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| "Paradox: The Power of Letting Go" Reviews/Comments [ 128 ] | | Pages (9): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 › » ] | Reviewed By: hemlockglade On: March 07, 2008 12:34 CST
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Oh Inuyasha, you've finally matured... Enough to realize that Kagome is such a kind and caring person that she would find it almost impossible to break his heart in the past, even fully understanding that its crucial to their future. Plus I loved his practical side - "pack your waterproof jacket" - good advice if ever I heard it! Still such a treat to read a complex tragic story - like a classical tragedy, I know what's going to happen but like the characters, I'm powerless to stop it. (No, I'm not Canadian, but northern New England and I do cross the border from time to time to enjoy your skiing - there's nothing quite like the Canadian Rockies!) Looking forward to your next update & thanks again for sharing your work!!
| Reviewed By: sexxiigurrll0204 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2008 15:26 CST
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awwww. so cute =] but may i say, that you must update as soon as you possibly can. i'm wondering right now wether: A) it will be a repeat of the prologue chapter, B) be similar to th prologue chapter EXCEPT that there will be more things said, like you'll type out what she says to miroku and sango, C) it be like the prologue chapter but you add in when sh comes BACK to the InuYasha of now,Or D) you separate it into two chapters, one being like the prologue chapter, and the other being when she comes back. i have to add though, i will hate you tremendously if you pick D, BECAUSE THEN YOU MAKE ME WAIT!! =]] have fun writing and conforming these two lovers's destinies, and i'll, surely, have as much, or more, fun reading it. update ASAP! =]] thanks! =D
| Reviewed By: Midnightsilver [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2008 11:53 CST
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wow my heart is really touched by this fic. I so love Inu&Kag! Update soon!
| Reviewed By: Inusbabe (nsi) On: March 04, 2008 08:20 CST
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I loved it! I was balling in the middle of the night over this story. Though I did have a feeling it was Inuyasha that she was going to be marrying in the future.
| Reviewed By: psyco_chick32 (not signed in. again, yeah, bad habits die hard) On: March 04, 2008 06:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AMAZING! Awww... I loved InuYasha explaining things to Kagome. She can't bear to hurt him... but she's gotta! At least now she realized WHY he was as upset as he was... I'm sure to her, on some level, it seemd almost a little TOO harsh. *squee* I was glad to see you updated, this is awesome!
| Reviewed By: Totally Kawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2008 05:52 CST
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Nooooooo!!! Please, please, please, please, please, please, please, [...], PLEASE don't leave it at such a cruel cliffhanger! By the way, the recommended list was doggieearlover's. I'm not quite sure where it is right now, but if you really want to see, then tell me and by all means, I'll try to look for it. The whole "You have to break my heart, Kagome" was so sad... I loved it! Maybe I'm just letting out my inner masochist. Please update soon. Sometimes, I don't think it's the heartbreakingly tragic (but fantastic) stories that'll kill me-- it's the wait in between them. Not as long as the previous review but my review muse (of sorts...) has abandoned me. Heh... XD Hoping, waiting, praying for the next chapter!
| Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2008 02:54 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooo i LOVE IT!!! Inuaysha has a wedding RING!!!! i knwo for sure that im going to cry in the next chapter XD and OMG i know!!! I CANT WAIT FOR VK!!!!! *jumps up and down* :P
| Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2008 23:16 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... like you said everything is coming in full circle... the past is catching up to the present... and after that will come the future... so that's why the prologue started that way... the events happening afterwards when kagome comes back from the past will be interesting... update when you can... please and thank you...
| Title: Such a fulfilling story!
