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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2008 22:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. Inuyasha is certainly between a rock and a hard place now, since he knows Kagome is in danger and can't get to her. Inuyassha is clearly going to need all that rage as they face this army. And Ryuichi finally chose sides. This plot is moving quickly now, and I look forward to seeing what happnes next.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2008 11:21 CDT
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Heh, becoming a corpse that cannot be killed again, that can only be done with several jewel shards, placed all over one's body. Without that, no effort can return a person back to life, or prevent them from ever dying. Heh, death comes for us all, and this fool thinks he has an exception. What a moron. Neh. COntinue to update, will ya? Ja ne.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2008 02:51 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
were close to the fight!! yay ^^ awww Inuyasha got scared about Kagome :P soo sweet :P
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Reviewed By: FreeDaChickens [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2008 17:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is very interesting; I love how you've kept all the characters in character while putting them in a entirely new situation. It moved a little slowly at the beginning, but it's definitely interesting now. I also really like how you've incorporated the actual historical events into your story, including having real people play major roles. I can't wait to see what happens next! FreeDaChickens
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Reviewed By: Kawa-Misuterii [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2008 14:56 CDT
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I wonder how long it'll take Inuyasha to rip Ying's head off once he learns that he's been trying to get into Kagome's pants...Great story, I can't wait till next month!
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Reviewed By: hanyouXmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2008 21:19 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This is a great story so far! I really enjoy reading this, and I really hope you update soon, because I really want to see what happens with Kagome. *squeals* This is so exciting! ^^
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Reviewed By: Zelix (Not signed in) On: April 13, 2008 10:04 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god, this is cool! The chapter was touching, really touching... but i also wonder, why didn't Toga revive his men with Tensaiga? Oh well, probably wasn't thinking too much about his sword at the moment, rather, about slaughtering Liu Bang :) But anyways, you described the transformation from his humanoid form to his demon form with really excellent details, thumbs up for you. It sucks about your computer, mine has had some problems too and even went kaput once, so i know the feeling. I wish you the best, and when the next chapter comes out, no rush, i will gladly read and review again. See ya next time!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2008 15:39 CDT
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i am wondering why toga didn't revive his men with tensaiga? . . . touching chapter, many revelations and some understanding. it would be interesting if toga was ultimately responsible for the well magic, it would explain a lot. ~ a pleasure as always, ginny
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Reviewed By: Silver Dog of the Snow [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2008 15:46 CDT
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Wow! The tension is exhilarating or however that is spelled. I can't wait for the next chapter or ore like the fate taht awaits Kagome and Inuyasha! Oh! The suspense is killing me! Great job! Beautifully done!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven (not logged in) On: April 06, 2008 01:18 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your a idiot.. who ever is under me, Toga doesnt die yet.. anyways ooo he transform!! * jumps in excitment* oooo i cant wait omg.. too excitment to do work now lol and got me guessing, if Toga truely knows who Inuyasha is..
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Title: Review Request
Reviewed By: Wine On: April 05, 2008 22:10 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great so far but I have a request. Don't let the father die.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2008 16:12 CDT
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Well shit. Definitely time to get some revenge, these don't get any mercy after what they did, they get a couple of wind scars straight up their assholes, as far as I'm concerned. Dishonorable bastards. Neh. Update again soon, ja ne.
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2008 16:12 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. This whole situation has to be tough....for both Inuyasha and Toga. How hard must it be to know that your days are numbered as soon as your first son is born? And how hard must it be to stand right next to the father you never met and pretend that he's nothing more to you than a fellow warrior? Those are really hard situations for father AND son, no matter how you look at it. And you are doing such a good job showing the complexity of all that. I look forward to reading more soon.
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Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2008 03:50 CST
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*clapping hands* Bravo! That was f*****g brilliant! Really well thought out chapter, and i really loved your theory behind Tensaigas healing power, really well thought out. This chapter was worth every single letter to read, and i hope to read more in the future! (PS: Thanks for the short, yet groovy reply to my Email :)
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Reviewed By: half cat demon kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2008 16:59 CST
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Okay, you really really need to update soon, I am dying to know what Song-sama and Toga-sama were talking about. I am so happy that you did mention Sesshoumaru, since he is my favorite Demon Lord and everything..Loved the chapter except the short ness. So plaese update soon!!!_HCDK
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