| "Paradox: The Power of Letting Go" Reviews/Comments [ 128 ] |
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Reviewed By: imanewme [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2008 18:16 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
squeeellllll!!!!!! We're going to see Shippo!!! Yeay!!!!!! Ah... the mystery builds.. you flirt you... :) This is so much fun! BTW... As sweet as some Rin/Sess stories are written, in my heart, too I see him as "Daddy" to Rin. :)Gotta agree with you there.
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Reviewed By: Hentai Strumpet [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2008 21:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Story. Can't wait til you update
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Reviewed By: Hentai Strumpet [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2008 21:02 CST
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Great story please update soon.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2008 05:54 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
just wanna slap that wolf secretary stupid >.< Kagome better not back down from this!! she needs to put up a good fight, seen that Kazuki given her the encourgement (sp?)
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2008 00:40 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why do I suspect a trip to the past for Kagome to get a butterfly youki is in the future of the story? That would work wouldn't it? The marketer didn't come across as dumb just as ignorant and wanting answers. Ignorance is fixable, stupidity isn't.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2008 00:20 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... kinda saw that coming... them being interrupted... but now quite annoyed with that wolf secretary of inuyasha... hope kagome doesn't back down... and inuyasha better not back off either... question: doesn't kagome still have her miko powers or did she lose touch with it when she became more scientific... hope kagome will show that wolf secretary a thing or two... sorry know that kagome isn't that violent... but maybe when provoked she gotta fight back too... seems that inuyasha wanted to say something in the meeting but didn't... what was it... what will inuyasha do... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: sexxiigurrll0204 On: January 31, 2008 18:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is amazing!! update soon please!?? i love it. =D
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Title: KaPow!
Reviewed By: imanewme [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2008 16:05 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Break up a kiss and then tell me you're not a tease... LOL! Those two (K and I) need to have their heads cracked together. I enjoyed this chapter, and although marketers ARE smart, no one ever said every single marketer was *nice*. Besides, it's okay to let a marketer look a little dumb when he's covering something complicated like genetic creation... (smile) Kaz can work on Kagome, Sesshoumaru can work on Inuyasha (if he cares, that is) and for the love of all that's good and pure, PUHLEASE embarass the crap out of the female wolf. *fluttering eyes* pretty please? J/K... it's your story.. :) But having her exposed as either a j/a or a clutz would be sooooooo fun... :) Have fun this coming week!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2008 04:03 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... sesshoumaru seems to want inuyasha & kagome together... will he do something to give them a little push... maybe kazuki should help get kagome & inuyasha together since he wants to see kagome happy... should pair kazuki with someone else... good thing kagome had that talk with her mom... nice that kagome is thinking about inuyasha and they got to talk more... i think with them about to kiss that the others will arrive for their meeting... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: sins On: January 28, 2008 23:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG not cool that was just to crule!!!!! update!!! please ... i must know more!!!!!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2008 22:29 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
soooo close and you stopped there... NOW that was cruel lol a little fluff is all we need ^^ and awwwww Shippo is still draws.. thats just soooo sweet!! ^^
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2008 17:53 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If Kaz is a true friend to Kagome then he would want her happy. Only Inuyasha is going to make her happy, so I think he should help her and Inuyasha get together. He could always go for her new roommate and double date. Or triple date with his new roommate and his date, someone else altogether.
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Reviewed By: imanewme [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2008 11:54 CST
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Ahhh.... another cliffee.... :) I LOVE it when the author's being a tease! LOL. Yours is the first story I've read where InuYasha adopts Shippo. That's a nice touch. I also like it that Shippo kept his love of art. Good call in alternating the Yash/InuYasha names. That helps me follow the story easier. The whole time travel thing is touchy; I don't know how you authors do it. :) Thanks for brightening up my lunch hour.
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2008 00:03 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry I messed up Kaz's name in my last review. I still think Kaz is going to beat our beloved hanyou upside the head so he opens his eyes and sees Kagome never stopped loving him.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2008 04:46 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
im happy that they got to talk to each other ^^ it made Inuyasha better but hes sure still going through hell lol
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