| "Murder My Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 217 ] |
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2007 18:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chap! I LOVED IT!! it was awesome!! and as jazzjackrabbit said i also wonder how the will tell each other! now theres something to think bout! any who, UPDATE SOON!!! I CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE!! UR THE BEST!!
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Reviewed By: jazzjackrabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2007 13:40 CDT
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I hate it when two "blind" people confuse sex with love...Its obvious, out there...if it were just sex she wouldnt be kissing his eyelids, thats an act of love. And the way you are giving the hints, oh boy, its just fantastic! Well if only Kurosaki Ichigo would be real...I would, oh boy, I shouldnt get into this *bangs her head to the keyboad* Im just curious how they are going to tell each other...Hmmm...
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Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2007 10:30 CDT
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Whew...another delicious lemon. It's totally going to suck when they do go back to work, I couldn't agree more with Ichigo on that one.
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Title: *huge blinking eyes*
Reviewed By: 07janina07 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2007 07:51 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*brain dead* Rukia was right when she said they where going to be too busy having sex to think about work! Ichigo just proved her right! I also loved how Rukia is in denail that she is feeling more for Ichigo than sexual desire! I think Ichigo is more honest with himself when it comes to his feelings! He is obviously falling in love with Rukia (if he isn't allready whipped) Awesome chapter you have left brain dead! I am going to go lie down and try to returned to brain to its proper function!
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Reviewed By: yuwa [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2007 01:51 CDT
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...(flabbergasted)...
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Title: More Intelligent review!
Reviewed By: 07janina07 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2007 14:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have finally gotten my act together and here you can have a more intelligent review from me. I absolutely loved the part with Rukia and Kenpachi! It was so funny! I love how Rukia and Renji interactions! And Ichigo was so cold! Just like I though he would be... I also enjoyed the fact that Rukia jump him. And the lemon was awesome and hot! It totally fried my brains and I wasn't the least bit disapointed when Rukia broke the mood and asked what was going to happened now! I was expecting her to demand more than just sex! Absolutely awesome I can't wait to see how their relationship will played out after this! (though I can imagine Ichigo turning in to a sex fiend) Oh and now I am forgetting about the plot! Oh well! Who cares they had sex anyway! *does happy dance*
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Reviewed By: zenk0ku [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2007 03:59 CDT
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the lemon scene was really well done, the wait for them to finally do the deed was excruciating though! now can't wait for the next one, update soon!
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Reviewed By: haji_quest33 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2007 18:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AMAZING! I was waiting for them to seal the deal and I loved it! It was such good writing I felt the tension! I need the next one!!!!
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Title: oh boy
Reviewed By: jazzjackrabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2007 08:39 CDT
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I just had to breth deep several times in order to control my OWN heartbeat! that was bloody brilliant I have to say...Geez no one writes this lemon sceenes as good as yourself(personally I think your best was in The Tail of a Phoneix, but his was...wow) cheers for my favorite writer, and thanks for your review, it is a huge thing for me=)
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2007 01:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved reading this!!! it was AWESOME!!! i can't wait for the next chap!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! I REALY WANT TO READ MORE!!! UR THE BEST!!!
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Title: holy crap
Reviewed By: Adrasvaiyen [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2007 01:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
holy crap. it is the only expression i know that is appropriate for rating this fic. i have read all of your fics, and THOROUGHLY enjoyed them. i mean, i haven't read any published works that compare to this. thank you, you truly are a hero.
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Reviewed By: cactuspd [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2007 20:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my, i really don't know what to say. you have so beautifully, so perfectly built the sexaul atmosphere and tension that the effect, the result was one major blast. it kept building up that it culminated into one of the best, if not the best lemon that i have ever read. gosh, it even took me more than 15 minutes to get my mind working again! took me more than 15 minutes of staring into the computer screen before i could properly string together words to make one coherent sentence for this review. WAY TO GO GIRL!
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Title: Oh...my...FREAKING GOD!!
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2007 09:35 CDT
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It's a shame when you have to STOP reading a story because you get so damn hot from reading it! OMG... this chapter rocked! Ichigo ROCKED Rukia's world, you hear? Wow...if there was a real Ichigo like that out there... sigh. And of course like you said, it would take Rukia to kill the mood; good thing Ichigo had a good retort. A hell of a retort, really! Girl, that was one your BEST lemons, I salute you!
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Reviewed By: 07janina07 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2007 08:57 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome! It was great awesome job! It was so hot I had to turned on the air conditioning (Is winter in Canada) awesome job! I can't wait for the nest chapter!
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Reviewed By: polaris_sakura [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2007 08:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love you so much. Thanks for giving such beautiful lemon. I wish the killer don't disturb their perfect moment
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