| "Paradox: The Power of Letting Go" Reviews/Comments [ 128 ] |
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 20:41 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... lots of drama... finally things are coming out into the open... what with the rumors and relationships between people... then the argument between inuyasha & kagome... hope inuyasha & kagome settle things soon... yeah kazuki is quite a pain... inuyasha & kagome should just tell the truth... it's getting quite frustrating that everyone is getting involved in their business... wonder what happens next... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 14:36 CST
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This chapter had me smiling almost all the way through. Love the humor and sweetness here. So glad K and Shippou were reunited, and even that Kouga's still around, proud as ever. Yep, IY is a baka, but very nice tension here, good setup for the next chapter. Love that this isn't all sweetness and light, makes for more interesting reading.
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Reviewed By: kt On: February 18, 2008 12:58 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to admit, I was really mad that you weren't updating as quickly as you have in the past and that this chapter had better be worth the wait...and it was. I like the way you put shippo in there too; he was more than I expected. Can't wait for the next one...but just letting you know, I have high expectations for this upcoming chaper too...
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Reviewed By: sexxiigurrll0204 On: February 18, 2008 12:00 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i hate you! i hate you so much! ugh! how could you leave such a cliffy! ugh! update soon! =]]
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Reviewed By: imanewme [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 10:31 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked this chapter! So much going on, but you handled it nicely. I guess after 500 years of home improvement, Sesshoumaru's place is spectacular, eh? Of course the reuniting with Shippo was super awesome.. could it be anything but? It was very satisfying to see Shippo threaten to beat up InuYasha for once. (grin) Rin.. it really is sad, isn't it, to think of her as growing up, growing old, and dying all the while Sesshoumaru knowing that he darn well could live forever if he were careful enough. No wonder he painted her. He didn't want to forget. There may be a lot going on in this chapter, but you've made it work. I don't think anyone will be confused. There was only one place I got a tiny bit confused, and that's when Kaz and Shippo first started spying on Kagome and InuYasha's conversation at the end of the chapter. I thought for a few sentences that Kaz was talking to Sesshoumaru, not Shippo. (oops, guessed wrong on that one... LoL) Thanks for the next chapter tease. I'm still going to stick with my original theory about the storyline, even after this chapter ended like it did. What we know of Kagome's personality is enough to allow me to stand confidently beside my assertions. LOL... yep yep, the time to open Miroku's (not Pandora's) box is fast approaching. I await with baited breath!
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Reviewed By: Hentai Strumpet [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 09:43 CST
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That little sneak peak was eevil. Please don't do this us. I dying right now for the next chapteer. Can't wait for you to update. I got your enail notice thank you very much.
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 01:19 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter as usual. I loved how Shippo jumped in to give Inuyasha any last shoving he needed after the shove he got from Kaz. I also liked seeing the softer side of Sesshomaru and how he misses Rin and his family's reactions to his devotion to her. I can't wait until Kagome and Inuyasha finally get the air cleared between them. Though I have to admit I am still very curious about the box from Miroku that Inuyasha has and how long Kagome is going to hold it against Inuyasha that he didn't say anything and almost cost her the project's completion. Of course Inuyasha can hold 500 years of agony against her so that might work itself out. I am as always eagerly awaiting the next update.
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Reviewed By: Hentai Strumpet [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2008 20:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter but I'm a little confused about Inuyasha thinking Kags is marrying Kaz. here's my e-mail addres(ama.agyekum@yahoo.com)please let me know when you update.
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Reviewed By: lil_one [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2008 16:30 CST
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i just read the whole thing... i stayed up till all hours of the night lol... i love it!
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2008 13:41 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY Shippo finally makes and appearance. Poor Kagome is soo tired that she missed important stuff, she would have picked up on some of the byplay between Inuyasha and Sesshomaru if she had been awaka and alert, she would have then pinned a pair of dog ears back to get answers. At least I think so. Looking forward to what happens next.
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Reviewed By: sexxiigurrll0204 On: February 08, 2008 09:21 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my gawd! i love this story! =]]update right away please! =D
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2008 02:44 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... glad that at least kagome is doing something about their situation... but it won't work if it's only one-sided... kagome may be trying to get closer to inuyasha but inuyasha seems to have given up... what sesshoumaru should do is have inuyasha & kagome be alone somewhere and keep them there until they've talked and cleared things up... inuyasha should go see kagome... will inuyasha tell kagome what he knows now... hope shippou can help... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2008 01:58 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kagome is going to fight YAY!! shouldnt Inuyasha fight for Kagome?? and still when did Inuyasha got the idea that Kagome is marrying Kaz?? anyways ooo Shippo is coming??? YAY!!! i cant wait!!! this has turned into 1 of my fav storys out of all i have read ^^
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2008 23:14 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter in this saga. At least Kagome is going to fight for Inuyasha this time and not just roll over and play at being the dead one (yes I meant that reference to the walking clay pot). Now she just needs to get the lead out and make a move besides bringing him donuts and coffee, how about asking him to join her in a walk, or to dinner at the shrine to see her mother and Souta? Ignore my pushing too hard since you are doing a good job with the story I just don't have much patience. :-D
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Reviewed By: darkangel_riku [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2008 21:40 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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oh my gosh!!!!! I looooove it haha I just can't wait to find out what really happens to make kagome marry kaz but this is amazing pleeeease update soon!!! *riki
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