| "Paradox: The Power of Letting Go" Reviews/Comments [ 128 ] |
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2008 04:03 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... sesshoumaru seems to want inuyasha & kagome together... will he do something to give them a little push... maybe kazuki should help get kagome & inuyasha together since he wants to see kagome happy... should pair kazuki with someone else... good thing kagome had that talk with her mom... nice that kagome is thinking about inuyasha and they got to talk more... i think with them about to kiss that the others will arrive for their meeting... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: sins On: January 28, 2008 23:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG not cool that was just to crule!!!!! update!!! please ... i must know more!!!!!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2008 22:29 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
soooo close and you stopped there... NOW that was cruel lol a little fluff is all we need ^^ and awwwww Shippo is still draws.. thats just soooo sweet!! ^^
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2008 17:53 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If Kaz is a true friend to Kagome then he would want her happy. Only Inuyasha is going to make her happy, so I think he should help her and Inuyasha get together. He could always go for her new roommate and double date. Or triple date with his new roommate and his date, someone else altogether.
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Reviewed By: imanewme [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2008 11:54 CST
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Ahhh.... another cliffee.... :) I LOVE it when the author's being a tease! LOL. Yours is the first story I've read where InuYasha adopts Shippo. That's a nice touch. I also like it that Shippo kept his love of art. Good call in alternating the Yash/InuYasha names. That helps me follow the story easier. The whole time travel thing is touchy; I don't know how you authors do it. :) Thanks for brightening up my lunch hour.
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2008 00:03 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry I messed up Kaz's name in my last review. I still think Kaz is going to beat our beloved hanyou upside the head so he opens his eyes and sees Kagome never stopped loving him.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2008 04:46 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
im happy that they got to talk to each other ^^ it made Inuyasha better but hes sure still going through hell lol
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2008 03:05 CST
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Ah, I see now where you're going with this! Very clever, you. You're right, there is only one guy K would leave IY for, I thought so last chapter, but the timeline wasn't clear then. So, yeah, K is out of my 'bad' books now. I just can't wait to see how you turn the rest of this out! Poor IY, you're really putting him through hell this fic, eh? But that's alright, I know it'll all turn out in the end. Again, very, very clever!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2008 01:58 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... glad that kagome and inuyasha were able to have their little talk... eventhough between them there's still a lot to talk about... beginning to like kagome's character in this fic again but not fully yet... and kazuki maybe her friend but he's becoming annoying... he should at least mind his own business... can't say that with him around is helping kagome & inuyasha's situation... hopefully inuyasha & kagome can settle things... what happened to shippou... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2008 01:54 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooo me like this ^^
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2008 11:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think Yazuki is going to play a large part in getting the two together. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2008 01:28 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... i think this chapter was more appropriate... really liked it... after all the drama in the taishou building... it was good to see how kagome felt and what her thoughts were... wonder what happens next... will inuyasha talk with sesshoumaru... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2008 20:40 CST
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Good chapter, but I'm still not liking K very much. Glad to see her realizing her mistakes, her fears. I think this was a better choice, than the 'blow up' you mention. Had you shown that, w/o telling of her regret, it would have been a real turn off. I think she might have come across as selfish and arrogant, and we've had enough of that (in the manga) with Kikyo. So, if there is a confrontation, it'll be easier to understand and accept, because you buffered it this way. Still loving this, and looking forward to more!
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Reviewed By: kt On: January 16, 2008 17:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i guess what i mean is that the time jumps just confuse you a bit at the beginning. There is some spotty rambling here and there, but it's all good. I'm really enjoying this fic though! :D
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Reviewed By: ThirdDemonKassie On: January 15, 2008 22:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like this!!! i read this like everydsy!! update soon!!! i still dont understand the marriage thing! =( !!! please explain!! mm name (thirddemonkags)
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