| "Murder My Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 217 ] |
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Title: ::Jaw Sitting on desk::
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2007 07:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gracious girl! What an incredible, action packed chpater! Aizen is a horrible, crazy person and Ichigo should have choaked him to death!! The descriptions in this chapter (and all the others ones) are so visual; I was on the edge of my seat, bitting my nails down to the damn bones when I was reading this! And how you captured Rukia's fear-- wow. I hope she is okay... there's is no way you can kill one of the main characters in this story! Ugh... well I guess I'll have to find out in the next update, until then have great turkey day!
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Title: oh my god!!
Reviewed By: jazzjackrabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2007 05:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my god! this was so...I have no words.I mean Im practically paralyzed right now. The intensity of the chapter was overwhelming and the way you wrote it was completely amazing. I felt every feeling, goosebumps raising, stomach aching with anticipation and rapidly increasing heartbeat...you cant make me wati for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: averyrose [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2007 02:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was sooo intense! I could feel the pressure on Ichigo! Aizen's character came off just the way I had imagined. No doubt, the next chapter should be wonderful! Thanks soo much and update soon!
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Reviewed By: akirk85029 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2007 00:45 CST
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OMG!!!! So good, hurry and update again:)
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Reviewed By: haji_quest33 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2007 22:58 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ACK!Rukia!!!! Is she going to be okay? this is too intense I need to know what happens! I literally can not wait for the next one. This is LOVE!!!!
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2007 20:47 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! that was AWESOME!!!! now uu left in suspense!!! what's ganna happen to Rukia?! is she going yo be o.k.?!! well PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAP!!! U ROCK!!! P.S. have a happy thanx giving!!
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Reviewed By: Mayatsu-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2007 20:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
*IS ON THE EDGE OF HER SEAT* O_O!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: 07janina07 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2007 20:15 CST
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WAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!! You shocked me now I am speechless and probably won't be able to write a review untill tomorrow! HOLY COW!!! THEY GOT AIZEN!
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Reviewed By: laurie_bunter [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2007 20:08 CST
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I only read the last two chapters now, oh wow... it's amazing that you got the plot moving along nicely AND they still have time for hot sex :D Grr. I'm glad you've been able to keep up the suspense of this piece for this long. :) Good luck with the remaining chapters!
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Reviewed By: zenk0ku [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2007 01:48 CST
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okay, that cliffy was TOTALLY CRUEL ! but anyway, the best part of this chapter was the conversation between Ichigo and Rukia in bed. I raelly liked the way both Ichigo and Rukia are both so concerned about each other haha. And the build up to the cliffy was excellent ! Anyway, YOU HAVE TO UPDATE SOON OR I MAY HAVE TO HUNT YOU DOWN !
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Reviewed By: haji_quest33 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2007 23:32 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh no!!! I love this sooo much! I cant wait for the next one!
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Title: More Intelligent review! take 2!
Reviewed By: 07janina07 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2007 09:26 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok so here I you have a more though review of your chapter! So I loved the way weave the whole mistery together even though we all knew it was Aizen you did it awesome then the whole Ichigo and Rukia deepening relationship is also awesome I love how you wrote from his point of view again because we don't get much from him and his emotiong lately. Also I felt sorry for Orihime been kept in the dark she felt left out. I really like it when Ichigo picked Rukia up and set her down in the chair. There was lots of tenderness between them in this chapter. Though I must say I was expecting some soft make up sex from them. I really love how he loves her but doesn't see it, he is so heartwarming in his comment they made me swoon in satifaction. And the end was just evilllllllll! How dare you tdo that to us and leave us like that? I am going to die waiting for your next update. Its killing me already if you can tell from my last review!
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Title: oh my...
Reviewed By: cactuspd [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2007 10:31 CST
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i just read the remaining chapters after 'lost time', wasn't able to open it before today. gawd, somebody save rukia! i knew it. somehow i knew it would have been aizen. gosh, you have us completely wrapped around your finger. you wanted us to focus and ichigo and rukia, forget the plot for a moment and just focus on the romantic relationship between the two, and you did! the previous chaps had us saying 'to hell with the investigation, to hell with the killer, just get those two together!' and now, we are grippping our seats, hearts pounding, praying that ichigo save rukia, and saying "i knew it, it was aizen all along!' you really are something. only a great writer could get her readers all riled up like this. and girl, i am riled up, so, update and post the next chappy soon. pweety phleesh?!
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Reviewed By: Crys Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2007 10:01 CST
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Well now, that's what I call thrilling. This chapter's ending is great, almost makes me say I want the next one immediately xD
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Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2007 08:23 CST
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Wow! Aizen is the culpuit, and now you've left us hanging with this cliffy?? Please don't let him kill her!!! This is an amazing (and long, but I loved it) chapter, can't wait for more!
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