| "Heart's Landfill" Reviews/Comments [ 1155 ] |
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Reviewed By: loulou *nsi* On: May 09, 2009 14:36 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I had my hopes up that she would be returning to Inu this chapter...but it was very good none the less. Funny chapter indeed...with the bee's. Poor puppy. lol.
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Reviewed By: Niiicko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2009 08:02 PDT
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Wow! So much anger in this chapter! We need some Kagome/Inu lovin' to clear the mood! ;p Another great chapter! Can't believe it's gonna be over soon!
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Title: woohoo
Reviewed By: Animegirl1 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2009 14:16 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
im so glad you wrote another chapter but its so cruel that you make us wait this long. cruel i tell you CRUEL!
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Reviewed By: deipurple [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2009 13:07 PDT
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wow this swas quite interesting. And I wonder how Ayama is going to handle things. I am sad that Ginta died. and Yuma... what is up with that .. Kagome has a relationship problem with one guy and it is not like there was a stream of failed relationships and she ran to her friends... so it is quite obvious... she is jealous. Or maybe she is predudice. This getting more and more intriguing.. I can't wait to read more.
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Title: Wonderful
Reviewed By: inulover [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2009 20:43 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love this fic so far. I'm not exactly current yet since I've been reading between classes but I'll tell you I was up way too late yesterday reading and knowing I had class in the morning but I couldn't stop. Your an amazing writer. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2009 18:51 PDT
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OMG this was so intense I wanted to cry so bad at the end...very well written as you got everyone's emotions perfectly...I cant wait for the next chapter so update soon...I love it and need more XD
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Reviewed By: Ravens_Ashs On: April 27, 2009 08:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, I've been reading your story for a little while now and I was hooked as soon as I read it. I'm sorry to hear that you are going to be finishing it soon. The only thing I was wondering about in this chapter was in the beginning of the chapter I don't know who is talking. Is Kouga talking about himself in the 1st person or is he listening to someone else talking to Din's widow? Keep up the great work;).
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2009 05:38 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooo Kagome should have ran Yuka OVER!! *screams* FUCKING KOGA!! hes completely lost it now.. first poor Ayame.... but omg... i was in tears, more like im still in tears... WHY GINTA?! WHY TAKE HIM AWAY?! WHY!????????!!!!!! and i thought i was going to sob loudly when i was reading that Hakkaku was going to die... im a wreck now... tears everywhere, makeup everywhere.. Ooo god.. and no... Kagome is going to hear this, her and Koga are going to met up at the funeral.. and NO!!!
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Title: Standing Ovation
Reviewed By: Tueske [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2009 01:47 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That has got to be the utmost provocative chapter that you've written yet! Maybe it has something to do with me beng little under the influence right now. ;) I mean the way everything in the entire chapter was so fucking forceful! I'm sorry please excuse the language folks... but O_O ... holy mother of kami-sama! Let's first begin how you started the chapter... the menacing train of thoughts that were going through Kounga's head was mf'n awesome! I've NEVER in all my years of reading and writing fanfiction, have I ever read ANY one person portray Kouga in the way that you have just now! In most reads that we find Kouga is a either a hot headed badass who's all bark and never enough bite OR he's just a seriously wimpy wolf whom NEVER can hold his own and is a sorry ass excuse for a wolf demon! Now I know that I may seriously be pushing myself to be banned for this review for my repulsive language, but I seriously can't think of any other was to seriously describe how ABSOLUTEY fucking awesome this chapter was alone! I mean take his situation with Ayame for instance... in most fics everyone always hooks our boy Kouga with her one way or the other... and she wins her man! But in your fic Kouga has absolutely no regard be it physical, intimate, affectionately or anything else that can even come close to being some type of blissful feeling. He LOATHES her with every fiber of her being and cannot stand who she is as a demonness. I mean I'm so sorry about the really long review but once I get through praising this beautiful piece of work (considering IF I have enough room to do such), you can calmly sit down and take in the warm fuzzy feeling-ness that come's from a review of an absolutely awed fan. Now, as for Kagome... I seriously didn't know the bitch had it in her. I mean she totally threw me for a loop when she fought back for the sake of her man's good name! The words the flew from her mouth were like bullets... each one forcefully piercing right through the flesh. I mean she practically stoned Yuka! And I must say the dumb hag deserved it! You know jealously will get you absolutely nowehere in life but on the tail ass end of someone's stick!.... I am proud to annouce to the world that I call myself your devoted fan after the show of action I've just read in this chapter. And one part of your fic even foreshadowed a lil tidbit of the amazinly hot sex that transpires between Kagome and InuYasha. (Again I am praying to all of the Kami-sama's that control mediaminer.org that I am not banished from this site forever for my vulgar language...*sigh*) I'm just damned determined to get my point across to you as to how much I'm really enjoying this fic... forgive me for not reviewing for your last chapter.... I am more than sure that this one will make up for the last. But back to what I was saying, as for the little fiasco of ugliness that bloomed before us with Kouga, Ginta and Hakkaku.... I am at a loss for words. Kouga has overstepped so many boundaries beyond that I can't even come close to describe how much I HATE yet love this character form of Kouga. He took out his own comrade... the third person in the world that he really should have some semblance of camaraderie to. The absolute and utter pain that was shown in this fic that Hakkaku had to feel... the loss of something that you hold so dear to your heart... it hurts... it truly hearts. My heart cried out for the two brothers who have lost a bond so violently, painfully, tragically and intensely. The heroism that was shown between the two... was heartwarming... Holy skittles! If there ever were a term, word or phrase that I could use to describe to being beneath all of the microscopic organisims of the scum of the earth... I sure as hell would use it for Kouga.... and to just blow it off as if nothing happened... unforgivable... *sigh* I am eagerly awaiting to see what happens in the next chapter til then, Ja Ne
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Title: that will be one million monopoly dollars!
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2009 00:27 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm not liking how much I like this ultra evil psycho Kouga. Maybe I've been watching the Tudors to much, they glorify the crazy megalomaniacs to much.
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Reviewed By: Little Red [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2009 18:34 PDT
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holy crap! so now ayame knows... is she going to confront kouga? is she going to blame kagome? i dont know... and i wont, until you update... so update soon!
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Reviewed By: FoxyLove [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2009 14:29 PDT
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Omgudness Ginta and HAkkaku arent even big characters in the show and i still cried when Ginta died! There was just soo much sadness and emotion...Well once again great great chapter and i cant believe Yuka said that stuff to Kagome about her and Inuyasha! UGH!!! I actually wanted Kagome to beat her behind! UGHHH stupid tricks...lol so update soon!! -FoxyLove
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Reviewed By: xyanblues On: April 26, 2009 11:31 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg i cant believe that ginta is dead, i cant wait for kouga to die and rot in hell, and i feel so bad for ayame, she's so clueless and something is seriously wrong with yuka, this chapter was so sad please update soon
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader On: April 26, 2009 09:35 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*applause* You are really very talented. That was an excellent chapter. Kouga is C.R.A.Z.Y and I really can't wait to see what is going to happen next. Will Kouga find out Kagome is in town? What about Kikyo? We haven't seen hide nor hair of hers since the card incident...is something going to happen in Tokyo while Kagome is away? How the hell will she get him to trust her again? Please don't let him fall for it.....pretty please with sprinkles on top? I eagerly await the next chapter my favourite sadist *bows*.
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Reviewed By: mynera [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2009 08:07 PDT
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what a heart wrenching chapter. i was nearly in tears!
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