it's not mine." it makes me shiver somehow... but your toturing them both!!! make Inuyasha go get her and drag her off to the family holiday XD
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Reviewed By: Bre'Auna Kemp On: June 09, 2009 02:30 PDT
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i loved it.So yasha demon is comming out to play because it is lookin for Kagome. So they must be each outhers tru mates then. awwwwwwwww and can some one plz kill kouga
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2009 23:06 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Rubs palms* I'd say that it was just getting good, but this story has been "good" since the very beginning. But it's definitely building up to a very dramatic climax of sorts. I wasn't worried for a second when Inuyasha started thinking about having a quickie, because even if he wasn't already experiencing adverse effects from the touch of all women not his mate, in the end, he would just never be able to do that to Kagome. But now it looks like Sesshoumaru will be able to spread some light on the subject. I wonder what his reaction will be when he learns what his youki has been doing behind his back. And as for Yuka, wasn't she with Kouga the last time we saw her? I'd bet dollars to donuts that he's behind her inviting Kagome out to that lounge. The one thing that really has me scratching my head is Kagome's mom. At first I just thought that she was sensing that Kagome was holding back with Inuyasha, trying to get her to see for herself how deeply she truly does love the man, but Kagome's worry has me worried. IS something else going on with Mrs. H? Okay, she doesn't smell sick...so that's good at least. Guess I'll just have to wait and see. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: bigfanofiykag [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2009 21:10 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, Sorry I haven't written a review in a while. I just have not had the time or the space to read a story let alone write a review. Man, this story is really starting to get to me. I can't wait to see what happens next. What is that Yuka up to? What the hell is wrong with InuYasha and when the hell is Kagome going back to Tokyo? Hell, there's no way in hell I'd stay away from my man that long unless one of my family members was dying and so far all Kagome's been doing is stalling and partying. I actually feel sorry for poor InuYasha. Well, keep the chapters coming. Take care.
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Reviewed By: AvidRabid [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2009 19:52 PDT
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It really did take you long enough jeez... And I'm so confused! But in a good way, I kinda think I have an idea about whats going on with Inu, and even with Kagomes mom, but I'm not sure... So you need to hurry, cause I'm curious... It was a great chapter, can't wait for the next one!
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2009 18:46 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I really hope that Sesshoumaru can FINALLY get Inuyasha to understand what's happening to him> His body and heart have obviously already acknowledged what Kagome truly is to him, even if his mind is still protesting. I can't wait to see what comes of the brothers little talk. Very good chapter.
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Reviewed By: crazykiss [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2009 14:59 PDT
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YOU ARE SUCH A BEAUTIFUL WRITER! Thank You for giving me something to read that exceeded my expectations of a good fic. I hope things are looking up for you (I'm not up to your latest updated chapter, so I don't know if things have gotten any better. I'm very sorry for what has happened and trust me, I know exactlly what you're going through just like many others do. Luckily things do pass and we heal as time goes on. Just hang in there!) Once again, this is an amazing fic, thankyou so much for writing it. I just had to take a break from it to tell you how great it is, buut I am off to continue reading.
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Reviewed By: *Zetsuii* On: May 16, 2009 00:23 PDT
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Awwww man that was soo good...I should have read it sooner...I absolutely loved the bee part though...i was laughing just as hard...very well written...and also to get the emotions of all the characters...again bravo...love it and cant wait for the next chapter
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2009 05:47 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
god, stupid school keeping me away from reading this! i guess Ayame isnt in a good way to hunt down Kagome at the moment... or maybe she is... XD i swear i could smack Yuka and Koga.... *starts glaring at thin air*
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Reviewed By: Ravens_Ashs On: May 12, 2009 21:28 PDT
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Thank you for explaining the last chapter to me. It makes more sense now to me...hehehe. Can I ask permission to smack Yuka upside the head...hehehe. I love the story and hope to read more of it really soon. Take care and keep up the great work. Raven
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Title: 'good' is a major understatement
Reviewed By: GoldenDust [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2009 22:15 PDT
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God I love your story! :D
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Reviewed By: FoxyLove [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2009 06:47 PDT
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aw poor ayame n for sum reason i rele dnt lyk yuka ugh she jus upsets me soo much her racist back stabbin cheating wit her so called best friends bf behind! ugh i hope koga tells her dat he luvs kag n nt her dat he jus used her n dat she was ntn compared to kags mayb den shell gt da picture. well luved dis chapter cant wait fir the next one! -FoxyLove
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Title: BEES!!!
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2009 22:32 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kouga is such a pr!ck, I'll be having cake and eating it too when Inuyasha lays the smack down on his phyco ass...
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