| "Displacement" Reviews/Comments [ 113 ] |
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Reviewed By: MisfitBride [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2008 01:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very intriguing story. I was surprised to see that it was finished without revealing if Yuka, was in fact, the modern day Yuka. Contrary to "King Baka" I did in fact find quite a few grammar and spelling mistakes. Not enough to detract from the story, though enough for a grammar Nazi like myself to stop and stare at for a few seconds. They are very common mistakes and I'm sure if you went back and looked at your story you would find them almost immediately. Well that said please continue writing and good luck. ^_^
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Reviewed By: FluffyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2008 11:10 CDT
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i really enjoyed this story, despite that it was an inu/kag. i'm a bit of a diehard sess/kag fan but i like to vary my reading every now and then, especially when the stories are well written and have good plot lines. this story has both and it deserves every award given. job well done.
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Reviewed By: King Baka [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2008 11:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very good action/adventure fic, and I would have gone higher than 10 on originality/creativity if I could. I especially enjoyed the interaction between Inuyasha and his father; we got to see a side of Inuyasha that we rarely see. That said, at several points I was left wondering why certain characters acted in certain ways. For example, would Inuyasha really leave Kagome in a hostile castle under the 'protection' of a man he completely doesn't trust? I'm not trying to be overly critical or pass judgment; it is your perogative as the author to follow your own ideas. Despite my reservations, this story kept me entertained from start to finish. In fact, I think you should list this story under the Suspense category as well. Listing this story under Romance is bit of a stretch, however. Overall, I highly enjoyed "Displacement." I'm a nut about bad grammar, and yours was almost impeccable. You also showed uniqueness and creativity that many fanfictions lack. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2008 02:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very nice I wonder if the cat demon would have servived did she you think. Nice endding
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Reviewed By: bert8813 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2008 00:11 CDT
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i just came across this story and i loved it!! all the historical facts were interesting and i loved how you protrayed inu's father.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2008 15:03 CDT
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Heh, awesome story. Continue to write, ja ne.
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Reviewed By: Aurorean [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2008 22:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful story! ^_^ I'm sorry to see it has finally come to an end... The whole story was well thought out, which made it all that more enjoyable. Not to mention that the end was fantastic! I liked that you had InuYasha thoughts at the end...It helps the reader to understand what was going through his head during there one week in the past. PS~I'll be looking forward to reading more of your fanfics!
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Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2008 18:03 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*claps hands* Bravo! A good ending, a very good ending. I was really able to feel what Inuyasha was feeling during this chapter, excellent work. Its a shame it is over now, but, i am now eagerly looking forward to your future stories. Thank you for this excellent piece of fanfiction, i thoroughly enjoyed it.
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Reviewed By: RavenShadow [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2008 02:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wildly imaginative and well written. This was truly a great story. Every chapter had you begging for more. I will have to look for you in the future. Good luck and great job!
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Reviewed By: anhimals [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2008 21:11 CDT
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i love your story! it was action pack and very original! the idea of inuyasha meeting his father is very touching. he can finally know what it is like to have a taiyoukai as a father. it is also nice to read that kagome can kick some ass. great story!
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2008 11:53 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice finish. I really enjoyed the histoical setting. It was intersting, and, most of all, DIFFERENT. Toom many stories can be plugged into a certain formula. This one didn't do that, and, believe me, I appreciate that. I also liked the father/son bonding with Toga and Inuyasha. You definitely made us wait a LONG time for it (lol), but it was definitely worth the wait. Great job, and I look forward to reading more from you soon.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2008 03:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
god i was in tears T-T... "I…I don't wanna say goodbye," i was fine but then I'll be losing you again." felt them coming and "I am always with you, my son," killed me completely... i had to stop and wipe the eyes lol and that was cute ^^ a little fluff for us at end :P and im soo happy Inuyasha got to be with his father ^^ and i learnt history! and it wasnt boring history i learnt from school lol and thank you SOOO much for writing this, and ill be definly (sp?) waiting for more 'Love Me, Hate Me' *starts giggling* :P
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Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2008 15:58 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
......... I.... have no words to describe how absolutely brilliant these chapters have been. I thought i could write intense action scenes, but this... wow, i could see it all in my mind crystal clear, the details were so amazing. I am sad to see this fic come to an end, but all good things have to end at some point i suppose. Now, all that remains is the final chapter, and knowing you, it will be a very fulfilling one. Looking forward to it! PS: Sorry for not reviewing sooner, had to catch up first :)
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Reviewed By: Kryptoinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2008 21:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was beyond words!!!!! A pissed off Kagome 'the knee' Higurashi...the fight sequences...WOW...and Toga totally kicks ASS!!! Oh...he's got to know now Inu-chan is his son! Kags just about confirmed it when she named Inu's fang! You are an awesome talent! Keep them coming! (So, I'm a kiss ass, deal with it! *wickedly smirking*)
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2008 05:33 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*starts breathing fast* OMG OMG OMG FINAL!!! OMG OMG OMG!! i wonder if Toga is gonna say something about Inuyasha being his son...
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