| "Paradox: The Power of Letting Go" Reviews/Comments [ 128 ] |
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2008 03:05 CST
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Ah, I see now where you're going with this! Very clever, you. You're right, there is only one guy K would leave IY for, I thought so last chapter, but the timeline wasn't clear then. So, yeah, K is out of my 'bad' books now. I just can't wait to see how you turn the rest of this out! Poor IY, you're really putting him through hell this fic, eh? But that's alright, I know it'll all turn out in the end. Again, very, very clever!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2008 01:58 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... glad that kagome and inuyasha were able to have their little talk... eventhough between them there's still a lot to talk about... beginning to like kagome's character in this fic again but not fully yet... and kazuki maybe her friend but he's becoming annoying... he should at least mind his own business... can't say that with him around is helping kagome & inuyasha's situation... hopefully inuyasha & kagome can settle things... what happened to shippou... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2008 01:54 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooo me like this ^^
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2008 11:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think Yazuki is going to play a large part in getting the two together. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2008 01:28 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... i think this chapter was more appropriate... really liked it... after all the drama in the taishou building... it was good to see how kagome felt and what her thoughts were... wonder what happens next... will inuyasha talk with sesshoumaru... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2008 20:40 CST
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Good chapter, but I'm still not liking K very much. Glad to see her realizing her mistakes, her fears. I think this was a better choice, than the 'blow up' you mention. Had you shown that, w/o telling of her regret, it would have been a real turn off. I think she might have come across as selfish and arrogant, and we've had enough of that (in the manga) with Kikyo. So, if there is a confrontation, it'll be easier to understand and accept, because you buffered it this way. Still loving this, and looking forward to more!
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Reviewed By: kt On: January 16, 2008 17:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i guess what i mean is that the time jumps just confuse you a bit at the beginning. There is some spotty rambling here and there, but it's all good. I'm really enjoying this fic though! :D
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Reviewed By: ThirdDemonKassie On: January 15, 2008 22:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like this!!! i read this like everydsy!! update soon!!! i still dont understand the marriage thing! =( !!! please explain!! mm name (thirddemonkags)
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Reviewed By: kt On: January 15, 2008 16:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the story so far, although you do get lost once in a while. But I have a theory, and I hope it's right! So update soon, k? :D
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Reviewed By: buzzk97 On: January 14, 2008 21:29 CST
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I am really enjoying your story! It is very good and I like the detail that has gone into it. I was hoping that InuYasha and Kagome were going to met again while she was working. I really am looking forward to your next update so please make it soon!
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Reviewed By: Ichigohime [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2008 16:02 CST
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Please update soon! I love this story so far, as sad as it is in the beginning. I know its only going to be better from here! I love it!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2008 04:17 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... so they finally meet in the future... lots of negativity during the meeting and after it... not to be cruel or anything cause i like kagome... but she kinda deserved the way inuyasha was treating her... she may have had her reasons but it doesn't lessen the pain inflicted... hope everything works out fine though... and i think that the one kagome said she's marrying in chapter one is the future yash takahashi... just a wild guess... anyway - inuyasha has to explain himself to sesshoumaru... and what will kagome do... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2008 03:15 CST
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Hmmm, a plot within a plot....will be interesting as to why K left, and how the feelings b/t them will work out. Will it aleviate the angst, or build it further? Either way, this is great, and I'm always so glad to see an update!
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2008 02:12 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why do I think that it is Yash Takahashi that Kagome is marrying in the future. I like the story and can't wait until the next update.
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2008 11:53 CST
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Poor IY. But glad to see he's made a life for himself. When K sees him again, he won't be that same hesitant hanyou. Should make for tense and intersting times, hearing K's side of the story. Just what was she thinking, to treat him like that?
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