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Reviewed By: bigfanofiykag [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2008 14:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of my favorite stories to read. As soon as I get the email that it's been updated with a new chapter, I drop everything I'm doing at the moment to read it. You are a very talented and gifted writer. You know exactly how to spin that spider web to catch your readers attention and then keep them there until you gobble them up with your magnificent description and dialogue. I am one of your biggest fans. Please update as soon as you can and thank you for sharing your great gift. bigfanofiykag (P.S. I also agree with you musings about Kagome and Sesshomaru pairings. Those two together just don't blend well. The idea of Kagome and Sesshomaru together rubs me the wrong way.)
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2008 23:53 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooo i think Toga learnt that Inuyasha is his son XD and oooo i understand ^^ and i little confused but now you made it clearly ^^
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Reviewed By: foxtale3 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2008 14:53 CST
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Great story! I am really enjoying it, though I am hoping for a bit more Kagome/ Inuyasha interaction. Please update soon, I have to find out what happens to Kagome! :D
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2008 12:24 CST
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Huh, neat explanation, neh. Of course, if the blade harms the spirit, it would do no damage to the flesh in the appropriate situation, or reverse the damage, healing the wounds both spiritually and physically, if the sword wants to. I think that's more along the lines of canon. Neh. COntinue to update, this is interesting to read, ja ne.
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2008 09:26 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent explanation. I could never have thought of something like that. And it makes SO much sense. As for what Toga asked Lady Song, I hope you plan to tell us. Clearly, it had something to do with Inuyasha, and I'm DYING to know what it was. Very nice chapter.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2008 01:25 CST
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i thought your explanation was very logical. an interesting development, he now knows who yasha is. it would be interesting to see if you are going to allow him time to get to know kagome once they save her from 'a fate worse than death' and not just a brief meeting. one would consider that he would have to spend some time getting to know her so that he could have tessaiga recognize and even protect her from sesshoumaru's dokkasou so soon after coming in contact with her in his tomb. . . a pleasure, ginny
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Reviewed By: crimsondragon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2008 19:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm, interesting chapter, Drake! Not a lot of action, but some good plot extension thus far. Though a few more things are yet to be revealed. I s'pose this next one will reveal a few more things? I still have a strong inkling that ol' Liu is gonna be playing a pretty big part coming up in the latter parts here, and I guess time will tell...
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Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2008 15:04 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fuck yeah! Yet another thrilling chapter, hahahah, i knew Kagome was going to do something like that, it is just like her to be rather... outgoing with her temper, hehehe. Royal jewels almost got shattered. And the next chapter... hehe, well, if you are eager to write it yourself as well, then it is bound to be out of this world. Get it out, soon, please :)
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 17:09 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, boy. I knew Kagome's mouth was going to get her into trouble. Didn't she know that hostile walls have ears?! Oh, well. She was a bit of an airhead last time, and it clearly cost her this time. But....I did enjoy that well-deserved kick to the balls, lol. But, she is in a whole lot of trouble. And Inuyasha is distracted by problems of his own regarding his dad. I can't wait to see where you take this next. If you are so eager to write it, I KNOW it's gonna be good!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 05:10 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooo then im DIEING for the next chapter ^^ i always seem the squeal when i see you updated lol anyways... hmmmmm looks like Inuyasha, and his dad should get moving to get Kagome and kill that asshole lol
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Reviewed By: Ivellios [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 18:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If you are looking forward to the next chapter then I'm sure I'm going to love it! Good luck and hope to see more updates soon.
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 17:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the update but does InuYasha remember that he only has ten days(i think) to get back to Kagome?
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Reviewed By: Zelix (Not signed in) On: February 06, 2008 09:40 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooohh boy... i can't wait for the next chapter! Bad things are going to happen? eek, don't like the sound of that, but i am waiting eagerly to find out what it is. Oh boy, no matter where they end up, the shards invite disaster, and i love it. Excellent chapter, please update again soon!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2008 03:21 CST
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yes, it sounds as if you're building up to some pretty bad things for kagome, i fear for her safety. it was stupid of her to reveal the jewel to anyone. she should have just described naraku and her power if she was feeling generous but she should have known 'the walls have ears' especially in the court of an ambitious and paranoid leader. and all of those world war two adages about 'loose lips sinking ships'... ~ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: Aurorean [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2008 15:57 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful story so far! I'm feeling rather sorry for Kagome right about know. T_T Update again SOON! Don't leave your poor readers with a cliffy! LOL v_^
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