Reviewed By: Rihannon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2008 21:54 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This is the first time I write a review for your story (not that you haven't noticed), but I have had the intention for some time. I found about you in a recommended reading list posted by doggieerlover. She is one of my favorite InuYasha fanfict writers, and if she gives a recommendation, usually the material is worth reading. Well, I just can say I could not stop reading, I was so taken by the first chapters… and I did cry, a lot. I don't think I have cried that much because of a fanfiction before. At first, the chain of events seemed to be really weird and Kagome's behavior (seemed to me) was quite unlike her. As the story goes on, everything starts to make sense, and gradually all of it makes a lot of sense. I enjoyed the fact that the plot did not give away a lot of the details, leaving me with this kind of sweet frustration that makes me always want for more. I loved how you linked the butterfliy-youkai situation with Seshomaru's longing for his little Rin, and how he gave the ultimate clue. It was very clever; I really did not see it coming! I was surprised, and I like to be surprised! Ah, and I also would like to congratulate you for your time-tangle. Is not an easy thing to develop a story with a time mess and get away with it. I can say (maybe proudly?) that I never got confused by the time comings and goings. I think you made it very clear, it just takes a little more attention than usual, but in this case, it was not a burden. Finally, I'd like to say that being a scientist myself; I could understand Kagome's decisions quite well. I'm Latin American, so please excuse my writing flaws. Please keep with your story, and update as soon as possible!
| Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2008 18:56 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I feel sorry for Kagome just starting to realize how much pain she had to cause to Inuyasha for 500 years for them to be happy now. I am glad they worked many of their problems out but now Kagome has to say good-bye to her feudal family and that won't be easy for her to do. I loved how much Inuyasha has grown to be a man of the time, this Kagome wouldn't be happy with the immature Inuyasha that couldn't fit in with the time. I loved how Inuyasha took Kagome for a "ride" on his bike, that was cute. You are tying all the loose ends up well, I am just waiting for the box and the reunion and final explanations with the modern Kagome and Inuyasha. Of course along with the final goodbyes and trouble in the feudal period.
| Reviewed By: doggieearlover [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2008 18:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's rare for me to find a fic that I've enjoyed reading so much. It's powerful in its presentation, and you've made me feel the heartache of both InuYasha and Kagome as they moved towards finally finding each other again. I loved the way they each tried to be the better 'man' so to speak by wanting to give up the other so that they could be happy with their new partner - and both were so wrong as usual. Too quick to make assumptions without actually talking to one another. I'm so glad they finally got things worked out, though Kagome now has the difficult task of going back through the well and seeing the younger InuYasha once again, and he has to be reminded of the heartbreak he went through at that time. I look forward to your next chapter, though I suspect we're in store for some more anguish before all is said and done.
| Reviewed By: hemlockglade On: February 23, 2008 14:40 CST
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Just found your story, and it is beautifully heartbreaking. The characterizations are spot-on for Inuyasha and Kagome (especially how easily they can misunderstand each other and both of their stubborn streaks), and Kazuki is such an interesting character - sort of an Inuyasha with a vastly different past, but both very caring about their friends and loved ones, a deserving opponent of sorts. Also, had to chuckle about fleece and Gortex as optimal lab wear (comfy and practical, particularly for Canada, I'll agree)! Glad Inu and Kag are on the same wavelength for now, but somehow I suspect there's more heartache ahead based on the prologue (loved that line - "I-I don't want you to hate me," full of foreshadow). Can't wait for the next update!
| Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2008 07:33 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GOD i should have read the other chapter sooner lol the moment where Shippo had his out burst at Inuyasha, i was in tears... and when Inuyasha said 'forgive me Kagome' was that meant was in what he did??
| Reviewed By: rainydays [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2008 05:10 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just finished reading your story... and I'm hooked! :o) It was very good! I am really nervous to see what happens when Kagome goes through the well again. Something terrible must occur for it to ruin their happiness now... I love how you've incorporated all the characters in this story too. You've really done a fantastic job! I am definitely adding this to my favorites. I can't wait to read the updates!!
| Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2008 14:38 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... finally they're together again... glad that they cleared up their issues... it's what they'll do after now is the question... kazuki sure is an interesting character... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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