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Reviewed By: 07janina07 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2007 23:36 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Rukia likes been gropped! She is obviously enjoying it. I REALLY love this line. She wanted to drag him upstairs by his cock, throw him down onto the floorboards, and proceed to fuck him senseless on the floor of her foyer. Oh it was priceless Rukia will be Rukia no matter what she does! LOL! I love this fic! It is so awesome!
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Reviewed By: laurie_bunter [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2007 19:44 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: Ahh, Rukia, Rukia. In any other parallel universe, if you don't want a guy's hand down your pants you can scream sexual harassment. He'd be out of a job and you could take over his desk... but since you don't, this only proves that Ichigo is winning. A happy groping Ichigo + flustered Rukia = great reading. :) Groping Ichigo, by the way, is so sexy he actually made me forget for a moment I still don't know who killed Byakuya, and I seriously question whether I still care as long as Rukia gets to jump Ichigo in th end mwahahahaha. Ahh, me of little fidelity to the plot... obviously right now love of lemons wins over my love of detective fiction. :D
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Reviewed By: jazzjackrabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2007 14:10 CDT Comment/Review: Now I know that you like to torture your Readers! when are you going to post the next chapter?!?! I mean you could post the whole 26 pages, I wouldnt mind reading and reading it all over again!!!
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Title: Complain! Reviewed By: 07janina07 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2007 12:36 CDT Comment/Review: This is an oficial complain: No don't you dare cut chapters in half! Do you have ANY idea just how awesome this fic is! Don't you kill us by cutting awesome chapters in half! Pretty please update soon (like now) pretty please!
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Reviewed By: cactuspd [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2007 12:33 CDT Comment/Review: so, the game has begun huh?! gosh! the sexual tension is quite something. Can't wait for the 'protective home custody' to start! BTW next time, don't you dare cut chapters! I sure as hell don't mind reading 26 or even a hundred pages of sexually charged atmosphere between ichigo and rukia. post the other half chap please! like NOW maybe?
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Reviewed By: polaris_sakura [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2007 09:00 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: You so naughty coz u cut it half. I can read a whole 26 pages..Can't wait for the update
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Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2007 08:54 CDT Comment/Review: Gahhh! I wanted more!! Girl, just reading what Ichigo is doing with Rukia with the teasing is driving me CRAZY! I would have given in a long time ago! Too funny with the part where Ichigo's Lou has to go to the dance recital, and the part when he was playing with the back of her jeans was PRICESSS! I can't wait for the next update ::cough cough LEMON cough cough:: ! Unitl next time, laters! gg
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Title: No, Don't you cut chapters in half! Reviewed By: 07janina07 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2007 08:17 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: Why did you cut the chapter in half! I would have enjoyed 26 pages of awesome goodness! Don't you cut chapters in half in the near future it is blasphemy!
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Title: AWESOME! Reviewed By: 07janina07 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2007 08:10 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I really wnjoyed this chapter! I can't wait to read more I love it! Awesome job keep at it!
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Reviewed By: intercostalspace [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2007 06:29 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: loved the style. loved the message of the fic. heartbreakingly angsty. i want more. i am about to read ch 2 hopefully at the end of this fic (at whatever chapter you plan to end it) IchiRuki will live on. ;D
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Reviewed By: yuwa [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2007 02:44 CDT Comment/Review: ^^ cant w8 4 d next chapter!
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Reviewed By: 07janina07 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2007 19:16 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: You update rather quickly so as long as you can keep up this level of frequency I will love to death! I really love this fic! I can't wait untill next chapter and see just how dirty Ichigo is going to play! And I love Rukia in this fic! She is such a nightmare is funny!
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Reviewed By: ScarsOfHate [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2007 02:59 CDT Comment/Review: is it too much if i kiss the ground you walked:D
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Reviewed By: laurie_bunter [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2007 01:04 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: Oh Tituba, you slay me, you really do :D Ahh, I want to bury you under heaps of praise, except I've been doing that since day one. Only you can pull off such a sexy scene in the middle of a stinky dock smelling of fish! I like how you weaved in Kaien and how Rukia tries to use it to emotionally blackmail Ichigo into backing off. It's a good thing sexed up Ichigo sees through that ruse! Update when you can, please, but as gokusgirl says, school work first (darn!) :D
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Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2007 19:52 CDT Comment/Review: Yay I got another email notification! Great chapter, full of juciy action. Can't wait for the next installment; take your time and do your school work frist! Don't be a fool and stay in school! :D :just joking:
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