| "Murder My Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 217 ] |
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Reviewed By: yuwa [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2007 00:46 CDT
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about the earlier comment, er pardon me my jaws on the floor... just wonderin where'd you get your idea on the gruesome murder on POSO?-_-a... if you havent seen POSO yet try chekn it out on youtube.>_
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Reviewed By: yuwa [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2007 00:04 CDT
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Howey cwah! yoh ishowi hish amashin!(CLOP)er! sorry bout that. as i was sayin Holy crap! your story is amazin!!!>=3
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2007 22:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far so good. This fic is really good. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! YOU ROCK!!!
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Title: A Grim Start...I'm in love already!!
Reviewed By: DannilovesInu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2007 16:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Already anticipating the next chapter...the details..my imagination is running wild...waiting, wondering who could have done in my Byakuya. I love the last sentence..heart-wrenching...can't wait!
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Title: Nice start
Reviewed By: polaris_sakura [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2007 08:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very exciting prologue. I will wait for your to update your story. Ja ne...
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Title: Great Start!
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2007 07:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woweee! This is a super start to a great epic girl! I'm sorry I couldn't have been your first reviewer, yet again. I check your profile everyday in hopes of a update, I must have just missed it. Well anyway... I love the descriptions of how Byakuya's throat looked... yucky!!! I love AU's that revolve around the police element... especially how this one is told like they are in the NYC police. I simply cannot wait to see how this story goes... but I know school comes frist so I will paitently wait for the next update! Take care, and once again good story!
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Title: fantastic opening chapter
Reviewed By: laurie_bunter [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2007 21:23 CDT
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I'm not a big fan of AU but since your writing is superb, and I love crime fiction, I decided to give this a chance. I'm glad to tell you I was not disappointed! Of course Byakuya could only be murdered like that in a parallel universe. :P The tension of your narrative is palpable and hardboiled. I hope you get to find time to continue this fantastic beginning. Rukia and Ichigo as detectives sends shivers down my spine. And I'm crossing my fingers that Hitsugaya makes a cameo as their Boss Chief, or something -- he's the one character in Bleach who has real deductive reasoning :)
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