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| "Displacement" Reviews/Comments [ 113 ] | | Pages (8): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 › » ] | Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2008 14:24 CST
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So then write the next chapter so we can shit on you for writing something so lame! Lol, just kidding, but seriously, WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER!!! It's been months since you last udpated, and though this update is great, it's sorta like, wtf, what took so long? Anyway, continue to update, ja ne.
| Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2008 03:11 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmmmm i was thinking you were going to chuck Sesshy in but all well ^^ anyways oooooo Kagome is in danger!!! i cant wait for the next chapter!! like again.... i jumped when i saw you updated :P
| Reviewed By: half cat demon kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2008 19:34 CST
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Well, never mind. Lol, I just finished reading your last update and I see that sesshoumaru is not born yet. And I was so looking foward to it too. Anywayz, I cant wait until your next update. And I think that this Ryuuci(I 4got how to0 spell his name) guy does not betray Kagome and tell his master and bout the Shikon jewl shards....Well update soon, I cant wait!!!!!~HCDK^_^
| Reviewed By: half cat demon kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2008 19:03 CST
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Awww, I kinda rather like Shesshoumaru, he is real clam cool and collective. He puts on a real emotional front but if you look into his eyes long enough you will see the breifest of emotion. He cares but he is just afraid to show emotion because the emotion "Toga" showed for InuYasha's mother, led to the great Inu no Tashio's down fall and he seen that as a sign og weakness. But anyways, I love this fic and I think that it is really great, I hope that Sesshoumaru has already been born in this time, because I know Shesshoumaru is older than 500 years old. I have just fisnshed reading chaper 10 and I decided to review. But love the fic, love the story and love the plot, please continue to updatem your great!!!!!~HCDK
| Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2008 07:23 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another good chapter. I'm afraid that Kagome just said WAY too much when she talked about the jewel shards. She should have known better than to talk about them and their power so openly in the palace of a power hungry human like the emperor. That was NOT SMART (to say the least). As for Inuyasha and his dad...interesting. Inuyasha is getting to see firsthand that, although his father was a great and powerful demon, he was also flawed. And it's good that he's getting that chance his dad as something other than this all-powerful, can do no wrong, larger than life figure. Inuyasha, deep-down, as always been somewhat in awe of his dad and unable to belive that he would ever be as good as he is, cocksure attitude or not. This experience has been good for him in more ways than one. Now, if he could only keep his silly girl from talking so much.....I look forward to reading more soon.
| Reviewed By: crimsondragon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2008 06:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hehe, very nice story, I'm having quite a good time reading it. As one who's rather interested in history, this fic has been quite enjoyable, being set in a different time than usual. I wonder if anyone else has noticed(or knew of) the Liu Bang reference? Kinda nice to see he wasn't excluded from the story(at least totally). I rather like the twists in plot, although I have to admit it seemed a bit obvious that it was going to be Toga before InuYasha actually meets him, but much of the rest has been quite well done. I particularly liked the scene between Kagome and the Taoist sage. It certainly seems reasonable that would be her greatest fear, though the scene was done so that I couldn't see that part coming. All in all, well done! Oh, and there were a couple of spelling errors, though I couldn't tell you exactly where they were off the top of my head.
| Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2008 19:39 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This just keeps getting better and better, this is both extremely enjoyable and educational, excellent combination! Learning things about China, in a fictious way, but still learning while enjoying a VERY interesting storyline... oh boy, the only Inuyasha fic with a plot this intense, complex and interesting, was "Delayed Dawn". This is like watching the series or the movies themselves to me, so thank you so much! Hope you update again soon!
| Reviewed By: icefyre1222 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2008 09:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As I'm currently studying Chinese history, this story was very interesting to read =) The idea of this story is very original, and I like how you managed to incorporate a lot of Inuyasha's past into it. I will be following your updates, so I hope you update soon!
| Reviewed By: imajen On: January 21, 2008 02:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it! Love the story line please keep writting more !
| Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2008 17:50 CST
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Lmfao, screw studying. Reading your history notes and this fanfic ACTUALLY helped me past one of my AP World History tests!
| Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2008 05:01 CST
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omg lol how can you say that about Sesshy?? lol anyways oooo Inuyasha's full youkai is going to be a problem ^^ but im lost with something... where is Inuyasha and Inu-no-Taishou going?? amyways oo i cant wait to hear what Kagome's role is ^^ *giggles* me love the 3rd movie ^^
| Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2008 23:34 CST
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Kagome in fuku traipsing through history, like the garden gnome traveling the globe. . . gotta see if i can photoshop those scenes. Kagome in ancient Rome, Egypt, with Alexander the great conquering Phoenetia! The coronation of Queen Elizabeth I, the Salem witch trials... Yasha would have to save her from being burned. . . yeah, where was i? oh, great chapter, i love when you weave history and inuyasha! *\o/* hooray for more frequent updates *\o/* ~ delighted, ginny
| Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2008 22:25 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LMAO. I did enjoy this chapter, and I'm definitely glad to get some insight into what Kagome has to do with all this. The stuff with Inuyasha and his dad has been great.....but I had been wondering how Kagome fit into what's going on. And her role is clearly VERY important, if it involves dealing with Inuyasha's full youkai form in some way. But this, of course, is not why I'm laughing. Your crack in your AN about Sesshoumaru being as transparent as Casper had me rolling. Because you are absolutely right. He might as well have been glass in that movie when it came to Rin AND Inuyasha. Now, yes, he blasted the heck out of Yash a couple of times.....but big brothers have been beating the crap out of their little brothers since time began. He also took a blast for Inuyasha that probably would have killed him...and big brothers have been doing that for almost as long. Sessh isn't fooling ANYONE; I definitely agree. But *sighs*, he is also still an arrogant jerk....no doubt about that either.
| Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2007 19:19 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh yes! Another chapter to my favourite fic! I really love this fic... but right now, i don't have the energy to give it a proper review. This christmas, something horrible happened that affected everyone in my family. My mood is horrible and sad, so i cannot give a review i usually do. I hope you update soon, and that my moods will have become better when you do. Thanks for this good chapter.
| Reviewed By: bbbeleana On: December 26, 2007 03:43 CST
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Hey, something really funny happened yesterday. After I read your story, there was a documentation of Qin on TV. LOL! Therefore I am really interested which other facts you are gonna use in your story. See you soon! :)
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