| "Paradox: The Power of Letting Go" Reviews/Comments [ 128 ] |
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Reviewed By: kt On: January 15, 2008 16:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the story so far, although you do get lost once in a while. But I have a theory, and I hope it's right! So update soon, k? :D
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Reviewed By: buzzk97 On: January 14, 2008 21:29 CST
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I am really enjoying your story! It is very good and I like the detail that has gone into it. I was hoping that InuYasha and Kagome were going to met again while she was working. I really am looking forward to your next update so please make it soon!
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Reviewed By: Ichigohime [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2008 16:02 CST
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Please update soon! I love this story so far, as sad as it is in the beginning. I know its only going to be better from here! I love it!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2008 04:17 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... so they finally meet in the future... lots of negativity during the meeting and after it... not to be cruel or anything cause i like kagome... but she kinda deserved the way inuyasha was treating her... she may have had her reasons but it doesn't lessen the pain inflicted... hope everything works out fine though... and i think that the one kagome said she's marrying in chapter one is the future yash takahashi... just a wild guess... anyway - inuyasha has to explain himself to sesshoumaru... and what will kagome do... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2008 03:15 CST
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Hmmm, a plot within a plot....will be interesting as to why K left, and how the feelings b/t them will work out. Will it aleviate the angst, or build it further? Either way, this is great, and I'm always so glad to see an update!
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2008 02:12 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why do I think that it is Yash Takahashi that Kagome is marrying in the future. I like the story and can't wait until the next update.
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2008 11:53 CST
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Poor IY. But glad to see he's made a life for himself. When K sees him again, he won't be that same hesitant hanyou. Should make for tense and intersting times, hearing K's side of the story. Just what was she thinking, to treat him like that?
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Reviewed By: Totally Kawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2008 10:28 CST
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Amazingamazingamazing story!!! I can almost see how the paradox clicks into place. I hope that Inuyasha and Kagome get back together. They're so cute together. ;D Great fic, nicely written and a cliché-plot-turned-original. ^-^ Update soon! Soonsoonsoonsoon!!!
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Reviewed By: geisha120000 On: January 11, 2008 10:24 CST
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Oh I hope Inu/Kag get back together! Its heartbraking to see them like this Great fic!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2008 04:15 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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and i think i'm seeing the importance of chapter one now with the other chapters... i have a guess but i'll wait and see how everything turns out... until the next update...
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2008 04:13 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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good update... ok i think i follow now... in your new chapter the 4th one... it connects with the 2nd & 3rd... and it seems that kagome will meet inuyasha in the meeting... will she recognize inuyasha & sesshoumaru... wonder what the reactions will be... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2008 17:36 CST
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You know, I was thinking about what K's mom said. Kagome did leave him, in a sense. She promised two years and then extended it, without going back to explain to IY. So she did abandon him, can't blame him for his anger and lack of trust. Seems like IY was opening up to her, admitting he wanted her with him, or that he would follow her. Either way, he wanted to be with her. Was it fear that made her go? Or something else? Surely she's not so naive as to believe her own story. "Secure their future"? Sounds like an excuse to me.... K's got a lot of work ahead of her, methinks, to make things right.
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2008 17:31 CST
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Love this! Nice emotional depth and pacing. Good to see them maturing, and I can't wait to see how you turn this out!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2008 13:40 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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good updates... ok so chapter 2 went into a flashback of one month before the first chapter?... what about chapter 3 is that a continuation of chapter 2 or chapter 1?... is kazuki the one kagome is marrying in chapter 1?... what happened to the jewel?... was there a wish?... what about inuyasha?... sorry for the many questions still confusing to me... glad that it's an inu/kag pairing though... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2008 00:20 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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interesting story... but very sad... is this an inuyasha/kagome pairing... and also about the beginning just one question: WHY?... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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