| "Murder My Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 217 ] |
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Reviewed By: polaris_sakura [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2007 05:10 CDT
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I agree with gokusgirl this is wicked. I like Ichigo being bad bad boy and tease Renji. Ja ne
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Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2007 18:57 CDT
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Wicked chapter. I loved how Ichigo toyed with Rukia when she couldn't remember about the night before! And the part with Ichigo talking to Renji over the phone was priceless! But back to the murders... gee I wonder WHO is doing this? But the main question is... who's birthday is next! I guess I'll have to find out in the next installment, laters!
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Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2007 18:37 CDT
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Sorry for the late review... I've been totally busy lately and it's getting on my LAST nerve. Loved this installment; and I'm finally gald that the obvious attraction between Rukia and Ichigo is not forced, just barely seen on the surface just to keep us IchRuki fans on the edges of our seat. I still don't see how you manage to pump out all these chapters, they arent' short... but long and very detailed. Lucky you! But you're in a good point in your artistic flow and it's top notch!!! Anyways... when you mentioned "Law and Order" I laughed. I'm a huge fan of that show, and Mike Logan is my man!!! He's so gritty and yet if you got him alone... you could tear his clothes off. Ahem... well, back to the review. Good update, can't wait for more. Laters!
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Reviewed By: cactuspd [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2007 17:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
gah! The intensity and the feelings in the story's just so real. with just words you could make your readers feel so much. your story writing ability is awesome! *bows down* so i'll just be a total fangirl and say, 'write more' and 'update soon'
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Reviewed By: Crys Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2007 11:26 CDT
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I'm not good at pointing out what I like about a story, so I can only say that it really is a great piece of work ^^
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Reviewed By: laurie_bunter [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2007 07:23 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Naked cliffhangers are the best :) I'm riveted, as usual. I'm torn between wanting Ichigo to take advantage of Rukia at this point or being a gentleman. Argh. I'll just wait for the next chapter when you're ready ;)
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: bludragon89 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2007 11:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are a great writer. I was wondering though...are you going to incorporate any of the characteristics of the Anime/Manga into this story. If not it is still great. Keep up the good work, great story.
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Reviewed By: polaris_sakura [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2007 11:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this chapter. You really a good author. Welldone
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Title: ieeee! TWO updates???
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2007 19:30 CDT
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I am so mad at MM.org right now... how come I'm not getting a notification when you update this story is beyond me! And I check your profile just about everyday... well onto the story. You know what is so great about this piece? That you have managed to write FOUR chapters with no smut. I know, I'm a all out pro smut gal; but sometimes a good story, and in your case a GREAT story doesn't have to be told with tons of smut. I am turly loving it right now! You creative style is caliber, and you should be proud. Gee, I wonder who's going to be the next victim... and with Rukia and Ichigo paired off anything is bound to happen. Well, that's my two cents... until next update, ja ne!
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Title: Oh no!
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2007 15:32 CDT
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Not another one! The plot thickens and still no definate leads. I am truly engrossed, can't for the next installment. BTW... I'm getting frustrated w/ not getting notification of an update on your work... what's the deal w/ MM.org anyways?
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Reviewed By: laurie_bunter [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2007 08:53 CDT
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Tituba, OMG you have me reeling! My heart is palpitating! You have no idea how many mysteries and dectective novels I have already read... I'm so happy to say that your current chapter is comparable in quality to the works of some of the great suspense thrillers and noir on my bookshelf. Sam Spade, move over and make space for... Detective Kurosaki? :) If you ever plan on going on to writing professionally I seriously suggest the mystery genre. You really have the feel for this!
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Reviewed By: laurie_bunter [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2007 05:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Compassion and grief are actual human emotions, you should try them out Kurosaki." Another brilliant one-liner! I'm so glad you've found the time to update this story. I'm SO excited about it. You pulled off things I would never have imagined for myself -- Ishida as the M.E., Matsumoto as an undercover cop, and Kenpachi as a Ichigo's boss!!! Just fantastic. Don't worry too much about developing the plot slowly and not throwing in the sex right away -- your writing is so good your readers are happy (at least I am!) Besides, sometimes developing the tension slowly makes the final hentai chapters more hot and heavy, right? :) Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2007 13:31 CDT
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Yay! An update! I don't know why I'm not getting any emails when you update any of your material... I haven't gotten any updates from any stories i have in my faves in the last year. Well, back to the story! I loved the line, "You see stars when you in Hollywood"! And wow... Rukia choked Ichigo's ass out bad. I see the tension between them is thick; I can only imgaine what will happen when they start working on the case together (against her Lou's instrucions, of course.) I'm loving it, until next update, caio!!!
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Reviewed By: Crys Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2007 09:37 CDT
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Wow, very interesting story. Can't wait for it to go on ^^ I hope Hitsugaya gets a cool part. You'll do it, right? *g*
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Title: Ganbatte kudasai
Reviewed By: polaris_sakura [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2007 07:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for the update. I really excited. Ja ne
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