| "Murder My Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 217 ] |
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2008 03:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh ho ho that was a great chapter!! I really loved the emotional tension. The angsty drama was good and written well. Great job!
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2008 02:24 CDT
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ohhh this was good. Liked the Gin and Aizen part was well as the tension with Ichigo and Rukia. Very good.
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Reviewed By: 07janina07 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2008 18:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was re-reading murder my heart the other and I really love what you did with this fic. It was awesome.
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2008 02:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hahaha this chapter and your last one have definitely been some of the best I've read. From tension to passion to lovingness. I just can't help but smile as I read this freaking amazing fic. It's really a masterpiece!
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2008 01:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
o.o O.o o.O O.O O_O! OMFG!!! That was defintely your best written chapter EVER! OMG, come to speak of it, this must be the single greatest chapter I have read in ANY fic (and I've read a plenty XD) in a long time. The tension in the beginning was just senstiational! I loved the emotion, the feeling, and then the burning passion at the end. And yes you were right, this is probably one of the bet lemons you (or any other author I've read so far) have written. The tension only made it deeper, and by God was it HOTT!! Hell it should be a sin to read something like this (oh well sometimes being bad can be a good thing ;p). Your writing ability are really shining with this fic and it continues to get better. I'm so happy its such a s long story because I would never want it to end. ITS THAT GOOD! God, must move on to next chapter. So much WIN!!
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2008 02:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Again another interesting chapter. Loved the IchiRuki interaction and the ending just leaves me with wanting to read more. Gah, I need to sleep but your fic is too good! It keeps me up at night because its like a mental adrenaline rush XD;
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2008 01:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW this has got to be another one of my favorite chapters! I really loved this fic now. I mean it keeps getting better and more interesting. Rukia is going to stay at Ichigo's place for her birthday? Can you say 'interesting circumstances'? XDD! Oh man can't wait to see how this turns out! =)
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2008 00:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another captivating chapter. Loved the emotions that you were able to portray from both Ichigo and Rukia's perspective. You really do have a way with words and your writing ability is so advanced that I can picture and feel them so easily. The ending just has he wanting to read more with unrivaled anticipation. Great job and another superb chapter! =)
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2008 22:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOLY MOTHER OF GOD! (Wait, I'm sure He doesn't have a mother, just a figure of speech right? Damn, I'm getting off topic this is about your story) That was one amazing chapter. I loved it, I really did. The IchiRuki interaction was just beyond superb and the ending. OMG What did you do? How could you do it? Why did you do it? It was so freaking amazing! The suspense not only comes from the mystery side of your story, but the IchiRuki interaction as well. This was one of the best chapters so far. Granted this is a HUGE and LONG fic, I hope more chapters like this come my way. Once again awesome job!
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2008 21:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
To be honest this was a decent chapter. Not as entertaining as your previous chapters, but it got the plot moving. Good job!
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2008 20:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow this story is so freaking captivating and oh so awesome! I think I'm truly addicted! Another death and this time sits Nanao? I like her to! Why do you keep killing off some of my favorite characters T_T Well, I can get over that fact with your awesome writing skills. I loved the IchiRuki interaction and I got a big kick out of their stay in Rukia's apartment. Very well written!
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2008 19:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow I really loved this chapter. The IchiRuki interaction was just great! I loved every single bit of it. And OMG the ending was just to sweet/lovely/cute. I can't wait to see what Ichigo does! You really put a good cliffhanger there!
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2008 18:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know I didn't really notice any OOC from Rukia and Ichigo. Granted this is an AU so the characters will be slightly different, the situation that they are currently in can justify their attitudes and behavior. So you hooked them up to be partners working on the same case huh? Oh ho ho I'm sure you will be stirring things up between the two! It sounds good and once again another great chapter!
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2008 17:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOO you killed Yumichika!! Actually, I don't really like him so it doesn't really matter so w/e XD; And it was his birthday as well huh? Looks like this murderer is attacking people on their birthdays. They also happen to be connected to Rukia somehow. Very interesting what you're trying to pull. I also liked Ichigo talking to Rukia and Renji. I got a few good chuckles out of their conversation. Another great chapter!
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2008 17:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOO you liked Matusomoto!! Shes one of my favorite characters! T_T Oh well I guess it had to be done because of the suspense your building. I liked the Ichigo perspective and him trying his best to work on the case. It gives a broader picture into how he feels upon the case he's set on. Very well done! *thumb up*
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