| "Paradox: The Power of Letting Go" Reviews/Comments [ 128 ] |
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2008 12:27 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... lots of emotion in this... kinda sad cause this seems that the past got its closure... but happy that inuyasha & kagome have cleared things up and are finally together... now have to see how kagome's trip to the past will benefit the project... and then their engagement and wedding too... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: imanewme [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2008 11:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sitting in my cubicle reading this, even though I have more than a week's worth of deadlines coming due and you've managed to make me forget everything in the beautiful moment with the absoultely touching end to this story. (wiping a small tear out of my eye) Bless you. Thank you.
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2008 11:18 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great addition to a great story. It was full of angst in some places but still great. I am fighting back the tears now even though I know the end I still feel bad for the pain that Inuyasha must go through for 500 years before Kagome comes back into his life. I really like how torn up Kagome is and how Inuyasha gets her to see that she never betrayed him. Now are we going to find out about that box that Miroku gave Inuyasha? Does it have something that would have saved him years of pain if he had opened it sooner?
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Reviewed By: Jessie Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2008 11:05 CDT
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*CRIES!!* *TEARS* OMG! Is this the end? OMG OMG OMG. I didn't think I was going to like this story as I read the very first chapter, but then I couldn't stop myself from NOT reading it. It's just so... wow. Lovely and sad and sweet and a tad strange and angsty all in one neatly wrapped package. I LOVED IT!
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Reviewed By: psyco_chick32 (am I EVER signed in?) On: March 12, 2008 09:03 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*tears* There are just so many tears! This has just been an absolutely AWESOME ride. You know, Sueric turned a great original character (Toga, in "Purity") into an entire line of stories. I don't see why you shouldn't with Kaz :) He's such a great character as is! And then you can elaborate on the awesomeness that is Shippou, more on the time InuYasha spent w/out Kagome... So much potential! *hopes*
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Reviewed By: Rihannon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2008 13:38 CDT
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Well, I'm glad the pieces are coming together. Very nice work, this has been one of the most enjoyable ficts I ever read. It has such a good structure, not often seen in fanfictions. I hope the story will go on for some more chapters, even as I'm sure you will give it enough time (and chapters) to finish properly. Ah, and don't worry about the DNA subject, we are all clear that It's fiction we're talking about, and no one expects a realistic approach. As far as I know (I'm an ecologist, but I do work together with genetists) there's no way to induce a change into a mature organism using a gene treatment. This is a privilege that nature keeps for viruses. There's been some research about using modified viruses to treat genetic diseases, "inserting" good genes in the cells to fade the effect of the bad ones, but I think all of that is in a very early experimental stage (I mean I don't think they had approached to something really useful). However, we never know… In our lifetime we had the privilege to behold how science-fiction slowly becomes every day's life. You may be talking (writing, anyway) about something that could become the cure for all known illnesses, if it ever came to be. Thank you for being so nice. Looking forward!
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Title: pewterwings
Reviewed By: pewter_wings [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2008 22:08 CDT
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As soon as you finish this, I plan on reading the entire thing again, all at once.
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Reviewed By: Hentai Strumpet [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2008 20:32 CDT
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Just because I loved this chapter.
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Reviewed By: Hentai Strumpet [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2008 20:31 CDT
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Finally the whole story is coming together. I loved this chapetr is was very sweet.
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Reviewed By: sexxiigurrll0204 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2008 15:43 CST
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oh dear, that was beautiful. but i can't believe you are making me wait. ::sigh:: but there isn't anything i can do now is there? oh well, please update as soon as POSSIBLE! this is such a GREAT story! =]]
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2008 23:46 CST
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So close now. Still even knowing how this ends, it breaks my heart to think of her leaving him then. Very powerful story, wonderfully told. I'm always so glad to see an update from you.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2008 22:24 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... so that was the missing piece the engagement ring... feel happy for kagome & yash but also feel sad for feudal inuyasha... guess that's why it's a paradox... what will happen when kagome brings back the butterfly dna... it's almost done isn't it... will have to close some loose ends like the project, kazuki... and how kagome will deal with the lady wolf that wanted inuyasha for herself... then their wedding... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2008 21:18 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i swear i could have fainted at the end.... what a way to end the chapter >.< when i get a idea, ill tell you about the story right away :P
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Reviewed By: imanewme [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2008 18:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautiful. Simply beautiful. Poor Inuyasha sending Kagome in to break his heart. *sigh* It's just the whole sweetness of it all. It's a great love story. I look forward to seeing what Inuyasha needs from Kagome's mom.
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Reviewed By: Hentai Strumpet [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2008 15:32 CST
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Loving it. About the lemon, I'll live.Finally I understand the first two chapters.
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