| "Paradox: The Power of Letting Go" Reviews/Comments [ 128 ] |
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Reviewed By: psyco_chick32 (am I signed in? I don't think I ever even check) On: March 16, 2008 03:22 CDT
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AWWWWW! Miroku and Sango's gift brought tears to my eyes. And the fact that he's teary at the idea of them being in love... and he'll never get to witness it. The whole story was amazing. I rarely say that, so I want you to know that I'm sending you my higest compliments. I know I repeat that, but so many people will wander by and say "Well, it's great..." And well... there's a lot of BAD fanfiction out there. I was truly blessed to stumble across your story. It's one of the best. I was captivated from beginning to end. YOu've officially been added to my favorite authors collection - I'll be excited to see if you post more.
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Reviewed By: LadyCash, not logged in On: March 16, 2008 01:59 CDT
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Very lovely, beautifully done. I've really enjoyed this, and look forward to more from you.
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Reviewed By: imanewme [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2008 00:16 CDT
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The poem on the plaque is beautiful! Miroku in tears? It makes me want to cry, too... and all this is so touching! ~cries happy tears~ It makes me hope for a Part II... but even if you don't think there will be one, I've enjoyed the journey. So beautiful! Ø×X ÀJ
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Reviewed By: Totally Kawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2008 10:58 CDT
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Mediaminer must really not like me. I started writing [what I wrote before] and a LOT of other stuff after that. And then my entire review got cut off. And I've already spent far too much time here, unfortunately, and I have to get back to doing homework (ugh!!!) but I swear, I'll leave you a long review next time. Is that the end or is there more chapters/an epilogue(s)? *feels sad that story's ending* ... *feels happy that new story is (possibly, hopefully) beginning* ... sorta. Thank you, again, for posting. This is the best pick-me-up I've ever had after resigning myself to a dayload of homework. Except for like, chocolate. No offense, but nothing beats chocolate. :P
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Reviewed By: Totally Kawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2008 10:54 CDT
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You updating is so fantastic!!!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2008 02:42 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! i cried my heart out with chapter 16!! WHY!?!!!!!!!!! but then then 17 made it up for it... you were lucky that you didnt left 16..... or i would have been dead!!
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Reviewed By: kodiaqkitten [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2008 16:29 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing job! I loved the reference to K-country. I'm an Alberta girl myself living in the prairies. I've been to the Mountain Outfitters Co-op. Loved seeing some Canadian inspiration. Touching story. Well written and genious plotline. Loved it!!!!!
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Reviewed By: doggieearlover [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2008 15:12 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I felt so badly for both of them - him for the heartache he had to remember, and her for the hell she had to go through to tell him goodbye in the past so that she could be with him in her own era. I am glad she told Miroku and Sango what was going on so they wouldn't judge her for the rest of her life, and maybe they were able to help InuYasha somehow in his grief. I also found it interesting that InuYasha had Kagome's mother seal the well - and it's a good thing because I think Kagome would have been to distraught to do it, even if it had to be done. I am glad that they are finally happy together, as they should be. Heaven knows they've been through enough and deserve it.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2008 12:27 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... lots of emotion in this... kinda sad cause this seems that the past got its closure... but happy that inuyasha & kagome have cleared things up and are finally together... now have to see how kagome's trip to the past will benefit the project... and then their engagement and wedding too... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: imanewme [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2008 11:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sitting in my cubicle reading this, even though I have more than a week's worth of deadlines coming due and you've managed to make me forget everything in the beautiful moment with the absoultely touching end to this story. (wiping a small tear out of my eye) Bless you. Thank you.
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2008 11:18 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great addition to a great story. It was full of angst in some places but still great. I am fighting back the tears now even though I know the end I still feel bad for the pain that Inuyasha must go through for 500 years before Kagome comes back into his life. I really like how torn up Kagome is and how Inuyasha gets her to see that she never betrayed him. Now are we going to find out about that box that Miroku gave Inuyasha? Does it have something that would have saved him years of pain if he had opened it sooner?
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Reviewed By: Jessie Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2008 11:05 CDT
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*CRIES!!* *TEARS* OMG! Is this the end? OMG OMG OMG. I didn't think I was going to like this story as I read the very first chapter, but then I couldn't stop myself from NOT reading it. It's just so... wow. Lovely and sad and sweet and a tad strange and angsty all in one neatly wrapped package. I LOVED IT!
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Reviewed By: psyco_chick32 (am I EVER signed in?) On: March 12, 2008 09:03 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*tears* There are just so many tears! This has just been an absolutely AWESOME ride. You know, Sueric turned a great original character (Toga, in "Purity") into an entire line of stories. I don't see why you shouldn't with Kaz :) He's such a great character as is! And then you can elaborate on the awesomeness that is Shippou, more on the time InuYasha spent w/out Kagome... So much potential! *hopes*
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Reviewed By: Rihannon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2008 13:38 CDT
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Well, I'm glad the pieces are coming together. Very nice work, this has been one of the most enjoyable ficts I ever read. It has such a good structure, not often seen in fanfictions. I hope the story will go on for some more chapters, even as I'm sure you will give it enough time (and chapters) to finish properly. Ah, and don't worry about the DNA subject, we are all clear that It's fiction we're talking about, and no one expects a realistic approach. As far as I know (I'm an ecologist, but I do work together with genetists) there's no way to induce a change into a mature organism using a gene treatment. This is a privilege that nature keeps for viruses. There's been some research about using modified viruses to treat genetic diseases, "inserting" good genes in the cells to fade the effect of the bad ones, but I think all of that is in a very early experimental stage (I mean I don't think they had approached to something really useful). However, we never know… In our lifetime we had the privilege to behold how science-fiction slowly becomes every day's life. You may be talking (writing, anyway) about something that could become the cure for all known illnesses, if it ever came to be. Thank you for being so nice. Looking forward!
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Title: pewterwings
Reviewed By: pewter_wings [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2008 22:08 CDT
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As soon as you finish this, I plan on reading the entire thing again, all at once.
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