| "Murder My Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 217 ] |
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2008 16:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow another very captivating chapter. So Aizen and Kenpachi are lieutenants huh? LOL I can actually imagine that happening. And the two detectives are already set up against odds. I find it very enjoyable because I know you'll be able to get them to work out their differences and become closer in the future :p Another good chapter!
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2008 15:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well this looks to be a LONG story and from the first chapter I can tell I'll really like it. Sounds interesting even though I'm not a big fan of AU, but I'll give it a shot anyways because I love long reads. Law and Order fan huh? I myself prefer CSI, but it should be a fun read either way. Looking forward to reading the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2008 14:01 CDT
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OMG that was an amazing story...ihave been up for days reading it. you kept the charcters out of the OC and it worked with the setting...absolutely loved it. In a way i would like to hear what happens to them a year or two later. I bet with a kid it would be a lot mroe fun...i can just imagine...but i loved the story and I cant wait to read more of you work...keep it up XD
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Title: A really long extended review!
Reviewed By: 07janina07 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2008 11:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay so here we go. The moment I saw this fic (this was before reading any of your other ones) I was liked 'Meh' I had read way too many bad fics. I decided to give it a try and the first chapter was SO AWESOME! This fic was so diferent from all your other ones, more serious and mature (you tend to write the other ones as very funny wether you intend it or not) and Ichigo and Rukia where diferent here. You geva then a diferent characterization. It was awesome I felt it show another side of you as a writer. I love the part where they share the toast and then she rippeds it and to me it felt like it was simbolic of her not wanting to start anything with him. I love all the chapters they where awesome. KUDOS to you! Great job!
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Title: Chapter 20
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2007 11:14 CST
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Yay! Aizen is going to rot in jail, Rukia and Ichigo made that 'slow love' that was absolutely wonderful!!! So descriptive... I had to take a break from it a few times just to cool off. But anyway, great chapter. Wrapping a lot of stuff up in this one, and I'm sure the epilouge is just as good. (BTW... sorry I haven't reviewed; due to the holiday and all the other dumb stuff that's going on I haven't had a chance to finish reading this fic, but rest assured I will review the last chapter too... not to mention the update on Casual Friends... wow-wee!) Happy new year! @_@ gg
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Title: Oh OMG OMG Oh My God!!
Reviewed By: DannilovesInu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2007 23:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's over...no!! I absolutely loved this one...Ichigo was soo sweet (and I fell in love even more with Tousiro Hitsugaya because of this story).....quick I need a paper bag before I start to hyperventilate or maybe my inhaler...lol. You do such great work Tituba-sama, that I've never been uninterested in reading your stories...keep up the great work!
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Title: whoa!
Reviewed By: yuwa [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2007 03:11 CST
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OMG! ive just been gone for a few days and i already missed two chaps!!!(wipes nosebleed)anyway, very nice chap(s).^-^v
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2007 17:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a really really really good ending to an AWESOME FIC!!! this was so great! i loved reading every bit of it!! so sad that it had to end though!!! well it was great!!! U R THE BEST!!!!
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Reviewed By: RogueAmazonBoo [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2007 12:34 CST
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Have I told you that I really, really love this story? Of course I have but I find the need to say it again. Very well done.
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Reviewed By: averyrose [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2007 12:27 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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btw will u be leaving this up forever? cuz i will be wanting to read this over and over! :D
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Reviewed By: averyrose [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2007 03:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the best fanfiction I have ever read! You are a genius. There was soo much suspense/tension I could've filled a bathtub full of it! Thank you so much. Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! Can't wait for your next one!!
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Reviewed By: Crys Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2007 09:03 CST
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I'm ill right now, bt reading the end of your great story made me feel good for a while. I'm already looking forward to your next story ^^
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Reviewed By: haji_quest33 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2007 00:08 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BEST STORY EVER! Thankyou so much for writing this!
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Reviewed By: yuwa [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2007 21:34 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
mmm...well theyve said it all...so, i mean merry christmas...
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Reviewed By: polaris_sakura [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2007 19:01 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I feel so sad coz this story has to end. I love from the start to the end. Such wonderful give for Christmas. Right now, I can't wait for your new story. Ja ne, tituba-chan. Happy holidays
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