| "Paradox: The Power of Letting Go" Reviews/Comments [ 128 ] |
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2008 19:13 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't mind in the least that you skipped over Kagome's anger, she never stays angry with Inuyasha long anyway. She blows up fast then gets over it quickly and so does Innuyasha. I am very glad they worked it all out and got truly together. Now she just has to drag the conversation about her marrying the "man of her dreams" and how they had to let go of each other in the past. I hope the future Inuyasha is waiting for her to come back and comfort her when she steps out of the well. At least now they can have children safely. I can't wait to see what happens next. And now I am even more curious about that box.
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Reviewed By: Hentai Strumpet [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2008 13:54 CST
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No this did not make up for it. Where is the LEMON i have been dying for. That was wrong of you not to write a LEmon. But i really loved this chapter.
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Reviewed By: sexxiigurrll0204 On: February 21, 2008 13:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
alright. you caught me. i dont REALLY hate you. i was just angered by the fact that you left me hanging! lol. but no worries. i forgive you. =D update ASAP!
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2008 12:00 CST
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Oh yeah, I like sweet, too! And this was very well done. Glad they 'reunited', got the Kaz issue out of the way, and discussed the Butterfly problem. Lots of things wrapped up/smoothed over, all blended with lovely 'snuggling'. Yep, I like.
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Reviewed By: psyco_chick32 (not signed in) On: February 21, 2008 11:58 CST
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*fans self* Is it a little hot in here or is it just me?? That was GREAT. :) Exactly how I think they'd make-up, too. Give them time to get to know each other again... and then InuYasha pounces :) Very nice... I can't wait to see how this works! The week-long visit in the beginning... that was her visit to get Butterfly Youkai DNA, I assume? He's gotta ask her to marry him, first!
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Reviewed By: psyco_chick32 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 14:56 CST
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Wow, I just stumbled across this and it's really, really good! I'm a REALLY picky fan-fic reader, so I promise you I mean it from the bottom of my heart (It's only one of 4 stories I have favorited.) I can't wait to see what's going to happen next... I have plenty of guesses, but for the last hour, I've gone back and forth on the last chapter to the first, now I see what you mean about paradoxes!!! I'm really intrigued... I'm a MAJOR time-paradox nerd so I really can't wait to see how this works out. Major props on the InuKag continuation (that's really the only way to go, ya know), and I hope to see an update soon!
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Reviewed By: Totally Kawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 11:34 CST
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Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while... goodness knows after those last couple of explosive chapters that popped up since I've read it last, you deserve a thumbs up. Unfortunately, the baka that I am, I forgot to 'favorite' this so I'd be reminded to check it once in a while. So, I only got to read the next couple of chapters after this showed up in a Recommended Reading List. Wanting to reread the few chapters I've read, I checked it. Imagine my surprise at the numerous chapters already posted! Heh. So here's an extra-long review to compensate, although most of it was due to my (fascinating) story. If any part of my review doesn't make sense, well... I'm not very coherent right now. Wow... that last chapter made me choke up. That one line - "It was for you. It's always been for you…" - was brilliantly done and so typically Kagome. The painstakingly drawn-out drama, miscommunication by the truckloads and reluctant fluff is very well done and very typically them. Ack, sometimes you make me want to strangle Inuyasha, Kagome, or both of them for being such bakas! But that's okay... it's the sign of a great drama story in my case. Kaz is such an amazing character as well. If I didn't think Inuyasha and Kagome were meant to be together, he would be the only person I'd condone for Kagome to even think about dating. I'm a hopeless InuKag shipper, I guess. He's such a fun, amusing, multifaceted character and I love him to bits! I hope you update soon because I don't think I can stand this cliffy for much longer. This is honestly one of the best InuyashaxKagome angsty (long) stories I've ever read and very in character. Thanks for writing and sharing it. ♥
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 20:41 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... lots of drama... finally things are coming out into the open... what with the rumors and relationships between people... then the argument between inuyasha & kagome... hope inuyasha & kagome settle things soon... yeah kazuki is quite a pain... inuyasha & kagome should just tell the truth... it's getting quite frustrating that everyone is getting involved in their business... wonder what happens next... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 14:36 CST
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This chapter had me smiling almost all the way through. Love the humor and sweetness here. So glad K and Shippou were reunited, and even that Kouga's still around, proud as ever. Yep, IY is a baka, but very nice tension here, good setup for the next chapter. Love that this isn't all sweetness and light, makes for more interesting reading.
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Reviewed By: kt On: February 18, 2008 12:58 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to admit, I was really mad that you weren't updating as quickly as you have in the past and that this chapter had better be worth the wait...and it was. I like the way you put shippo in there too; he was more than I expected. Can't wait for the next one...but just letting you know, I have high expectations for this upcoming chaper too...
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Reviewed By: sexxiigurrll0204 On: February 18, 2008 12:00 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i hate you! i hate you so much! ugh! how could you leave such a cliffy! ugh! update soon! =]]
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Reviewed By: imanewme [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 10:31 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked this chapter! So much going on, but you handled it nicely. I guess after 500 years of home improvement, Sesshoumaru's place is spectacular, eh? Of course the reuniting with Shippo was super awesome.. could it be anything but? It was very satisfying to see Shippo threaten to beat up InuYasha for once. (grin) Rin.. it really is sad, isn't it, to think of her as growing up, growing old, and dying all the while Sesshoumaru knowing that he darn well could live forever if he were careful enough. No wonder he painted her. He didn't want to forget. There may be a lot going on in this chapter, but you've made it work. I don't think anyone will be confused. There was only one place I got a tiny bit confused, and that's when Kaz and Shippo first started spying on Kagome and InuYasha's conversation at the end of the chapter. I thought for a few sentences that Kaz was talking to Sesshoumaru, not Shippo. (oops, guessed wrong on that one... LoL) Thanks for the next chapter tease. I'm still going to stick with my original theory about the storyline, even after this chapter ended like it did. What we know of Kagome's personality is enough to allow me to stand confidently beside my assertions. LOL... yep yep, the time to open Miroku's (not Pandora's) box is fast approaching. I await with baited breath!
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Reviewed By: Hentai Strumpet [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 09:43 CST
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That little sneak peak was eevil. Please don't do this us. I dying right now for the next chapteer. Can't wait for you to update. I got your enail notice thank you very much.
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 01:19 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter as usual. I loved how Shippo jumped in to give Inuyasha any last shoving he needed after the shove he got from Kaz. I also liked seeing the softer side of Sesshomaru and how he misses Rin and his family's reactions to his devotion to her. I can't wait until Kagome and Inuyasha finally get the air cleared between them. Though I have to admit I am still very curious about the box from Miroku that Inuyasha has and how long Kagome is going to hold it against Inuyasha that he didn't say anything and almost cost her the project's completion. Of course Inuyasha can hold 500 years of agony against her so that might work itself out. I am as always eagerly awaiting the next update.
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Reviewed By: Hentai Strumpet [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2008 20:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter but I'm a little confused about Inuyasha thinking Kags is marrying Kaz. here's my e-mail addres(ama.agyekum@yahoo.com)please let me know when you update.
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