| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] |
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2009 12:30 PST
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This chapter kinda hit really close to home right now; we've had a lot of differences with my aunt that just passed so some of the things Evan was saying threw me in for a shock for a few! I'm glad that V was able to try to comfort him though!
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Reviewed By: 3427 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2009 09:50 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
miss will die because her life span is tied to diet.. but I think she will come out and say that evan was protecting diet before she dies, and evan may adopt danny just as sam did tanny. additional angst will be if miss is pregant too... but maybe that can be an out of her dying? human and pregnant combo?
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Reviewed By: CandyEars [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2009 08:34 PST
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I always wondered if Miss was a youkai too - but she said Diet told her they don't die - so she's not one and won't die - why did Evan say Daniel will lose her too? Because he will out live her? A little confused there. Poor Evan. Maybe now he knows V cares for him he'll reveal his true status as a youkai... So sad..
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Title: Inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2009 00:38 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn, out of all the things going on, I did not see all that coming. Ah man...
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Reviewed By: raebeyy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2009 19:50 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i've been reading ever since the first purities and metamorphosis and i have got to say as a teenage anime junkie your writing is amazing ! i get so enthralled and sucked in its hard ta escape. please keep it up! and this chapter ... the emotion in it is so raw you can feel it ! more please!
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Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2009 15:37 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Evan.... that has to be one of the most traumatizing things he's had to deal with. I mean Diet was his BEST friend. I sympathize with V though... I hate that feeling of helplessness. It eats at you and you end up feeling worthless because you can't console someone no matter how hard you try. I hope Miss is ok... and Daniel... and Evan. Keep up the great work! This is by far my FAVORITE out of the purity series. ~MSMND
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2009 14:54 PST
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aw. more please
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Reviewed By: indigorrain [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2009 14:02 PST
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Wow,I feel so bad for Evan. So this does mean that Miss is going to die? I wonder what will happen to Daniel
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2009 14:01 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice chapter... "Valerie found herself at a loss when everything that she could say or do seemed so trite, so shallow, so meaningless..." I so understand... my brothers Girlfriend's father died of Cancer last year and that was exactly what was running threw my mind and my brothers... I wonder... does V REALISE that she LOVES HIM??? (better question, how can she not???)
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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2009 12:54 PST
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I totally forgot that Miss will soon die too because her mate died ;___; asdfghjkl;'! this is getting so upsetting! ;__; when Evan finds the guy who shot them, buddy is TOAST! uvwaljhbflhjb (MOAR keyboard mashing)
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Title: Chapter 45
Reviewed By: Ryo5492 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2009 12:27 PST
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omg sooo sad=( wahh dieter...so noble! and both miss and dieter will be dead cuz of the mate thing huh....awww poor daniel=( great chapterXD i cant wait for more stuff to happen between V and evan...or when V finds out evan is a youkai! update soon=D
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Title: Chapter 45: Yes, V DID say "You matter to me, Evan" didn't she! **fangirl squee**
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2009 11:06 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, between the angst and cuddling, I'm a near-sobbing mess here. Gawd, it's all so...so...[sniff]...I dunno. DEEP? Those flashbacks were KILLING me while they were educating me. But, V's letting her guard down was expected in some instances and a little surprising in others. Suddenly so touchy-feely and poor Evan isn't even cognizant enough to appreciate a good chest snuggle--okay, I'll be good, I know he's MAJORLY preoccupied. Even his YV was quiet...go fig. But, it's chapters like this that make me misty in more ways than one. And, damn, Evan's guilt got to me. I'm so sad Miss is gonna die, too...
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Title: Chapter 44: The chapter that made me go "Oh, Kami..."
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2009 10:55 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DIETER! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!! And I just finished sewing my Diet squishie, too! GAWD, Sue, ya KILLIN' me here! Oh and that talk Evan had with Miss...got me right in the throat and SQUEEZED!!!!!!!! Yes, I'm requesting it, Sue--I need a hug! GIMME!!! BUT, Evan's back (HUZZAH for V, poor baby...) and that glomp of hers was EPIC!!! I reread it numerous times, lemme tell ya! Oh, this CHAPTER, Sue! I...need a moment...and 47 seconds...
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Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2009 10:36 PST
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For Evan to have been there, to have seen that, and then to have turned to V for his comfort, for a safe haven in the storm...It says a lot for them both. The emotion is engaging, consuming, and you have me wanting for more.
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Reviewed By: DonthatemecuzImbeautiful [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2009 10:09 PST
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I definetely just scared nearly everyone in my Journalism class considering I am now sobbing all over the keyboard for what appears to be no good reason, lol. Honestly, what Evan's going through...his pain is just so real. I really hope there's a way for him to come to terms with Diet's death. Somehow I just know he's blaming himself...
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