| "Paradox: The Power of Letting Go" Reviews/Comments [ 128 ] |
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Title: Thank you!
Reviewed By: Rihannon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2008 01:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Well, I'm sorry I didn't review earlier, it's been some craziness lately, but finally I got some time to read your last four chapters. I did weep a little, but please don't feel bad about it. Your story made me feel, and that was very satisfying. I'm also sorry for making you nervous; it was not what I meant. I think the story had its deserved end, just as well structured as the rest of the story. I enjoyed it all immensely, and I'm so glad you're nominated for some IY fanfiction writers awards, well deserved. I hope you do well, and I hope that if another story comes to you, you will be kind enough to share it with us. Thank you for such a wonderful story, it left a sweet taste that will last for a while. " ^.^ "
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Reviewed By: inufan625 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2008 00:00 CDT
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This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by authors, InuGrrrl and Inufan625, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedfics.html (Fiction) http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedart.html (Fanart) Your story has been nominated in the Best Angst category. Our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Voting is open from March 20th 2008 through April 4th 2008 (at midnight). Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ InuGrrrl & Inufan625 Owners/Administrators of the Feudal Association ***Please Note: You may receive this notice more than once if you've been nominated for several awards. They will appear as reviews on your nominated works.
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Reviewed By: inufan625 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2008 00:42 CDT
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This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by authors, InuGrrrl and Inufan625, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedfics.html (Fiction) http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedart.html (Fanart) Your story was nominated in the category Best Romance Inu/Kag Our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Voting is open from March 20th 2008 through April 4th 2008 (at midnight). Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ InuGrrrl & Inufan625 Owners/Administrators of the Feudal Association ***Please Note: You may receive this notice more than once if you've been nominated for several awards. They will appear as reviews on your nominated works.
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2008 23:26 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes this answers my questions about the box. I am glad that Kagome and Inuyasha have such a great remembrance of their friends from the past. I am also glad that you wrote this story because it was a great story. If you have any other stories bugging you to set them to words you should go for it. The ending may have been cliche but things are cliche for a reason, they are true to character and life.
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Reviewed By: Twiknham [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2008 20:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a fabulous fanfic and amazing in that it was your first one. Before you go crazy with worry about the ratings, I gave you a 5 for spelling and grammar because you consistently used words incorrectly, at least 2 per chapter. A dictionary will end that problem for you. They were spelled correctly, kudos for that! They were just used improperly. That said, it was a very minor thing and I gave you an overall rating of 10. It is very seldom that I read a fic that is truly unique in itself. This one flowed well, developed very well, and stayed true to the characters in the series. I hope you write more in the future. I look forward to anything your muse demands be shared with the world. Sincerely impressed. -TK
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Reviewed By: doggieearlover [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2008 19:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't say how much I've enjoyed this fic. After their ups and downs, they finally ended up together, truly happy. I loved the wedding gift that Miroku made for them and the inscription, and that Shippou actually kept it safe, sound, and secret for all of those years without letting it slip. He certainly grew up as well. It was nice to see them back in their tree to end it because somehow you know that everything will be okay - that if she's pregnant, she solved the mystery she was working so desperately on. Everything she had done ended up being for him - for them - in the end. Very nice job on a wonderful story. I do hope we see you get the urge to write again.
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Reviewed By: sexxiigurrll0204 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2008 17:26 CDT
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awwwww! so cute! i love it!! =]] you are great! and i loved this story. thank you for writing it. if you get to writing another one anytime soon, make sure to tell me! i'll be sure to read it! bye! =]
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Reviewed By: Totally Kawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2008 15:39 CDT
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Well... it's (finally, I guess) the end to this story. I remember being in English class, bored as hell, and clicking this randomly... then immediately getting engrossed in it. So much that my partner (and best friend who knows my innate love for fanfic, anime and manga... o.O) had to whack me. Repeatedly. To get back to work. I hope you'll be able to write another story, because it'd be such a shame not to see anything from you. Heh... well... 'till your next fic... ~Totally Kawaii
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Reviewed By: anhimals [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2008 15:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I stayed up last night to finish your story. It is nice to read a fanfic where Kagome isn't all emo and suicidal. The plot of the story was a little predictable but you wrote it very well - it flowed well. I also like your original character who had qualities of a mixture of cast of Inuyasha. I especially like how well Kaz and Kogua got along well. I like Kouga's character and I hate it when people turn him into some obsession stalker! But what I love most was your mention Sess and Rin! Too bad they were not a couple but it still made me happy that she played an important part in Sess's life 500 years later! *squeal* That was the fangirl in me hahaha! Great story!
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Reviewed By: Hentai Strumpet [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2008 08:49 CDT
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Cute but Silly ending. Thnaks for writing this story. I really enjoyed it.
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Reviewed By: Hentai Strumpet [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2008 08:46 CDT
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Finally we learn about the box.
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Reviewed By: Hentai Strumpet [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2008 08:32 CDT
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I'm soo sorry for the late review. I didn't get an email when this story was updated. Very emotional chapter. Poor inuyasha.
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Reviewed By: Hentai Strumpet [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2008 08:31 CDT
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I'm soo sorry for the late review. I didn't get an email when this story was updated. Very emotional chapter. Poor inuyasha.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2008 05:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwwwwwww im 100th!!!!! YAY!!!! SUCK SHIT ALL!!!!! oki oki the ending where Miroku and Sango was giving them their love, i was in tears.... i was bawling my eyes out!! and AWWW they have a son!!! and ONLY fic!?! WHAT NO!! you must NOT STOP!! im telling you!! anyways... i do hope you come back ^^ and awwww this story is SOOO going to be with my heart!!!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2008 03:43 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonderful story... really liked it very much... kinda sad it ended... and happy that inuyasha & kagome got their happy ending... (felt like there's a chapter missing between chapter 18 & the epilogue)... but still enjoyed the story overall... good job... great work...
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