| "Paradox: The Power of Letting Go" Reviews/Comments [ 128 ] |
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Reviewed By: lil_one [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2008 16:30 CST
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i just read the whole thing... i stayed up till all hours of the night lol... i love it!
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2008 13:41 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY Shippo finally makes and appearance. Poor Kagome is soo tired that she missed important stuff, she would have picked up on some of the byplay between Inuyasha and Sesshomaru if she had been awaka and alert, she would have then pinned a pair of dog ears back to get answers. At least I think so. Looking forward to what happens next.
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Reviewed By: sexxiigurrll0204 On: February 08, 2008 09:21 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my gawd! i love this story! =]]update right away please! =D
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2008 02:44 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... glad that at least kagome is doing something about their situation... but it won't work if it's only one-sided... kagome may be trying to get closer to inuyasha but inuyasha seems to have given up... what sesshoumaru should do is have inuyasha & kagome be alone somewhere and keep them there until they've talked and cleared things up... inuyasha should go see kagome... will inuyasha tell kagome what he knows now... hope shippou can help... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2008 01:58 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kagome is going to fight YAY!! shouldnt Inuyasha fight for Kagome?? and still when did Inuyasha got the idea that Kagome is marrying Kaz?? anyways ooo Shippo is coming??? YAY!!! i cant wait!!! this has turned into 1 of my fav storys out of all i have read ^^
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2008 23:14 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter in this saga. At least Kagome is going to fight for Inuyasha this time and not just roll over and play at being the dead one (yes I meant that reference to the walking clay pot). Now she just needs to get the lead out and make a move besides bringing him donuts and coffee, how about asking him to join her in a walk, or to dinner at the shrine to see her mother and Souta? Ignore my pushing too hard since you are doing a good job with the story I just don't have much patience. :-D
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Reviewed By: darkangel_riku [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2008 21:40 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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oh my gosh!!!!! I looooove it haha I just can't wait to find out what really happens to make kagome marry kaz but this is amazing pleeeease update soon!!! *riki
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Reviewed By: imanewme [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2008 18:16 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
squeeellllll!!!!!! We're going to see Shippo!!! Yeay!!!!!! Ah... the mystery builds.. you flirt you... :) This is so much fun! BTW... As sweet as some Rin/Sess stories are written, in my heart, too I see him as "Daddy" to Rin. :)Gotta agree with you there.
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Reviewed By: Hentai Strumpet [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2008 21:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Story. Can't wait til you update
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Reviewed By: Hentai Strumpet [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2008 21:02 CST
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Great story please update soon.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2008 05:54 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
just wanna slap that wolf secretary stupid >.< Kagome better not back down from this!! she needs to put up a good fight, seen that Kazuki given her the encourgement (sp?)
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2008 00:40 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why do I suspect a trip to the past for Kagome to get a butterfly youki is in the future of the story? That would work wouldn't it? The marketer didn't come across as dumb just as ignorant and wanting answers. Ignorance is fixable, stupidity isn't.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2008 00:20 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... kinda saw that coming... them being interrupted... but now quite annoyed with that wolf secretary of inuyasha... hope kagome doesn't back down... and inuyasha better not back off either... question: doesn't kagome still have her miko powers or did she lose touch with it when she became more scientific... hope kagome will show that wolf secretary a thing or two... sorry know that kagome isn't that violent... but maybe when provoked she gotta fight back too... seems that inuyasha wanted to say something in the meeting but didn't... what was it... what will inuyasha do... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: sexxiigurrll0204 On: January 31, 2008 18:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is amazing!! update soon please!?? i love it. =D
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Title: KaPow!
Reviewed By: imanewme [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2008 16:05 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Break up a kiss and then tell me you're not a tease... LOL! Those two (K and I) need to have their heads cracked together. I enjoyed this chapter, and although marketers ARE smart, no one ever said every single marketer was *nice*. Besides, it's okay to let a marketer look a little dumb when he's covering something complicated like genetic creation... (smile) Kaz can work on Kagome, Sesshoumaru can work on Inuyasha (if he cares, that is) and for the love of all that's good and pure, PUHLEASE embarass the crap out of the female wolf. *fluttering eyes* pretty please? J/K... it's your story.. :) But having her exposed as either a j/a or a clutz would be sooooooo fun... :) Have fun this coming week!
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